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"So, what now?" Yugi asked.
"Now, is a good time for a break out," Yami answered.
"Really?"
Yami nodded.
"Here's what I need you need to do," he said and began explaining his plan.
"Yugi! YUGI! Ugg where is that little brat," Marik said, fuming. He stormed down the hallway toward the servants dorm. He burst into the room and saw every one of them gathered around a single bed. Jeremy, Yugi's only friend turned to Marik.
"Marik, you have to help him. He's suddenly fallen ill and we don't know whats wrong with him."
"Fine, fine. Just move." The boys didn't move. "I said MOVE!" he yelled and they scattered. He moved closer to little Yugi. He did look pretty bad. He was whiter than paper and his breath was shallow. And in his hands was the Millenium Puzzle.
'How could he have found it?! I thought I smashed that thing ten years ago! I'll just take it from him. I could care less if he died or not.'
Marik studied the puzzle. Yugi's eye opened just enough for him to see Marik. His attention was on the puzzle. He felt the puzzle being lifted from his hands and Marik turned away.
'That's it. keep on turning.'
Yugi shifted his legs into position. Marik was halfway across the room when Yami gave the command.
'NOW!'
Yugi sprung, wielding a full roll of ducktape. His aim held true and he landed right on top of Marik, and ducktaped his mouth shut before he could scream. He tore the Millenium Puzzle out of his hands and slipped it over his head. Yugi put him on the door, and ducktaped him there with ease. He laughed at Marik. He went over to his bed and pulled out a cardboard box. He pulled out ten darts. He threw one and it grazed Marik's left ear.
"That's for year one." Blood welled out of the cut. Yugi threw another. This one cut his knee.
"That's for year two." Yugi threw all eight darts he had taken from the bar. Each one made a small cut as it hit, but they hurt like fire. Marik was covered in cuts but Yugi wasn't done. He let Yami have his turn.
'Do what ever you want to him, just make him pay.'
'I will." was Yami's reply. Yami's boots clumped on the floor. He stopped just in front of Marik, who whimpered like a dog.
"You know what I'm going to do to you, don't you."
He nodded.
Yami smiled and Marik panicked. The look in Yami's eyes scared him. Marik tried to scream.
"No one can hear you, Marik." Yami picked up his right foot, and planted the heel of his boot in Marik's crotch. Marik squealed.
"Marik, ten years ago you severed the connection I had with Yugi. Since then my hatred for you has boiled over. And your about to feel it all." Yami kicked him again, and again, and again. Soon his anger died and he was satisfied that the punishment he dealt was equal to the pain he felt all those years.
"I'm leaving now, taking Yugi with me." He walked over to Yugi's bed and picked up Yugi's box. "Goodbye and best of bad luck, you son of a sphinx." Yami opened the window and jumped out.