Hey people, I'm back! School has me very busy and mom's kinda grounded me so I haven't been able to get on much and probroly won't be able to get on much. Sorry.
There's gonna be a few plot changes because I can't make the story work the way it is.
1) The goddess is now a demon.(Everyone still thinks she's a goddess though)
2)I'll actually let the affects of Eva's curse be whatever they turn out to be, besides the hype-awareness.
3)…Actually never mind I'll explain this next part in the story…eventually. :)
Disclaimer-sorry no time!
Now, after Mya's death, Rick started acting up. He started not coming to dinner and inviting commoners to parties! Never mind that Mya had done it, it just wasn't acceptable! After having a huge fight with Don he ran off in one of the ships. To where, well if your good, I'll let you know later(I welcome guesses, partly because it's a bit obvious).
In case I didn't mention before, Molly and Eva were 5 (duh!) when Mya died and Rick was 8. When he ran off he was 13 and the girls 10. Got it memorized? Good. (Ahhh! Axel lovers please don't kill me! It's a compliment!)
Anyway 5 years later Don lets out an announcement that there will be a race in which all can compete and the winner would get to race in the great race of Oban.
With the girls (finally some dialogue)…
"Eva, you have got to compete! If you compete in the Great Race of Oban you won't be cursed anymore! You'll be free!", Molly exclaimed.
"But what about Dad? You know he'll find something to keep me from racing. And how do you know I won't be cursed anymore?",Eva questioned.
"I heard Dad talking about some stuff…"
"…you mean eavesdropped…"
"…and your curse was among those things. As for getting around Dad, I have a few ideas…heheheh."
Okay, yeah I gotta go like now! But first from you guys I need-
1)a new secret identity for Eva
2)plot ideas
3)whether you want me to do preliminary races
4)their first racer
5)what you think happened to Rick(hukuna matata, I already know. It would just greatly amuse me to find out what you think happened.Because something big did happen.Be afraid. Be very afraid)
As always thanks to my reviewers and good-bye!
