Chapter 3: The Savior
15 years later.
Artemis POV
Ugh. Why can't I find this child of Poseidon? I won't give up. Well, at least father has granted some breaks by letting us hunt monsters. We could not go near the oceans as they were restless. Poseidon is in great despair as his favorite son has gone missing. We were looking for Perseus but right now we are on a break hunting monsters. We kept getting recruits who described their savior a lot like Percy but the eyes ruined it. Those recruits were scouting out. When they came back they reported nothing short of 30 monsters. I snorted. This should be a training exercise. Only then I realized it was a trap. Soon a thousand monsters came. It was 17 against 1000. We demolished about 120 when we had to switch to close combat. Just then our savior entered.
Percy POV
I was just roaming the area when I noticed a monster camp. I saw at least one thousand monsters but only 30 were sent out. I quickly followed them and then I realized Henna, the girl I rescued and sent to Artemis's hunt. I saw Artemis and the hunt enter and I just waited seeing how many they could take out after the trap was sprung. They took out 115 monsters before I jumped in. Compared to the things I was training to these monsters were easy. I was killing monster after monster until I saw it. I knew this would probably give away my identity but i didn't care as it would not stay dead. I yelled "Hey stupid! Ground Beef! I killed you twice already, came back so you could let me get the other horn for the set?" It locked its eyes on me. I charged. I knew how to kill this thing so all I did was side step and swung Riptide which thankfully was licked in flames so it looked like it the flames made it brown. After the Minotaur was slain, I plucked off its horn and muttered to myself "There, now my collection is set." I then used the horn and slayed the rest of the monsters. When I went back to the hunt all i saw were 16 bows pointed at me and Thalia just staring in amazement. Then they fired.
3rd POV
Artemis was just staring in shock. She knew the voice but could not put her tongue on it. She saw as he killed the Minotaur gracefully and destroyed the rest of the monsters. When it finished Thalia knew who that was. The hooded man was there and Thalia was about to speak up but they fired. 4 arrows pierced the man and Thalia yelled "STOP!" The hunt in bewilderment asked, 'Why?' Thalia replied "Because that's Percy Jackson! I know because he killed the Minotaur when he arrived at Camp Half-Blood, took its horn, and killed it at the battle of Manhattan." Then Thalia pulled off the hood to see Percy. Percy said "Hey Pinecone fa…. "Then Artemis yelled for Apollo.
As soon as Apollo arrived he said "Hey little sis—OH MY HADES IS THAT PERCY?" They anxiously nodded "What happened?" he asked as he was healing Percy. Thalia replied "Well, Percy came and slayed like 900 monsters and didn't take a hit until milady and my sisters foolishly fired at him. Now here we are." Apollo said "Okay but I need to take him to Olympus." With that he left.
On Olympus Apollo was healing Percy yet he wouldn't wake up. Apollo said a few jokes to try and get Percy up yet nothing. Then Apollo mumbled "Maybe I should recite a haiku!" Instantly Percy shot up and said "You know, I would rather be unconscious." Instantly Percy got tackled into a bear hug and Apollo yelled "Percy! You're awake! It's funny how whenever somebody knows me and I mention my haikus, they instantly wake up." "Well Apollo, let's just say, when it comes to poetry and haiku, leave it to like, Edgar Allen Poe or something." Apollo replied "Anyway Percy, Zeus requested you as soon as you woke up so let's get going.
Welp. That's the end of chappie 3. I do read you reviews however, when i read them, i was writing and it was too late to change anything. And I am lazy. But I promise that i will try and follow them like how PJOfangirl1218 said: Add more descriptions, it seems like its going incredibly fast and add a paragraph when you add dialogue. I do read them and i will try and follow them. Thanks for the constructive criticism. You can hate. I don't care. Or just motivate me. Both are appreciated. See ya
