Authors Note
OMG, for a while I forgot about this, and forgot the totally sad twist, but I've remembered it now. I will probably get some hate reviews later in the story but oh well. I am very sorry for forgetting, i haven't really benig paying attention to MR until the recent book came out so here we are. Oh and to my subscribers I thank you, i am also changing from AngelicInk to DestinysPen.
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Last time..
"What d'yu think of that Max girl?"Nick looked at Cole, shocked by the sudden question.
"She's Weird…"
"Oh…"
"Yet Curiously interesting…"He grinned, giving Cole one of his rare smiles, "…I want to see how she works…" Cole stared at Nick for a second, Nick seemed pretty scary right then.
"Ok…"Nick nodded, his smile faded, He look up at the ceiling again, sighing deeply and closing his eyes..
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Max, Angel and Ella stepped out of the changing rooms, All of them wearing swimsuits. Ella was wearing a plain red one piece, Ella was pretty attractive for a 14 year old, she's no Max, but still quite hot. Max was wearing a black two piece, the top piece was covered in small fake gems. But Angel was attracting the most attention not for hotness, no she was wearing a pretty outrageous bikini, Max looked at her and rolled her eyes.
"Seriously Angel, don't you think that's a bit OTT."
"What d'you mean?" She said innocently, Her two piece was covered in fur, It was white with pink polka dots, cute, but weird looking.
"Is that real animal fur?" Ella asked,
"No way, totally fake."
"Oh well that's okay I guess," Ella mumbled, Max sighed and walked towards the pool, where Igs was standing staring at some swimming populars. Max looked at him in disgust and went,
"Igs, stop drooling." Igs looked at her annoyed, and wiped his mouth to check if he was actually drooling. He looked at their outfits and laughed at the sight of Angel,
"Cute,"
"Thankies!" She said, the three girls laid out on some lawn chairs, Max got out some sun-lotion and began rubbing herself down with it. Igs said,
"I guess I'm not the only drooler here." Max looked up and noticed at the other side of the pool were some guys staring at her in lust as she rubbed oil into her thighs. Igs grinned at her, "Go on Max give them a show. I could go buy some whip cream for yah, they'd LOVE that." Max hit him round the back of the head, Ella sighed and said,
"Ignore him Max, come on I'm going to swim, who's with?"
"Aren't you going to put some cream on first? "
"Actually Mum, I put some on in the changing room," She said rolling her eyes and Max, Sometimes max could be a bit annoyingly protective. She stood up and went towards the edge of the pool, diving into it , Max sighed and turned to Igs sitting there in his fire patterned swim trunks. Despite the swim-trunks he was pretty hot looking, No six-pack, but that didn't matter still semi-hot.
"Hey Igs, put some sun lotion on my back please,"
"Sure, pass it," She passed him the bottle, and turned her back to face him. She closed her eyes into the oily massage,
"Cor have an orgasm why don't yah," said a familiar annoying voice, She opened her eyes and looked at the group of populars, Monique was surprisingly in a purple one-piece. For once in the days that Max had seen her was not looking all that slutty, Nick was in shorts and a T-shirt, Cole was in swimming shorts, He had a nice chest. Not too muscly but not weak either. Nick was looking at her blankly, Cole was looking at the sky, and Angel was staring at the floor nervously. A red head girl in a skimpy yellow bikini looked at Angel, and whispered something to Monique, They laughed, However something in Monique's laugh wasn't right, like she didn't actually agree with the girl. Max was too busy glaring to care. She bit her tongue to stop herself making a comment and glanced at Ella, the group passed on to another side of the pool. Max sighed and looked to Angel,
"They were making fun of my suit" Angel said quietly,
"Ignore them, their all losers anyway. Who cares what they think, You look way cuter than they do." Angel looked down at her swim gear then up at Max,
"You think so,"
"No Freaking Duh," Max sighed and looked over to the populars who were joined by others, laughing, joking around, they looked pretty normal, you wouldn't suspect they were mean, selfish, shallow jerks. Max watched as Nick stand, he reached for the edge of his top, and began to lift.
…oh…my…god…
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Max walked into her biology class, and smiled at Mr B, "sorry I'm late sir, but Mr Cooper wanted a word with me," Mr B smiled at me,
"That's ok Max, better late than never I say, please take your seat and well continue the demonstration," Max smiled and sat in her place next to Angel which unfortunately was directly in front of Nick. She could practically feel the death glare she was recieving already. She watched the PowerPoint change slides, A pictured of a white cell with a needed being injected, the image felt suprisingly familiar --Author ; (Winks at readers)--
"Test tube babies are what some say is a second chance for a soon-to-be diseased child, however there are many whom disagree, can anyone give me a religious reason on why someone would be against this," Max thought for a moment, then slowly she raised her hand,
"Yes Max?"
"Say from a christian point of view, Some people could say the child was diseased for a reason, that it was God decision that the child was born with that disease for a purpose,"
"Exactly, Now I could go into a lecture about how everyone has a path but in truth I am an Atheist and you'll learn about that in R.E. anyway, However before I leave the subject Why would someone say by creating a child without the diseased or damaged cells in order to save the life of another child that you are playing God?" After a moment Angel put her hand up,
"Yes Angel?"
"Well, Your creating another life in order to save a dying one, and in Christianity isn't God the only one who can create a life?"
"correct, Well done Miss Knight, and that brings us onto-" Max wrote on a small piece of paper and passed into to Angel,
Nice call with the whole God creating life comment,
Angel smiled and replied,
Thanks, Mr B is such a cool teacher, and seems really familiar for some reason,
hey what happened at the Pool yesterday, you were so quick to leave.
Yeah Feels that way,
Oh it was nothing, I just suddenly didn't feel so well.
Liar, Seriously, tell me what really happened?
It was nothing honestly.
Max, your Lying, I've known you since we were three, I can tell. What happened?
Come on I wont tell Igs!
Promise?
Pinky Swear!!
Okay, Well I looked over at the populars and well, You know that Nick Guy,
He took off his shirt and looked really really... you know
Hot?
Yeah,
I totally agree, I mean that six pack PHWOAR! If only he wasn't so much of a ...
Popular.
Exactly.
Sometimes, I Really Love Her. Max thought smiling
I just thought I better leave before I discover more reason why I shouldn't avoid him completely.
Good Choice amigo, I mean who'd want to find a reason not to hate someone. The idea sickens me!
Is taht Sarcasm i detect, Where are you going with this?
Wherever your heart is telling you I'm going, Bud!
Erm, Aren't you a little old for Hannah Montana
IF you were a movie, he'd be the right guy and you'd be the best friend
Who he'd fall in love with in the end, You'll be laughing,
Watching the sunset!!
Angel, there is so many things wrong with those lyrics,
Like what?
One He is not the right guy,
Two I will never be his best friend,
Three there is not any universe where we'd fall in love, --Author:(once again Winks at Reader)--
Four, He barely talks let alone laughs,
Five, I wouldn't be able to watch the sunset with him without having to strangle him for being so annoying,
See why d'you think that channel is banned at the orphanage Ange, seriously even the social workers released the Disney is a form of evil and currupt which brain-washes children into thinking that they can ride baggage carts around hotels and that all rich people are idiots. Even though in some cases this may be true. Sure i sometimes like to kick back and watch it, But if i wanted to watch some real comedy i'll watch Igs try to pull chicks at the gym. Now that is some funny stuff. Do you know how much the level of obesity has risen just because of television? Trust me, we're not talking single digits. Kids are becoming to lazy to leave the house, they just stay at home and watch Tv all day, it's stupid.
...NOBODY'S PERFECT,
Okay I know I love her and all but Seriously. Max rolled her eyes but smiled as Angel started humming the tune quietly.
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Igs hurried along the grass quietly, he ducked behind a shed as a teacher passed by, Why am I here again? oh yeah, the show. Igs peeked over the teacher was gone, he was suppose to be in geography but he had overheard some kids talking about…something and his curiosity got the better of him. What had happened was;
Igs was about the leave the cubicle in the boys toilets when he overheard someone enter talking and paused at the word 'fire'.
"It was the biggest explosion I'd ever seen, like the ones you see in action movies but Real,"
"Really they do that,"
"Yeah, the daredevils are the coolest gang ever, there doing another one next period in the back field," Igs knew he shouldn't be listening to this, it was obvious associated in the rule-breaker gang he had heard so much about. But still the prospect of explosion and fire excited him,
"Are you going?"
"Heck yeah, I wouldn't miss it for the world,"
"Well…I'll guess I'll come just to see if your not lying,"
"Trust me man, I'm NOT lying," Igs decided it was time to step out of the cubicle, the boys didn't appear to take note of him. But the subject quickly changed so they must if, he quickly washed his hands and left.
And now he was here, walking across the fields to some bad boy group. What would Max say if she knew he was ditching class right now? He stopped to think of her reaction for a moment, then shuddered in slight fear. Max is very scary when mad. Igs stood there for a moment, Go see the awesome explosions and have the once in a lifetime experience watching the daredevils in action and afterwards get the stuff kicked outta me by Max Or go back get a detention for ditching the beginning of class and just get a bit of a moan. Then he heard a light BOOM, in the distance grinning, he sprinted towards the noise, forgetting about Max.
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Cole stood amongst the flames silently, his face grinning in awe. He watched the Daredevils setting up the ramps, They wouldn't…Then he heard the motorcycles being revved in the distance. His genuinely happy smile widened at the prospect of the next event. He looked around to talk to nick, but remembered Nick wasn't there. Nick hated the Daredevils, and they hated him. Cole knew why, He sighed, and wondered how mad Nick would be if he knew he came here. No one in the popular gang came here, Only rebels, punks and others. He was alone. He sighed and stared into the sea of flames, The ramps were almost finished, one of the daredevils stepped forward with a bullhorn. "Anyone willing to ride the ramp will receive a tenner from Us" So the daredevils weren't dangerous enough to do it. "Of course we're going to give you a demonstration first." Oh maybe they were.
The ramp was finished, and motorcycle roared slightly, as a helmeted daredevils sat in the seat, he revved a few times, then went. Cole watched in amazement as the guy drove up the ramp flying seven metres up into the air, the tyres barely touching the surface of the flames. He whoop and cheered with the crowd as the guy landed. Cole grinned forgetting his problems about Fang, as he watched the other members of the Daredevils repeat the same thing. A daredevil with a bullhorn began to yell to the crowd, "Okay now we want two volunteers…" Loads of kids were about to step forward when… KABOOOOOM! The flames raised another ten feet into the air… "To ride through that!" People hesitated, sure it was fun, it looked foolproof before but now…
"I'll do it," A guy said from the other side of the spectators, it was a red head. The guy who hung with the new kids, Jeff or something. Cole saw the sheer excitement on the guys face, he didn't even appear fearful. Cole looked at the flames, they were so…awesome. "Me too," He yelled, stepping forward. He grinned at the daredevil, pretended not to care about the risk he was about to take. The daredevil nodded at them,
"OKAY these two are gonna ride the MEGA RAMP!" The ramp was being built higher. Cole watched and then glanced to the Red head, who looked at him silently. Slowly the red head grinned and stepped up to him,
"Looks fun don't it," Before Cole could stop himself he grinned,
"Yeah it does."
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Max sat in French doodling in her textbook, She looked around, at least he isn't here. She looked back at the teacher, "A presentation you vill both 'ave a full conversation in French, wiff detale!" Said Madame Yarfein. "Now for ze partnerin!" She began two call out names of people who will be partnered together.
"Carl Riche et Sam Lutherman, Sophia Andrews et Bethany Grieg, James Burgandy et Simone Johnson," Sh obvious wasn't do this is any particular order,
"Angel Knight et Mary Pormer"Angel looked at some brown haired girl with glasses they both exchanged smiles, and the partnering continued, Igs wasn't in that glass, so Max's luck was out. Hopefully it wasn't a popular, she looked around at some people, deciding on the most suitable would be Rachel Milson, she was great at French, and nice too. please be Rachel, please…
"Maximum Ride …"please… "Et Monique Federman"
--To be Continued--
Authors note.
I once again apologise for the long delay of this chapter, i hope you like the end, i apologise if i was talking complete nonsense with the science thing, that was my rough knowledge so i'm not exactly sure if it's correct. Also about the hannah montana and disney comments, these are not my true opinions, this was something one of my mates said and it popped into my head whilst i was writing it. I apologise for any spelling mistakes, i check alot and hope i didn't miss anything too major. I know some of my stories lack decent grammar.
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