Patricia's POV:

OK! This is getting crazy. First, I say yes to a proposal (which was kind of romantic of Eddie!) and now Fabian and Joy!

"What are you doing here Fabian and Joy!" shouted Eddie, "You read my notebook didn't you. I thought I could trust you but then you blurt it out to Joy! Thanks a lot." Eddie seemed quite angry. No, in fact, he was raging!

Eddie's POV:

How could Fabian do such thing! I'm so angry with him. Just they wait until we get back to the house. They are going to have to explain themselves fair and square. To tell Patricia I was still on board with this marriage thing, I held hands with her and smiled at her.

"We should probably get back to the house- who knows when it could pin drop time."I whispered in her ear. She nodded at me so we made the escape for the door. Fabian and Joy got in the same taxi as us, since we were going to the same place. And because I was rather upset, HE was paying this time.

Patricia, Eddie, Fabian and Joy arrive at the house.

Still Eddie's POV:

"Spill the beans you two. What's been going on?"I asked them

"Ok, I wanted to know more about the whole Peddie situation so I went to Fabian for answers. At first, Fabian didn't want to go swooping through your stuff but I begged him so he found out where you guys were going by your 'not so hidden' notebook. It was my entire fault, blame me. And, by the way, congratulations!"replied Joy quickly whilst pointing at Patricia's new engagement ring.

"OK, I understand. But next time ask me before going through my things!"I replied.

Victor comes down the stairs. "It is 10 o'clock! You have five minutes precisely and then I do not want to hear a pin. Drop." Everyone rushes into their rooms before Victor goes back into his office.

Is this good guys because I am writing a fair amount but it isn't receiving much readers. Should I carry on? Should I include more Anubis residents in the story?