thank you everyone for your reviews, For those of you complaining about the grammer I meant for it to be like how the greasers think and speak in slang ex. aint instead of isn't or ya'all or C'mon stuff like that! I know the story has started slow and there isnt much speaking but I'm just trying to get everybody to undersand Erica as a character since she isnt in the book and how differently the Curtis' brothers act and are because of her thats why its mostly thoughts so far. I have big plans for the story so please keep faith in me and I will take your reviews into consideration while I write. I dont own anything...So onward with the story:)
Chapter 3
Erica's POV
I hate school I really really hate it! It's stupid and boring! And its worse because I have no one to talk to or play with after mommy and daddy went to live with Jesus in heaven I feel real sad all the time. No one wants to be my friend anymore they say I'm just an orphan now and don't want to catch my greaser disease. It hurts my feelings, plus Pony is picking me up which means he'll be late which makes me even sadder because I don't want to stay at school longer than I must.
We have been home for an hour and I just finished my homework fractions are hard! But I'm all done now. I decide to go into Pony and Soda's room to see if Pony is done so maybe we could play!
I walk right in "Can't you knock?" Pony askes me harshly I should have knocked
"I'm sorry" I say and I accidently let a tear slide down my cheek but quickly wipe it away.
"Hey its alright no sense cryin' over it" Pony says and now I know e isn't mad at me so I smile wide at hime
"Do you want to come play with me? Please Pony I'm all done my homework please!" I beg him
"No." he says flatly
"Why"
"Because I don't want to plus I am not done I get more homework than you" he explains
"Ok" I leave and go down to see the Dallas and Johnny are gone must have left while I was doing my homework. I go back to my room to play with my dolls.
A little while later I hear a knock on my door and Darry's head pops in.
"Hey baby" he says smiling at me. I smile right back and get up to run to him. Darry really loves me hes always taking care of me and stuff Pony just doesn't like me I try to play with him all the time but he always says no. And well Soda loves me too but he always busy with his friends or Sandy his mean girlfriend so I only see him in the mornings and dinner so we don't hang out. But Darry is always home with me he reads to me teaches me how to cook, oh how I love cooking with Darry just like when I would cook with mama!
Darry picks me up "Did you finish your homework little lady?" He asks I nod my head "Good. You want to help cook dinner?" I nod again and he carries me off to the kitchen
please leave me a review next chapter will be right up and it will be longer and I think a lot of you will start to see the plot come into view!