Here is my new chapter, I've kept all your feedback in mind so I will give better descriptions of the surroundings now and I made the chapter longer.

I also want to apologize for the long wait, I've been very busy the last few weeks and I write in my spare time so you can understand that I didn't have much time to write.

Disclaimer, I do not own Mass Effect in any way, the original characters are however mine.


"Your are always a student, never a master. You have to keep moving forward."

~Conrad Hall; 1926-2003


Date: 21 of January 2183 (Earth calendar)
Location: SSV Normandy (Systems Alliance Stealth Reconnaissance Frigate)

The CIC of the Normandy was filled with a professional silence as Captain Anderson stood over the galaxy map, at the moment the map only showed a map of their current system. Shepard could see that the Geth ship was marked red and the Asari one yellow.

After a few seconds Anderson suddenly looked up. "All we know is that the Geth probably want something on that ship and they want it bad, otherwise they wouldn't have traveled past the Perseus Veil. We know it has been hundreds of years since the Geth were last seen outside of the Veil. The machines and likely to follow the Reapers when they arrive just as the Prothean AI's did, therefor we can't allow them to have whatever or whoeverwas on that Asari ship. Joker, bring us in firing range but maintain our cloak."

"Yes sir, let's kick the robots in their cold metal balls." was Jokers reply before he went to work quickly

Shepard knew that to for this to work they had to surprise the Geth, they did not respond to the Normandy entering the system so the element of surprise was still on their side. he only hoped Anderson could exploit that advantage and defeat the Geth, because the odds weren't on the Normandy's side at the moment.

It took the Normandy a few minutes to get the perfect firing angle on the Geth Cruiser, In those minutes Shepard watched as the other Geth Frigates slowly made their way towards the Asari escape pods.

"We're in position." Reported Joker "If the Javelin missiles actually take down the Cruiser's shields we've got a clear shot at their Drive Core"

"Good, deactivate the Stealth systems and fire the missiles at my mark" Answered Anderson "3.. 2... 1... Mark!"

According to the Normandy's VI it took the Geth Cruiser .0004 seconds to register the Normandy and another .09 to decide what their next course of action should be. The Cruiser slowly turned towards the Normandy while dozens of Javelin missiles tore trough the kinetic barriers or the Geth ship. But the small correction in their flight path was enough for the 15 mm Havoc Slug to miss the drive core, luckly for the Normandy it was a Havoc Slug so where on the ship it impacts doesn't really matter. The 5 flecks of antimatter are released out of their magnetic bottles on impact with the hull of the cruiser. The resulting release of raw energy ripped the hostile ship apart.

"Ha, take that you son of a bitch!" Yelled Joker when he saw the ship explode in front of him"

"Sir, the other two frigates are turning their weapons towards us, they're to close to the escape pods to use HAVOC Slugs and we're almost out of Javelins" Reported Pressly not a second later.

"Launch the remaining Javalins at their biggest frigate as soon as we can hit it with our spinal cannon."

After about 20 seconds of high speed maneuvering the Normandy launched her last Javelin missiles and shortly after that the Mass accelerator started shooting slug after slug towards the largest Geth Frigate. They were all stopped by the enemies shields but those were severely damaged in return

Suddenly the Normany started shaking as multiple Geth shots hit the ship with deadly precision. "Kinetic barriers are down to almost at 20 percent, I'm putting the engine in overdrive, let's hope the guys in engineering can handle it." Shouted Joker when the shaking finally stopped.

"We have to come up with a plan" said Pressly "We can't win if we keep going like this."

"Do you have a better idea?" asked Anderson in return.

Pressly was about to shake his head when Shepard spoke up.

"I have a plan."


Location: Escape pod Azula-5

Liara watched in Horror as their unknown savoir circled around the nearby Geth ships at ridiculously high speeds, she could see that the Geth had trouble keeping their weapons aimed towards the unknown frigate, but for every three shots they missed one hit its target and with each hit Liara could see the barriers of the unknown ship growing fainter.

Suddenly the unknown ship launched towards the biggest Geth frigate while shooting slug after slug into the ship, just before the unknown ship would have passed the Geth frigate the shields of the Geth ship failed and Liara could see something big flying out of the belly of her savoir. The large object almost looked like a tank and pierced trough the hull of the now unprotected Geth ship. Liara could only hope that whomever was inside that tank knew how to kill Geth.


Last chapter I received a Private Message asking if the quotes before my chapters are of any relevance to the story, I would like to answer here so everyone can see, They are not. I put them down here purely because I like them or find them inspiring, if you have a quote made by yourself or just a quote of somebody else that you like you can send them to me by Private Messaging or just in a review and I will consider using them.