rise of the united earth republic

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her eyes were heavy and she tried to open body felt numb. and she had pain almost everywhere. after a few more minutes ashoka finally managed to open her eyes. she was in a white room. the bed was comfortable. it reminded her of the Hals of healing. her mortals picked up a bleeping sound. and she looked to the right. she was shocked to see that that machine was a heartbeat meter. she was in a hospital. but how did she get here? she tried to sit up but a hand stopped her. she looked to the left and saw a human boy, around the same age as her whit a amused expression on his face. ashoka looked confused. he said something in a language she didn't understand. so she tried basic and hoped he understood, even if she knew that was a small chance.'' i don't understand you.'' she said whit a still weak voice. the boy looked surprised but his smile became even bigger. then he said to Ashoka's surprise in basic ''ho so you know English? well that makes things more easy. huh?''ashoka studied him. and she saw some big burn wounds. his force presences was mixed. both light and innocent. but there was also some darkens and sadness. however he was really good at hiding that.

after a few seconds of silence, ashoka decided to ask where she was. '' so where are we? and who are you?'' boy seemed to be in a very good mood. reasoned ashoka. wile he keeps smiling.'' i'm Raoul Frosterson. and your on planed earth. in the Netherlands. ad the AMC hospital Amsterdam.''ashoka nodded. '' earth? never heard of that planed.'' Raoul thought about something for a second. but dismissed it and said ''the doctors told me, that i should tell them when you would wake up so i'll call them now.''

after that Raoul left the room. ashoka decided to take a look at the wounds she got. he ankle was cast in bandage. and her right arm was cast in as well but with plaster. probably broken she used the force to raise the blanked a bit and saw that she was only wearing a medical dress. she wondered who did that. could it have been a male maybe that boy. but ashoka mentally slabbed her self. they wouldn't do that. right? her attention went back to the door when Raoul came back whit a nurse. and she asked in the same language Raoul used in the beginning, to Raoul.''so how is the alien doing?''ashoka looked very upset about the word alien, Raoul bit his lip and said in basic.'' she understand's English. so why not ask her your self?'' the nurse eyes widened. '' o excuse me. but i didn't think that a alien would know that language.'' and ashoka looked very angry. she said whit a with a hoarse voice. '' never call me that again.

the nurse frown, and decided tho ask ''well what is so wrong with calling a alien, a alien?'' Raoul gave himself a face palm himself. and Ashoka's anger snapped. she stretched out her good arm and lifted the nurse in the sky.'' that is the most extreme insult there is in the galaxy. you basically called me three times in a row, a stupid uncivilized cannibalistic piece of shit!'' she formed her hand in to a fist. and the nurse began so scream in pain.

Raoul quickly made his way to ashoka and grabbed her hand. ''ashoka relax she didn't knew that. almost no one, on this planet does.'' ashoka turned her head to Raoul. for two reasons. one his grip was harder than she would have expected. and second how did he know her name. it shocked her so much, that she released her grip in the nurse who was sitting on the ground in fear.

''how do you know my name?'' she asked him. and Raoul smiled as a little astromeck came in. he pointed at R7 ''he told me.'' ashoka exclaimed ''R7! you survived!''and R7 said to Ashoka's surprise '' Raoul also saved me. after that he installed this voice app. now i can talk, just like you.'' ashoka smiled and looked to the nurse. ''i'm sorry i didn't mean to hurt you it's just a hard time for me at the moment. can you forgive me?''

the nurse nodded. ''yes i could see you have some personal issue's right now. what i did was wrong. but you see, alien is not a insult for us we use it as a collection name for everything we don't understand, or know.'' ashoka nodded her head and said. ''that makes sens to me.'' Raoul mixed in '' yes so please try not to be offended by people who call you that ok?'' ashoka sigh't and sadi dry '' guess i have no choice right? so when may i leave this place?''

R7 said '' you still hate hospitals right?'' ashoka smiled. Raoul turned around. so that the nurse could check a few wound's. and ashoka said teasingly '' don't peak or i might use the force on you.'' Raoul laughed and said ''no you wouldn't. i could see that already. your a war veteran who hate's killing people. so you said a code for your self, that you can't kill unarmed civilians.'' Raoul stood to the window and smiled widely. ashoka frown and trow a pillow at him.'' told you no peeking. but how did you know that about me?''

Raoul took the pillow and trow it backwards he opened a window and leaned outside it, to look at the city. than he sigh ''many call it a six't sens. i prefer to call it knowledge of people.'' ashoka looked vaguely at him. than a shock of pain when't trough her body ''ouch!'' the nurse looked up ''oh? sorry.''

ashoka shook her head. ''doesn't matter. but Raoul i'm not following you. what do you mean whit having knowledge about people? Raoul wanted to turn around but didn't. ashoka could feel his mood drop and he hung his head. yet she could sens, that he forced him self to tell.

''let's just say that i have been bullied a lot and i'm still getting bullied.i learned my self to observer people's behavior before entering a chat. i always see a risk of getting bullied ,from where i live.'' the nurse stood up and said whit a stunned expression. 'well if your healing in this rate ,than you'll be out here tonight.'' ashoka pulled her medical medical gown back on. whit some help of the nurse. after she was done she said to Raoul. '' you can turn around again.'' Raoul looked to ashoka amused again. and ashoka frown ''what?'' Raoul's smile became even the nurse asked. '' ashoka? do you want to eat some thing?'' and ashoka nodded. ''as long as it's meat, it's fine by me.''the nurse wrote something down and left the room

ashoka turned her head back to Raoul and asked again, a bit more annoyed this time. ''what?'' and Raoul finally answered. ''your still wondering who putted you in that gown. don't you?'' ashoka looked threatening to Raoul''did you?!'' Raoul backed of '' no! no! no! i wouldn't dare! honestly! it was the nurse that just left who did that. i came in a day later, after i was declared fit enough to leave my room.'' ashoka frown again. ''but how did you know i was here? who told you and why?'' raoul smiled again '' the government told me. after i demanded to know. the reason?! because i saved you, out of that burning ship of yours. that is how i got those wounds. i came here, because i wanted to be sure that you were allride, before i left.'' '' it's true.'' confined R7

ashoka felt good '' i guess that i owe you then.'' Raoul shook his head '' no you owe me nothing. so what are you going to do after you'r out of here?'' ashoka shrugged her shoulders '' i guess trying to get away form here if my ship can fly.'' Raoul laughed spotting '' ha little chance ,the fuel tank blew up right after the fire was out.'' he picked something from his jacked '' here! it's a piece of you ship.'' he handed the black piece to ashoka. who instantly burst out in tears. Raoul gulped and said out loud to him self '' well great job you ashole! that was a real dick move!'' he than turned to ashoka. '' i'm sorry ashoka that was mean of me.''

ashoka grabbed his jacked and pulled him closer she cryed in his chest and he folded his arms around her.'' it's going to be fine ashoka . it'll be just fine.'' ashoka shook her head. '' n-no it will not! my ship is destroyed i don't know this planet or it's civilization! and i have no place to stay!'' Raoul stroke her back wile the nurse came in.''could you come back latter?'' the nurse nodded. and left the plate on the little table, in the corner. Raoul than said '' yes you have.'' ashoka looked up.''what? where?'' Raoul removed a tear from her face '' you could live in my home. i already asked my parents if it would be fine. and they said yes.'' Ashoka's face was full of shock and whispered ''how?'' Raoul laughs and scratched the back of his head ''well, let's just say that it was a well calculated guess.'' ashoka hugged him and said '' i know you now for two hours'. and i already know that your a nice bastard.'' Raoul laughed and said. '' well your a nice bitch too.''

after that Raoul called the nurse back in and she directly asked ''why did you only wanted meat?'' ashoka was happy to see the interest in her species. ''well togruta are mostly carnivore's it basically dependent's on the skin color. the closer to red the more meat based the diet needs to be. with me having a light orange skin it means that i don't need to eat meat everyday. and i could eat other things including veggies. but it would be better to eat meat. some one with a red skin can only eat meat. and whit yellow or other color they can eat what they wand. of course it also dependent's on which area and which planet you live.''

the nurse wrote that down ''wow that is really interesting. is there something special about those things on your head.'' ashoka sigh. she would have been offended if she didn't knew better '' yes these are called mortals. they work the same as your ears. and these are leku.'' she gabbed one carefully. ''they are really sensitive because they are directly connected to our brains. even our enemies don't gabbed us there when they tortured for information. grab them wrong and we could die from pain instantly.'' the nurse wrote that down as fast as she could. ''yea that is really important to know. anything more?'' ashoka nodded '' yes our leku are also very good at sensing people and emotions. that trick i used to hurt you, again sorry. we call the force. not many togruta got that. only three to be honest, and i am one of the thing there are also humans where i live. they look exactly the same as you guys do.''

the nurse looked surprised but Raoul wasn't that surprised at all he remarked '' they are most likely the offspring from the atlantians.'' Atlanta was the name of this planet 9000 years ago before it sank in to the ocean.'' ashoka nodded ''could be. not sure i'm getting a bit thirsty. can i get something to drink? '' Raoul said ''yea! do some water for both of us please.'' the nurse left to get some drinks. and Raoul took the plate and gave it to ashoka ''hmm smell's like a fine steak by me.'' ashoka agreed ''yes it does smell delicious.'' she quickly took a bite. '' h-h-hot!'' she swallowed it quickly making Raoul grinning '' of course it's hot! you should try to eat a bit slower.'' he said mocking and ashoka gave him a playful push '' ha ha very funny. but it's so tasteful and good! i have to ask for we leave'' Raoul frown '' wow your the first person i have ever met that really likes hospital food.''

ashoka looked at him and asked. '' don't you like it than.'' Raoul pointed at him self. ''me? ha i't rather cook my self! and i can barley cook.'' ashoka nodded ''well at least it's better than field rations.'' Raoul looked casual ''cant judge on that.'' ashoka looked teasing '' keep it that way. so how old are you?'' Raoul raised a eyebrow ''well that was random. anyway i'm 16 now. and you?'' ashoka was surprised by that he looked a bit younger maybe 14. '' same here.'' than the nurse came back in and brought the drinks.'' here you go.'' ashoka just finished her food. and gave the plate to the nurse.'' thank you.'' and she left again. Raoul took one huge sip and the glass was empty. ashoka drunk slowly, and almost chocked when she saw Raoul drink like that. so she said teasing. '' thirsty?'' and Raoul said playful'' how did you guess that?'' ashoka shrugged her shoulders. '' don't know.'' than they both laughed. and the nurse was back again

''ashoka i have to check you again. orders from higher up.'' ashoka nodded and looked to Raoul ''i'll go outside the door and call my dad ok?'' ashoka nodded ''yes?'' Raoul walked out of the door and the nurse said ''that is a really interesting boy there.'' ashoka pulled of her medical dress, ''yes he is interesting. but can you tell me why i can't were anything else except for this medical dress?'' the nurse looked and she understood the question apparently even a alien woman doesn't like it to be fully naked. ''well we have run over some heat scans and your body temperature is hotter than a normal human. so we did it to make sure, that you wouldn't over heat.'' the nurse kept checking and after that she made a conclusion. '' your free to leave. you have already healed form everything, except your broken arm.'' ashoka nodded and pulled on the dress again. the nurse said '' i'll get you some real clothing'' ashoka nodded

soon after that Raoul looked around the doorway ''he'll be here in 5 hour's. so we have all the time.'' ashoka nodded ''just come in! '' and Raoul stepped in. and he noticed a small scar close to Ashoka's left eye '' say ashoka how did you goth a scar at your left eye?'' ashoka felt on it ''that must have been during the battle whit grievous.'' Raoul looked questioning. and ashoka said ''basically a living tin-head.''Raoul laughed at those choice of word's ''let me guess he was a metal ashole too?'' ashoka took the last sip of her drink and said ''yup'' the nurse came back in and left Ahsoka's clothing on the desk. Raoul said '' i'll leave you two meet me at the cafeteria.'' the nurse nodded '' i'll bring you there don't worry.''

after a minute or 10. Raoul sensed some one coming trough the door and he turned around ,to see ashoka. he smiled as he saw her standing in a second version of her Jedi uniform. everyone in the room was staring at ashoka as if she was crazy. allot of mumbling when trough the room when ashoka walked to Raoul. he could see that it made her very uncomfortable. and she whispered. ''they are thinking that i'm crazy!'' Raoul nodded and said loud, loud enough so that everyone in the room could hear. '' yes your right. they do think your crazy but i know your not. '' ashoka panicked. ''what are you doing?!'' she whispered again. Raoul seemed to understand and whispered back. wile playing whit a cup of coffé '' ever heard of a indirect accusation?'' ashoka shook her head and Raoul explained. '' it is basically saying something whit a different meaning ,than the words actually mean. i said that out loud. but what i meant was, shut up! and mind your own business!. as you can see it worked.''

ashoka was surprised. ''wow than this planet need to be very high socially.'' Raoul nodded. ''yes well some countries are socially higher than others.'' ashoka looked with a frown '' other countries?'' Raoul sighed and nodded ''yes other countries other word pieces of land ruled by a other ruler, some are good. most are evil. can't say for sure if this government is good or bad. but one thing is sure. and that is that they are hiding something.'' ashoka saw the unhappiness in his eyes. '' but how can that happen? i mean to such socially advanced civilization?'' Raoul shrugged his shoulders. '' many reasons. money, power,nationalism,religion,pride, and stubbornness.'' ashoka looked down and said ''seems like some things will never change. no matter were you are.'' Raoul sigh ''guess your right

than ashoka looked up. ''but i have never heard of nationalism before. what is that ?'' Raoul leaned forward ''well it can be multiple things. and it can be both good and bad. a bit of nationalism isn't bad. at its self, it just show's who you are. and where you come form. but there is a extreme form of nationalism. that can cause huge trouble for a country. it can even escalate in a civil war.'' ashoka nodded him to continue. '' look at around 1830. where the french supported the nationalists against the Netherlands. a group of Flemish and wallonian people were nationalist backed by the France. after a short war. the rebels won. and what was one country, became two country's. the Netherlands and there is almost a civil war happening in Belgium again, wallonians against the Flanders. if it continue to escalate than Belgium will fall apart, in to two country's. Flanders and hannout, a old wallonian county.

ashoka shook her head ''wow that is bad!'' Raoul nodded '' i agree we should be unifying, not be tried to unite the earth under one banner yet they all failed.'' ashoka looked interested ''they must have been heroes!'' Raoul gave a mocking laugh. ''nope your wrong most of them were monsters. yet there were also good one's. and one who has been declared ,as evil as a demon. but i belief there is more behind that man's story.''

they talked like this for four hours strait than Raoul looked up when a man was walking towards them smiling. ashoka felt uncomfortable by his approach and Raoul didn't seemed to enjoy it either. than the man said '' well! well! how is it going whit my little Casanova.'' Raoul sank trough the chair. and said embarrassed. '' dad! please not here!.'' ashoka had to laugh, at the boy's change of mood and attitude. ''that's not funny!'' Raoul shot at ashoka ''ha ha yes it , i'm more than ready to leave this place.'' Erik nodded and leaded the two and R7 out.


as you can see i have gotten a really handy tip from EsmeAmelia and i tried to use it so i hope that it is more readable now also i might take down the first to chapters to do the same thing there. so i hope you'll enjoy and let me know if this is better or if it can be even better XD