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Falling Chapter 3: Rising Courage
From Darkpaw's Perspective
My demeanor did not changed as my name was called" Darkpaw. Get over here!". Growling in frustration my eyes locked in on the voice. One of my jailers who made it his joy to torment me. Redpaw. He was smaller but was quicker. Turning my head to the side I hissed and leapt back as his accomplice and best friend Willowpaw failed in pouncing on me, anger glazed in their eyes. Bristling in anger I braced myself for what was to come. As the two tormentors of my life tackled me, my bright emerald eyes narrowed. Snarling I kicked up, launching Willowpaw off me. Leaping up I raced forward and as she landed on her paws, crashed into her, bowling her over. Whipping around as claws dug into my tail I was met by a angry Redpaw. Hissing in anger I lashed out only to be smashed into by a recovered Willowpaw. Standing up slowly, a new feeling awoken in me. IT wasn't a feeling. More of an action. It seemed as if time was moving slowly. It happened in practice battles sometimes and in that battle against Fogclan. I had time to plan my moves. Moving as quick as a snake , I struck forward, Redpaw's paw missing completely. Knocking his legs from under him, I leapt up to advoid a flying Willowpaw. By now the fighting had drawn viewers, known moving to stop.
Willowpaw's and Redpaws friends and siblings watched, their eyes hungry to see me defeated. Muscles rippled under my pelt as I coiled up and leapt to the side, still scrunched up, as Redpaw lashed out. As he leapt backwards I released all the tension, and in one leap, shot out and careened into him with much force. Grunting his eyes widened as gravity took in and he crashed down, him on the bottom. Scrambling off I looked around, the tight nit group of apprentices had tightened, forming a small circle. I noticed our leader Talonstar watching with great interest. Hissing in anger as claws raked across my face I shook my head slightly, scattering crimson drops of blood, splattering the ground like rain. Leaping forward I twisted to the side as Willowpaw leapt to meet me. Unsheathing my claws, I dragged them along her side and pushed off at the end, separating us. My landing however was awful and I landed on my side and rolled, pain racking through my body. I was at my limit, and my old wounds had opened up again. Sprawled out i shuddered with pain and passed out to the faint cheer of my tormentors and their friends. I would never forget this. Just would be mine. But Talonstar had seen something. I had risen up with courage.
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