Two days after Carlise bit Bella

EPOV

It has been two days since Bella fell unconcious she hasn't woken once and I was starting to worry but Carlisle kept reasuring me and so did Alice my sister who said that she would be the most beautiful creature and I said she already is.

One more day and Bella would be awake and one more say to see this beautiful creature take her first steps into immortality.

Next Day

BPOV

I awoke during the last thud of my heart. There was no sound. No breathing. Not even mine. For a moment, the absence of pain was all I could comprehend and then I opened my eyes and gazed above me in wonder.

Everything was so clear. Sharp. Defined.
The brilliant light over head was still blinding-bright, and yet I could plainly see the glowing strands of the filaments inside the bulb. I could see all the colours of the rainbow in the white light and at the very edge of it was an eighth colour I had no name for. It was all so new to me and it shocked me I took a breath and as the air whistled down my throat, It felt wrong so I considered, and realised that the problem was that I didn't need air but I liked it. For I could taste everything in the room from the dust motes to a strange almost honey-lilac and sun flavored scent. I could also taste and smell the scent of cinnamon, apple and rising bread. It shocked me so I reacted by letting out a deep growl from the chest. I quickly realised I was growling at Edward and Carlisle and I appologized immensly, But my voice was all wrong it sounded like hundreds of twinkling bella at once.

Then Carlise spoke telling me I needed to hunt, his voice was like saturn but as sweet as a lamb and as I walked over to them I realised we were going to jump out a window and I heard chuckles behind me and death stared them and they jumped ten foot lituraly.


Should I make Bella have a hard time adjusting or should I keep it similar to the story!!!

IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS PLEASE SAY