I don't think I'm getting Myrnin's POV right. Helpful criticism needed please:D

Claires POV:

I opened my eyes and everything was Burley. My throat was burning, I couldn't move. I heard muffled voices. Then a cold hand opened my mouth and poured in some blood. It glided down my throat and i shut my eyes. I opened them again after swallowing and everything was HD, i could head pacing downstairs. And arguing but i tuned it out and focused on Amelie and Sam.

'Claire, Can you hear me' Sam said slowly.

'Yeah' I said smiling at him.

'Do you feel in control?' Amelie said poping open a bloodbag and walking round with it open.

'I feel normal, but, different' I mumbled and Amelie Smiled.

She pulled me up standing me infront of a mirror.

'What' I squealed. It wasn't me?

The person stairing back had Dark brown long hair. Had curvey hips and larger boobs. My face was the same but My skin had smothed out and i was pale.

'why- thats-' I began.

'Its because you where under 18, your body needed to fully develop so it morfed, rather strange to watch' Amelie said.

'We're going to need you to go to the lab now I'm afraid, you cant talk to Shane, so soon after recovering, Myrnin will nurse and train you for a few weeks, get you used to the idea' Amelie said smiling. I nodded and she opened a portal which i stepped through, She didn't follow, it snapped shut behind me. I walked through the lab, which was dim, but i could see everything like it was bright. I laid down on the sofa moving a book out the way. I rolled onto my side tucking my legs up and shutting my eyes.

Moments later i felt the shimmer of a portal, and could smell Myrnin, which was a mixture of grass and old books today. I felt a blanket placed over me and I opened my eyes and he bent down on the floor infront of my face.

'How are you feeling?' He said before freezing up. 'Claire?' He mumbled.

Myrnins POV

'How are you feeling?' I said looking down at her before my whole body went into shock. 'Claire?' I mumbled blinking a few times.

'I know' She wispered shutting her eyes again.

She looked beautiful, more beautiful than normal. Her hair was now in long dark brown waves. Her skin had evened out and she was a frosty pale which made her blue eyes stand out. Wow, when i asked if she could get any more beautiful it was a figure of speech.

She fell asleep just like that. I buisied my self tidying. moving things about while she slept, but her slow quiet heartbeat kept distracting me. A vampires heartbeat can only be heart by a vampire. But her's seemed louder, maybe it was because how quiet the room around us was.

One of Amelie's maids came in and put a shopping bag down next to claire and a slid a note inside it before smiling to me and slipping back through the portal.

I didn't read it, no matter how tempting it was. I got changed into black tight jeans and a white shirt with brown boots.

She woke up, sitting up and i chucked her a bloodbag. which i had heated up when she was stiring.

'Morning' She said after she drank it.

'Good morning, Tea?' I said and she nodded and i buisied myself in the little kitchen area.

'Who's bag?' She said yawning and i turned she was facing me on the sofa with the blanked wrapped round her shoulders. 'Yours I believe, Amelie's maid brang it' I said turning around resisting the urge to go curl up with her.

I hear the ruffle of the bag and a peice of paper.

'I'm going to stay at a room in Amelie's, But she's locking the door's and leaving a constant open door between here and there' She said before getting up, I heard footsteps but i didn't turn to know she was going to the bathroom.

I heard the shower and then I could hear my hairdryer. Which I have to say, is a marvolus invention Then She came out. Putting the bag on a table.

'What are we doing today then?' She said walking over and taking the tea from next to me. She was still smaller than me, But when she stepped back and took a sip i turned. Wow.

She had a hourglass figure, tiny wast, slightly larger hips, bigger leggs but in a nicer way. And large breasts. She had on a white vest, dark blue extreemly tight jeans and a pair of bright white hightop converses. I remember them being called that from the time Claire tried making me by some.

'Do you have a hairband?' She said smiling sweetly at me, Somethings bugging her, i can tell. I shook my head and she frowned slightly.

'I don't know if I'm going to like long hair' She said sitting on a stool taking a gulp of tea.

'It looks splended. Now what is it you wish to do today' I said draining my drink and putting the cup in the sink.

'Don't we ha- Frank' She said turning to face his Black and white reflection.

'I see you almost died lastnight' He said sitting down. 'You look different' He said with a tinge of something i didn't like on the end.

'What is it you want Frank?' I said strolling over to where they was.

'I noticed something, during the whole- episode lastnight' He said smugly.

'Claire was outcold, but Amelie said she could hear everything that was said. And are you aware what that mea-'

'If thats all your here to say then i sujest you be quiet and leave or I'll re-program you so you cannot apear' She said bluntly. Am i missing something?

He frowned before walking into the wall and disapearing. 'What did he-'

'Shh' She said skipping over to the phone and dialing a number.

'Claire what are you doing?' I said looking up at her.

'Ordering Pizza, Im afraid you'll have to go outside and get it' She said. Oh no, my face dropped and she ordered two pizza's and wedges before looking at me and laughing.

'I'm in the mood for Pizza, Not the delievery boy Myrnin, So wipe that look off your face. What Dvd's do you have?' She said goign and sitting on the sofa by the new Plasma hanging on the wall there with a Dv thing that Amelie insisted i have.

'None' I said and she sighed.

'Could you go to Micheals and get the 'friends' boxset from under the tele, tell them you'll bring it back when I'm done' She said smiling.

I nodded stepping towards a portal.

'friends?' I said and she nodded as i stepped through.

Claires POV

He stepped back through with the boxset walking over and passing it to me before walking out the door of the shak. And coming back in with the two pizza box's and Two single ones of potato wedges.

After eating we laid on the sofa watching friends. Well, I laid Myrnin was sloutching on the end and i was using his thigh as a pillow with a blanket wrapped round me.

'Can I go for a walk when the sun goes down?' I asked looking up at him. He thought about it for a moment before nodding. I sat up and crossed my leggs turning to face him.

'Myrnin what is wrong?' I protested and he looked at me in shock.

'Nothings wrong my dear' He said.

'You're being quiet'

'We're watching a film' He protested.

'No, You're being quiet, you're never quiet. Even in your sleep you mumble' She said smirking.

'I don't mean to scare you, I'm just in shock still. You almost died Claire' He mumbled.

Amelie said you where in love with me, and you sat there and you didn't deny it. I didn't say it. But i felt like it.

I sighend looking down.

'You love him don't you?' Myrnin murmered running his hand through my hair.

'No. No i don't' I said slowly. He pulled the tangles out my hair running it through his fingers and I felt the shimmer of a portal, Roses, I could smell sweet rich roses.

'How is she?' Amelie's voice said softly. I opened my eyes and she was crouching infront of me.

'She's holding it together, Aren't you Claire' He said and Amelie smiled.

'I came to set up the portal. I'm going to lock it onto a wall but I'll need frank to do it. I don't know how long you'll have to stay here I'm afraid Claire' She said. She no longer spoke to me like a child or a enimy, More like a friend.

'Make sure she's well' She said to Myrnin. 'I think of Claire as a daughter, or a sister i wouldn't trust you with a baby. But my point being she needs to get better. I'm affraid she'll need to go to the Glass house tomorrow. Theo will meet you both their for another tranfusion of his blood' She said. Before 'Frank, I know your listening would you put the locked portal on a wall please' She said and I felt a shimmer and then Amelie smiled. 'Thank you'

'Good bye' She said before skipping off into the corner and i felt a shimmer again.

'I don't want to go' I felt the tears in my eyes. 'Not yet' I said and Myrnin pulled me up onto his lab putting his amrs round me firmly. I snaked my arms round his back resting my head on his chest and then bursting into sobs. I felt his smooth cold hand brush the hair from my face and he leant down and kissed my hairline.

'It will be okay Claire. I promise' He said and I hugged into him harder. I finally stopped and wiped my eyes.

'Can we go on a walk?' I asked looking over at the clock that said it was 1am. He nodded standing up. I realised how normally dressed he was and smiled lightly.

'Would you like a jacket?' He said turning to face me and I nodded and he pranced off to his room. And came back passing me a blood red blazor which I slipped on then noticed my bracelet was gone. I didn't ask, I guessed Amelie took it off and I just haddn't noticed. I drank half a bloodbag before walking out of the shack and into the ally, Everything looked almost as if it was being shined with lights, I could smell, hear everything. I walked to the end of the ally and Myrnin stepped in next to me. 'Where to?' He said and I shrugged taking his hand and lacing our fingers together, He tensed up but then relaxed and tightened his fingers onto mine.

MyrninsPOV

We got to the end of the ally and I stepped in next to her 'Where to?' I asked and she shrugged. Then leant across twineing her fingers around mine. I froze up wondering what she was doing but then I simply tightened my grip on her hand before walking out of the street.

She's amazing, not that she wasn't before. But now she is just perfect. Beautiful and perfect. But she's my assistant and friend, nothing more. I was laying on my sofa, thinking of what it would be like if she loved me back the way I love for her when she screamed. Without even 1 second of hezitation I was in my room nealing next to the bed.

'Claire' I mumbled and her eyes shot open before the tears came falling from her eyes.

She was in pjammer shorts, that where very short which I personally thank Amelie for and a vest top with my bedding covering her. I looked down wiping a tear away. 'Bad dream?' She nodded and my heart went for her. She doesn't deserve this, My Claire deserves riches and beauty, and happiness. She should be treated like a queen, She shouldn't have to feel pain and heartbreak. 'Could I get you anything?' I said softly and she shook her head. I went to leave 'Don't go' She murmered and I turn to look at her wipeing her eyes. 'I don't want to be alone' She mumbled and I shut the door walking down and laying next to her. She imediatly cuddled into me resting her head on my bare torso pulling the bedding over me and resting her hand on my chest next to her head. I placed my own hand over hers and with the other arm I smothed her hair down until she and I both fell asleep.

Claires POV

'Up-Up-Up' I said loudly from the doorway. I was already up and dressed in dark red jeans and a black top with my converses. Hair down and wavy. I had on a little mascara and tinted lipbalm and a cup of tea in each hand. I sat on the edge of the bed poking Myrnin, I know he's awake his heart rate increased when I shouted. He smiled opening his eyes and I held out the coffee. 'Could i get you anything else?' I said smiling and he nodded. I drained the last of my tea and walked out. I heated up the bag before poping it and pouring it into a sports bottle and taking it over to Myrnin who had drank his tea and was now in the centre of the bed with his eyes shut again. I held it out and he smiled opening his eyes. 'Thank you my dear' He said draining it all in one.

'So why is it you felt the need to wake me?' He said smirking and shutting his eys. I said on the side of the bed crossing my legs and facing him.

'Because I have to have some more of Shane's blood' I said and he sighed. 'Now?' He murmered yawning.

'No, after your dressed now get up' I said hitting him with a pillow. And getting up walking out the room. He flashed into the bathroom and I heard the shower and I put on the tele where some bad soap was on. I heard the shower stop and then Myrnin's hairdryer and a few minutes later he walked out with just a towl round his waist. It took everything in me not to rush over and steal it. I looked away at the tele 'Hurry up' I said and he chuckled walking into his room. Why on earth did I just think that about Myrnin. No-No-No-No-No.

I turned off the tele and stood up after he came out in black boots, blue jeans and a black shirt with a dark purple sweater vest.

'How do we know when Theo is going to be there?' He said and I shrugged. He shook his head walking to the portal. I went to step through but he grabbed my arm lightly.

'If it gets to much being around humans then make a excuse that we have work to do and leave. And if you feel sick or weird around Shane or even emotional let me know. It will take a while untill you're Emotion's calm down' I knodded and he let go and I stepped through with him closly behind me. Theo was on the sofa and Shane was pacing the hall upstairs I could here him. Suddenly Micheal was in here in a flash pulling me into a hug 'How are you?' He said before steppign back 'Wow' Was all he had time to say before Eve nocked him out the way and flung herself at me squealing. I hugged her back. I smelt the blood flowing through her body and could hear her heart. But I didn't even get the urge to eat her which I was thankful for She pulled away and squealed

'Oh my God CB. Where did they come from' She said looking and my chest. I laughed and then looked up to see Shane stairing at me with his jaw wide open. I felt dizy and stepped back hitting into Myrnin He grabbed my waste. 'Are you okay?' He whispered and I broke my gaze from Shane. 'Yes' I said walking and sitting next to Theo.

'How are you feeling Claire?' He said scanning my body with some sort of screen. 'Peachy' I said and he smiled. 'This wont take long then you'll only need 1every two weeks untill the emotional side goes and then once the emotion is gone You should get better' He said smiling. I nodded and Myrnin Coughed lightly.

'She had sleep difficulties lastnight, does that link in?' Myrnin said cooly.

'What kind of difficulties?' Theo said looking at Myrnin.

'Screaming in her sleep, then crying. When she's sleeping her body heats to human temperature. Also her emotions are worse than they should be' He said and Eve gasped and I looked up to see her and Micheal behind the sofa next to Myrnin. I glanced and Shane was still standing stairing at me with his mouth wide open.

'Very stange. But how would you be aware of her heat when she's asleep' Theo said and I tensed lightly.

'After the screaming-' He began but I cut him off.

'I made him stay with me' I said and I felt Anger raidiate from Shane.

'Are we done with the gossip I want this to hurry up. If it wasn't the fact It was give her my blood or death this wouldn't even be happening so can we just make it quick' Shane said. I started shaking and Myrnin was infront of me in seconds.

I felt Theo take my arm and push the needle in. I heard Shane make a 'ah' sound and then his warm blood pump into my veins making me feel sick and horrid. I felt tears streaming down my face and then a pain in my chest. I screamed and then moments later the tube was taken away and I was violetly shaking. Myrnin scooped me up into his arms and I clung to him sobbing.

'Is that all Theo?' Myrnin said softly.

'Yes. Though I feel it would be much easier for her to just drink it from him' Theo said cooly.

'No' Myrnin said calmly.

'Is she okay?' I heard Shane say and then I sobbed harder.

'Does she look okay to you?' I heard Eve snap. Then I felt the rush of a portal and then it snapped shut.

'Is the pain still there?' He mumbled.

'No' I squeaked wipeing my eyes.

'What do you want to do today then?' He said.

'What is there to do?' I said feeling the shakes calm down, Myrnin put me onto the sofa and I leaned back before blacking out.

Read all my stories from my laptop. You'll realize, I hate Shane. I love Oliver and Myrnin. I have a thing about bringing Sam back from the dead and Making Oliver younger(though I didn't in this story) So yes. I get it I need new ideas, Its not that I need new ideas. I like my old ones:3 But Pm what stories you want and I'll do them for you. Because I love you. ;D Please Review:D