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What is up guys? CameronNinjaDragons here with the winners of this week's challenge! The three entries were "Seeing Things" by Eugene Wigglebottoms, "Weekly Writing Challenge" by HailsStorm and "Random Stories: Chapter 13" by Determine Artist. We're starting off with "Seeing Things" by Eugene Wigglebottoms.
As I stated in my review, it seems that whenever I decide to do a challenge, somebody decides to kill one of the ninja. It seems to be a running theme. This story was heart-wrenching from the start, with the ghost of Cole's mother following him as a trap devised by Chen. And then Jay gets stabbed. By Chen. Dark? Yes. And after Cole's powers are taken by Chen, Jay dies and Cole carries his body off to find the other ninja. All-in-all, Eugene devised a shot where words would have been too much, and did wonders with what I have out. Eight out of ten, because of tear factor and slight typos.
HailsStorm took a different approach to the challenge, deciding to bend the fabric of the Ninjago timeline by having the first part take place early in the season, but having conflicts that occurred in seasons three and four. Then again, it's LEGO. Nonetheless, the story she created was very interesting. Six out of Ten for a story that probably would have been better with dialogue.
The final one-shot dealt with one of the ninja being in a coma, which is something I've seen before. Jay was in a coma due to an accident during a mission, which involved a rock falling on him. There's honestly not much I can say about this story, and I give it a Five out of Ten for a plot that I've seen before and for typos.
So that's my ranking for this week's challenge. I do hope to see more of you partake in the current challenge, and stick around for what I have planned for my one year anniversary next month. So for now, CameronNinjaDragons, signing off.