I'm going to try and answer all the questions in the review I got, cuz I don't know if or how to reply. BTW, this is my first fanfic thingy. I DIDN'T EXPECT ANYONE TO ACTUALLY READ ITTTT. THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO JUST BE USED TO SHARE IT WITH MY FRIENDS FOR CC. I DIDN'T THINK OTHERS WOULD CARE ENOUGH TO READ IT IT SUCKS SO MUCHHH.

1. they are from district 1
how are they not trained

district 1 FORCES kids to go into training and they
are always super strong and confident because they
are the richest district they win pretty much every year.
reason being, they want their district to look the badassest and the toughest
so they arent going to take the chance of not training one person because
that could fuck their districts image up

Alright. So, they are 12 and 13, so even then, they wouldn't have that much training, but they were rejected as trainees since it's assumed there would never be a lack of volunteers, and they never say they force EVERY SINGLE ONE of the kids to go into training in the book.

number 2
whatis the accident where all the older kids died?
that is extremely unlikely for anything like that
in district 1 to happen? if there was, things would be all
frantic and all that and EVERYONE would know about it
so how could Kaito, the spokesperson, not even know that.

You know how some people hush up the news in books like Harry Potter and stuff? And contact with all other districts is nonexistent, pretty much, as stated in the book. And Kaito might have known, but...Kaito is portrayed as an idiot in a lot of VOCALOID songs I listen to, so...yeah. As you stated, they do want their district to look good, so they aren't going to act all frantic, for fear of their district looking bad. The accident...is a mystery for me to. I was getting my friend to help me with choosing districts for which VOCALOID, and I haven't even finished the guys yet. I wasn't actually expecting anyone to read this, I just didn't want to email the doc to myself and then message it to my friend...this was easier.

number 3.
"A rule she didn't even break. Her friend did. She just took the blame, and the Capitol was fine with trading."
ok no first thing they are going to KILL that Defoko's FRIEND because of running across to the capitol.
there is absolutely no point LIKE WHY WOULD THEY BE OKAY WITH TRADING? No. Their mentality is
to ELIMINATE whoever goes AGAINST DISTRICT 1/THE CAPITOL. Thats basically saying, "oh yeah, since your
FRIEND stole fucking 100 candy bars, I get to cut off a hundred of your fingers. Because its okay to do TRAAADE,
like since YOU commited the crime, LIKE OBVIOUSLY, I SHOULD LET THE ONE THAT DID CRIME, AND IS PROBABLY
GOING TO DO IT AGAIN
AND
GET
AWAY
WITH IT."

NO. .NONONONONONONONOonNO

Yeah, in Piko's perspective, the Capitol knew who actually did it, since he didn't get the full story. He got it from the friend that broke the rule, and it inspires more fear, or at least hopelessness in the one who actually broke the rule because it shows that the Capitol can do whatever the heck they want and noone can stop them. Piko had assumed Tian Yi got away unharmed, but then he sees the friend(Defoko) and freaks out about it, cuz Piko is really bitter about it and thinks maybe Tian Yi didn't get away with it either. Also, I'm not sure if the name was Tian Yi. Next chapter will have more info, but Defoko and Piko don't know Tian Yi's fate.(I suck at planning)