Chapter three

Another chapter! Woah!

Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln

The caln is in danger!
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1

No we certainly couldn't. *note the sarcasm*

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw

She had sisters?! Oh, no, more problematic mary-sues.

and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.

I hope when Jazzpaw stops slipping on moss, she is still able to walk amidst the randomness.

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.

Starkit has renamed herself hr. Brilliant.

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.

I seriously doubt it.

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.

The entrance was too camp, we need to call the ghostbusters!

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11

Blackstar: Hi guys! I was wondering if you would like some free waffles!

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled.

You mean Blackstar.

All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.

.logical

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!"

Whoah. You just compared your great-granddaughter with your mate. Creepy.

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant.

No, the prophecy meant you tear the waffle-dealers fur off.

thnkx and ples no more flams

Goodbye, and good riddance.