Date: April 13, 2014
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cdpdoodler chapter 2
Could you make Jay a little punnier? Like, for example, when the rest of the ninja find out about his decision, you could have him say, "Shocking, isn't it?" Because... he's the ninja of lightning... and... yeah...
Keep writing!
Alright… You read my mind.. How did you know I was going to make Jay say that? xD Seriously, I love Jay and puns, he'll have some. 0u0
NinjaMeap chapter 1
Lets just say that Getting 16 reviews in 17 hours is outrageous. You should be proud!
Oh boy am I! The number continues to jump too. Seriously, 23 reviews in only 24 hours?! Then there's also the ones on deviantART and Tumblr. u Thank you all so much for reading my story, I really didn't think anyone would read it. My old fanfictions were based on OCs or Jaya, and I deleted them yesterday. If you didn't know I used to be JayAndNya4ever, I had terrible usuage in grammar and I found myself boring over the story I was writing by chapter 5.
akwardkitty chapter 2
This is truly amazing. I can not wait till the next chapter your an amazing author
o.o… ;u;.. Thank you so much!
Ninjaofmusic-Nya chapter 1
O_O now I really wanna see the new episode...
Oh you really should! It'll be on Wednesday! In fact, I heard from my friend Louis (Zatsmoopy/ Zats-art on Tumblr/dA) informed me that we're getting two episodes! ^^
Information from the author: If you rather have "Replying to Reviews" after the story's chapter, let me know, and I'll put it down there! As for the chapter, well a lot of the Tumblr fandom is calling this cloaked figure, Arcturus, which is much better than saying "cloaked figure."
NOW TO THE STORY!
"The new uniform should work nicely.." The Overlord stated. Jay stood there, looking down upon his new attire. It resembled the other nindroids' suits, yet nothing was really attached to his body – He wasn't transformed into a nindroid. He was still Jay.
"Now, for your task. You are to charge my nindroid army from now on. They are located in the left sector of this basement." The Overlord commanded.
"Alright." Jay simply said, and left to where the Overlord had said the droids were. Arcturus's eyes followed Jay's motion until he was out of the room.
"Is this what you're planning to use his incredible power for? A charging system?" Arcturus questioned. Ever since powering the Overlord back on, and joining his team, he never seemed to question his motives. But this, this was something he wasn't so sure about. Jay had obviously proved himself to be a serious threat, something the Overlord and his team didn't want to challenge. Yet, if he were on their team, which he now was, he will be an endangerment to the ninja and gang.
"His powers can be used for something much more useful." Arcturus added.
"Like what?" The Overlord asked, seeming a bit ticked off. Arcturus was usually quite loyal and followed his directions.
Was the Overlord really so dull? How could he not see it? Arcturus thought.
"We can use the boy's powers to our advantage in capturing Lloyd and destroying the other ninja," Arcturus suggested, not necessarily wanting to share his thoughts about the Overlord. "I mean he was a part of their team and a good friend. He will know needed information we can use against the ninja. Strengths, weaknesses, attacks. Anything he knows about his former team could help our cause."
The Overlord thought to himself for a moment. "You never seem to disappoint me. Yet, if we are to follow through with your idea, I need you to keep an eye on him. I don't want him plotting against us." He decided.
"Of course." Arcturus replied.
"Then it's settled then," The Overlord said. "Jay will be a weapon in battling the ninja, and guided by you."
"Indeed." Arcturus agreed and left towards the direction Jay had headed into earlier.
Jay placed his palm over the outlet where the nindroids were charging and pulsed energy.
Is this all there is to it? Charging? I seriously think I could blow their chests open with enough watts of energy, Jay thought.
"Some powerhouse you are." Arcturus observed. Jay looked behind him to see the white dressed figure.
"Oh.. Thanks." Jay sighed.
"Rough day, hasn't it?"
"Noo…" Jay answered sarcastically.
"I'm going to assume you're not warmed up to me yet." Arcturus guessed.
"No not quite. It's kind of hard to warm up to somebody after kidnapping them and bringing them to the enemy." Jay retorted.
"Funny guy aren't you? Look, I'm not here to become your best pal, but you do have to get used to me being around. I was instructed to watch over you." Arcturus continued.
Jay stood there silent, trying to avoid eye contact with him. He really didn't feel like chatting for once. Especially with this guy who can't even share his name. How could he know to really trust the cloaked figure? He already didn't trust the Overlord entirely. But who blames him? I mean he was the one to take over Ninjago and almost killed him and along with his so-called friends.
Arcturus sighed. "Would you at least like to meet the others?"
"Others? Who would be crazy enough to side with the Overlord?" Jay asked, seeming rather surprised.
"Well you and I did, didn't we? But yes, others, the nindroids." He answered motioning towards them. He walked over and flipped a switch which disconnected the droids from their charging station.
"The nindroids? I already know them. They're just robots who are commanded by the Overlord." Jay replied.
"Rise." Arcturus stated. The droids opened their eyelids to reveal the glowing, artificial, red lit eyes.
"Cryptor. We have a new member. Greet yourself." Arcturus ordered. General Cryptor took a look at the new member and did completed a full scanning of him.
"He's a ninja! What incompetent fool let him in?!" Cryptor exclaimed, drawing his two katanas out from behind him and pointing them towards Jay's neck.
"Relax General, he's on our side." Arcturus assured and pushing Cryptor's swords back.
"Yeah, relax tin can." Jay interjected. Cryptor glared at the boy who made such a snide comment.
"Tin can? Is that really the best you could come up with? And aren't you the ninja who lived in the junkyard?" Cyptor sneered.
"Yeah.. Junk piled so high you can't see the other side. Wanna join the scrap heap? It'll be my pleasure to add you to our collection." Jay growled, cracking his knuckles and stepping toward him.
"Enough of the arguing. We need to worry about battling the ninja, not each other. Now continuing, the other droids really don't have a personality.. They mainly do the Overlord's bidding and nothing else to it. Well besides General Cryptor and him." Arcturus informed and pointed to mindroid.
"Meep meep." Mindroid chimed in.
"Wait.. I remember him. It's fun size." Jay smirked.
"Yes, I do not know much on your previous battles with the Overlord, but I'm sure you've meet mindroid. General Cryptor jokes around saying that he was the last of the batch and ran out of metal." The figure put in.
"Hilarious." Jay snickered. Mindroid proceeded in the conversation by making like beeping noises.
"What's wrong with him?" Jay asked in a disgusted tone.
"No one really knows." Arcturus sighed.
