Ok so no one voted so ill go with Boxie. ENJOY!
Danny stepped out of the bus and groaned. His parents had tried to dress up like "normal" people at his request. Lets just say it wasn't such a good idea.
His dad was wearing blue overalls over his orange jumpsuit and a polka dot bow tie. His already large frame was made larger with ghost weapons sticking out of every pocket he had. His mom was alright (she wore a plain blue t-shirt and blue jeans with black flats.) but she had the specter deflector on. He made a mental note to stay at least 3 feet away from her.
" Alright kids follow me!" his dad said in his booming voice startling some kids.( they had been silently laughing at his outfit.)
"Danny ,honey, you forgot your lunch!" his mom yelled over the noise, holding his old lunch box up high for all to see. There was a reason he ate school lunch. He got his lunch box at six and at the time he thought it was cool. It was a tin box that had the Telly Tubies ( A/N don't own em`) on the front. Dash and his cronies laughed at the sight of it. Danny just sighed and went up and took it.
Down in the basement his dad stood proudly in front of the specter speeder that recently had an update it now looked like a specter school bus. Mr. Lancer was rushing kid inside.
" Hurry, hurry we have to get back to the school by five! MOVE IT!" as soon as Danny was ushered inside he sat in a seat buy Sam and Tucker. The new girl sat beside them and tucker turned on the old Foley charm. She politely turned him down and said nothing afterwords. Soon they were all flying through the ghost zone. Danny slumped in his seat ignoring all the oos and ahs of his classmates and sulked. He was very worried about his classes well being. Maybe it was just his hero complex but he had a bad feeling about this trip and it wasn't just because his dad was behind the wheel. Suddenly his ghost sense went off and he whipped his head around. Outside the bus was Skulker, his arm was raised, and a cannon was coming out. Before he could do anything about it, he fired and the specter speeder went down. Danny panicked and tried to transform to save it but someones flailing arm hit his head and knocked him out.
Thisisalinebreak.
When Danny awoke he was trapped under a seat. He used a little super strength to heave it off. After he sat up it took him a while to remember what happened. When he did he panicked and searched for everyone. It took him a while to find everyone but he did and they where all safe if not with a few scratches and bruises. The only one who seemed to come out completely unharmed was the new girl, Angel, who insisted she was protected by a piece of seat that had ripped off and shielded her from the worst of it. Danny was still suspicious but he let it go.
As soon as he finished checking to see if every on was really ok, Danny stood on a rock and cleared his throat. Everyone quieted down curious about what he had to say.
"Alright everyone we have a long walk ahead of us, about four days, maybe five."
"How do you know? You haven't been here before?"
"Actually Palina I have."
"WHAT? DANIEL FENTON, WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU HAVE BEEN HERE BEFORE!" both his parents bellowed there combined voices loud enough to wake the dead.(A/N pun intended. ;))
Danny winced and looked up into his parents angry faces.
" Well mom remember you and dads anniversary? Well I accidentally knocked your present in to the ghost zone and went in here to get it back. I came back a couple times and made some friends. And enemies. He said the last part in an undertone but sadly, his parents heard.
"ENEMIES!"
" Its ok really nothing major."
" NOTHING MAJOR! SOME STINKEN` GHOSTS ARE OUT TO GET MY LITTLE BOY!" Danny's mom screamed. Practically to the point of hysteria.
" Mom, mom its ok most of them gave up a while a go." Danny lied.
"*Sniff* really?"
" Yes mom."
"Hey son, how well do you know this dimension?"
" Like the back of my hand. Why?"
"Do you think you could lead us out?"
" Sure dad."
TIMESKIP
It had been two hours since they started off and Palina hadn't stopped whining the entire time.
" Danny can we stop now?"
" No Palina."
"But my feet hurt!" she whined sounding exactly like a six year old brat.
" Then you shouldn't have worn high heels."
" I was hoping to meet the ghost boy."
Danny just rolled his eyes.
Well you wont be seeing him the entire trip if I can help it. He thought.
We haven't seen a ghost in a while maybe they gave up.
Suddenly his ghost sense went off.
Nice going Fenton. He thought. Then he stopped everyone and pulled out a Fenton thermos then gave wrist rays to Sam and Tucker and got in a defensive pose. They stayed like that for three seconds then suddenly a ghostly being materialized from thin air. He had blue skin blue overalls and a little cap thing on his head. The ghost turned to the class and shouted "BEWARE!" The class screamed but Danny visibly relaxed and took a small step for word uncapping the Fenton thermos as he went.
" BEWARE!" The ghost shouted again."For I am the Box Ghost controller of all things cardboard and square! I have come back for my cardboard vengeance!" he shouted to the sky.
Danny just looked at him annoyed. " Wont you ever give up?" he yelled and sucked him into the thermos. "I will get my revenge!"
"Ya ya you say that every time."
He turned back to his class to see them gaping at him.
"What?"
So what did you think? Was it long enough? Were the characters OOC? Read and review. B out peace.
