Hey thank you to all the reviewers again. I am so happy you have enjoyed this story!!! I am happy to update again. I would like to mention this story was going way to fast so i decided to add a twist. thankz. This is a start to a great story. I hope at least. If you have any suggestions for this story Please tell me. I like all reviews whether they are good or if they are bad. Anyways I had to do a little switch up in my story! Sorry it was going to be to short if I didn't. I hope you all like it! But I have had 99 hits/visitors and only have 10 reviews. : ( Awe. Well anyway I would be pleased if you would review if you visit this page thanks! The more reviews I get the faster I will update. Lets say if I get 10 reviews by 5 or earlier I will update another chapter that day or 2 the next. Okay? I hope you like that idea. Well here is the chapter. One of the reviewers had guessed what I was doing so special thanks to them. I can not say who cause it will give the story away!!
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Only If?!?!
Elizabeth Alice's POV
I stood there taking in the scent. I saw a Burr go past me. Someone can run as fast as i can. I could make out the figure it was a short girl with spiky hair. I had seen her before on the edge of the forest one day when i was taking a jog in the forest. I decided to follow the unfamiliar scent into the forest. I ran as fast as i could all over the place cause the scent went all different ways. It was as if someone knew I was coming so decided to run to throw me off track. I ran after the scent and i soon reached a meadow.
The meadow was beautiful but i smelled two scents. First the scent that I did not recognize, and then i could barely smell it, but the second scent was of my mother Bella. My mother has been here before? I wonder if the other scent would be my father. I decided to stay in the meadow awhile longer. I just laid there memorizing the scent. About a half hour later I got up and starting running after the scent again.
The scent led up to a giant white house. It was beautiful. I Listened closely but i didn't hear anyone. I quickly ran around the house. No one. I wish someone would be here. Well i am here i might as well go in. I walked back to the open front door and entered into the living room. There were giant windows all around it. It was a Paradise. i went over to the couch and ran my fingers slowly across it. I then spotted a Grand Piano. I skipped over to it and sat down on the empty bench. i lifted up the cover on the keys and began to run my fingers from side to side. I soon slowed it and started to play My mothers Lullaby. It sounded lovely but nothing compared to how my father played it on that CD I decided to move on. I closed th lid on the piano and swiftly got up. I then walked to the kitchen. It looked as if no one used it. I stepped to the fridge and it was full of food. There was also something red in cups that smelled not horribly disgusting but good at the same time. I kept moving though. I soon saw a tall staircase. It looked as if it only belonged in a fantasy or a fairytale.
I walked up the stairs slowly remembering the scent as well as the visual. I saw open bedroom doors. I walked into the first one. It had the short girl with spiky hair wearing a dazziling outfit. I examined it closer and realized it was a outfit my mother designed. That made me smile. I wonder if she knew my mother made them. There was a man next to her. He had bronze hair. His face looked like he was in pain and had fear in his eyes. They looked beautiful together though. i continued in the room. I walked to the desk and found a note that said To: Elizabeth Alice. I examined it. I picked it up and went to sit on the bed. There wasnt one. hmm. I decied to read it when i left. Or when i was home. But before i left i saw a door that said Alice's and Jaspers closet. Hm. I entered the room. It was huge. A giant walk in closet. There was a outfit for everyday of the year for at least 50 years. I glanced back at the photo. She didnt loook nearly close to fiftey. Maybe she just loved to shop. I decided to leave this room. What i was looking for was my fathers.
There was now a note taped on the door to the outside of the room i was just in. It had my name on it and it said Please Read the Note when you reach the next room. I then walked up the staircase and entered the next room. It was my fathers room. I reached my Fathers room it smelled of the scent in the meadow. It was amazing. I just stood there at the door about ready to faint when i saw what i saw.
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I know my chapters are really short!! Soryy about that! Its just that i dont detail evrything as much as I should. I already have the next chapter in my head and will post it tomarrow. I hope you enjoyed my story will REVIEW. Reviews make me smile!! and encourage me on what to do for my next chapter. Speak up if there is something you want to have happen or if there is something you dont like. That helps me know what the readers want. Anyways i will ley you review!!
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