*sigh* hello world...

Su: Akari-chan, what's wrong-desu?

Nothing really, it's just, nobody is telling me about my story... not even about how to make it better. i'm not trying to be a review hog but i'd at least like to know how to make my story better!

Ran: don't give up Akari-chan! you've only just started!

That's true, and i do LOVE writting this story... but if i don't get any reviews after this chapter then i think i'll put this story on hiatus... but i promise to come back to it because i love it too much!

TO ALL MY READERS: this is my first story so please go easy on me! Please review with good messages, constructive critisism or ideas for future chapters so i can have the inspiration to continue! And i'm sorry if i'm jumping the gun here and freaking out to early but a lot of people have read my story but nobody has reviewed, so i got sad!

now off to the actual story! Miki, would you do the honors?

Miki: Hai, Akari-chan! DISCLAIMER: Kukai's-Eternal-Girl, a.k.a Akari-chan, does NOT own SHUGO CHARA! or any of it's characters.

Arigatou! now on with the show! (my messages are getting too long :P sorry)


Chapter 3

C=Carnival

It had been a week since the talanted pop star, Utau Hoshina (Tsukiyomi), had moved in with her lesser-known but highly skilled soccer-playing boyfriend, Kukai Souma. All was peacefull after the pre-mall trip incident. The 2 young adults were sitting on the living room couch watching a random comedy show and eating breakfast when the phone rang.

"Moshi Moshi!", Kukai answered energetically.

"Ohayo, Kukai!", Amu responded just as gleefully.

"oh, ohayo Hinamori-san! what's up?"

"Oh, nothing much. All is good. So listen. Me, Ikuto, Nagi and Rima were planning on going to the Natsu no Bōken Carnival downtown this afternoon and we wanted to know if you and Utau wanted to come with us. It would be like a group date and we were gonna have a picnic in the park near by!"

"Sure! Sounds cool!". Kukai accepted.

"Great! We're meeting at the park at 1 o'clock sharp! See ya!"

"okay, bye!". Kukai hung up the phone and walked back to the couch.

"What did Amu-chan want?", Utau asked

" She was asking if we wanted to go to the carnival with her, your brother, Rima and Nagihiko. We're meeting them at the park at 1.". Kukai sat back on the couch

"Hey don't demand me! Don't i get a choice?" Utau questioned with mock anger.

"*sigh* fine, do you want to go to the carnival with the others Utau-chan?" He asked.

"Well i don't know. I thought we could have some alone time today..." Utau answered innocently.

"Kukai paused for a second, then smirked."Ohhhhhh... i got ya!". he scooched closer to Utau, wrapped an arm around her waist and began to plant kisses down her neck.

"mm, Kukai, mm, i didn't mean it like this!" she barely choked out while trying to hold back her moans."

"Well i like it like this" he responded seductively. Then in 1 swift movement, he layed her on her back with himself on top.

"i like it like this too!" he said with a smirk.

Utau blushed cherry-red. "stop it! when did you become my brother?". she giggled and pushed Kukai off of her.

"it's already 10:30. I'm gonna go take a shower and get ready!"She got off the couch and headed for Kukai's room.

"Can i come too?" the innocent voice couldn't mask his smirk.

Utau threw the remote at his head. "HELL NO!" she stuck her tounge out at him and walked away, leaving him in pain.


.:Utau's P.O.V:.

After my cool, refreshing shower, i wrapped up in a towel, threw on my bath robe and headed back to Kukai's room. i didn't need to worry about any more perverted advances because Kukai ran out to the store to get some sodas for the picnic. I looked through my newly purchased wardrobe and found the perfect outfit. i wore a bubble gum-pink crop top with thick, purpule, vertical stripes, white, denim kapris, a pair of white gladiator sandals with pink and purple flowers and purple rose studs. i tied up my signature ponytails with purple scruchies. i went for a natural, simple look with my makeup. i looked at myself in the mirror and smiled. I looked more girly-cute then usual, but i liked the change. i came out of the bedroom just as Kukai returned form the store. He looked at me with a genuine smile.

"You look beautiful! just give me five minutes to change and then we can go"

I smiled back. "thank you, now hurry up!" i said

He saluted and ran to his rom to get ready.

He came out five minutes later in dark blue jeans, a black graphic tee and a white vest. He slipped on a pair of white sneakers and met me at the door.

"Ready?" he said, stretching out his hand to me.

I grabbed his hand and turned to him. "let's go!" i responded with a smile.

We held hands all the way down the hall, in the elevator, through the lobby and to his green and silver motorcycle in the parking lot. I held on to him tightly as we drove all the way to the carnival.


I was so far off into my own world that i jumped when Kukai shook my shoulder.

"I know it's hard to resist me, but you gotta let go now." he said with a smirk. it was then that i realized that we were already at the carnial and Kukai had already parked. i blushed, released my grip on him and tried my best to give him a glare for his comment. We both got off the bike and walked over to the park's picnic area.

"KUKAI! UTAU-CHAN! OVER HERE!" we both turned to see an extra bouncy Yaya standing on a park bench and waving her hands in the air.

"LOOK! ME AND KAIRI CAME TOO! SAY HI KAIRI-KOI!"she yanked Kairi's hand and pulled him up on the bench.

" umm.. Hello Souma-kun, Hoshina-san..." Kairi looked more embarrased then ever. We all sweat dropped.

"KUKAI! UTAU-CHAN! HURRY UP AND GET OVER HERE!" Yaya continued to scream.

'Utau? You mean Hoshina Utau? OMG IT'S HOSHINA UTAU!" screamed all the other people in the park.

"Oh shit..." was all i could say before i was mobbed by a bunch of crazy fans.


well that's it for now. Even if i do put my story on hiatus, the part 2 to this chapter will be up by Wednesday. In the next part they'll actually go to the carnival. Thank you for reading and pretty please review. I also have a question for you guys.. do you think i rated this story properly? i'm not sure. Anyways, this is Akari-chan, signing out! 3

(ps: "Natsu no Bōken" means Summer Adventures. Lame, i know)