Yeah! Finally the sequel for Tomoyo's Secret! I have the idea so I decided to write it down. Because Tomoyo's Secret is the first major story I've done. And I thought I would never be able to finish it….
In this story Tomoyo is a successful fashion designer. Sonomi was married to Fujitaka 10 years before this story takes place. And Tomoyo has two kids, a twin, Hiiragizawa Hikaru and Hiiragizawa Hakuro. Yes, as you guess it, they're Eriol's. I haven't decided who'll be the lead. Tomoyo or Karu and Kuro. And of course I'll put action. The twin will be a troublemaker and I mean…a real troublemaker…*evil grin*.....
Note 1:
Never try to read this story if you haven't read Tomoyo's Secret...or you'd be no where in this story...
Note 2:
I was thinking of putting the twins name as Hikaru and Hikari...but it sounds so...usual...Karu and Kari...see what I mean?...so I put Hakuro instead...to be frank I've never heard of the word Hakuro...I kinda made that up...if there is a meaning for Hakuro please tell me....Karu and Kuro...I just couldn't resist...because my cat's name is Kuro...her full name is Furaikuroda...which means(?)...anyone who read Eriol's Niece knows what it means....I'm so in love with Furaikuroda..........
Note 3:
I'll be putting a lot of flashback in this ficcie...to freshen up your memory on Tomoyo's Secret....and to make it more dramatic........
Note 4:
Please help me with the title I'm so confuse and blank about the title...
Note 5:
Read and enjoy....and review....flames are welcome...anything that can help me improve is good...
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Yuki Shiro high,
Karu and Kuro are having their recess. Kuro has to stay very near with Karu, because she usually will have a fight with other students during recess, especially with the 'popular' girls. They always pick on Karu on for no reasons at all and they always laugh at her because she doesn't have a father. But she manage because they're likely picking the wrong person because Karu has the most sizzling and saucy language ever that can make people cried. But of course she never gets to her limit like cursing their family. Kuro in the other hand is a bookworm. He's cool and nerdy (he'll put on his glasses when he's reading and trust me…you don't want to bother him when he's reading…well, the only person who can do that is only Karu and Tomoyo). Nobody really dare pick on him because of Karu. It's not like he can't defend himself. But Karu insisted. Both of them actually know martial arts. Because when they were younger Tomoyo sent them to learn various kinds of martial arts. Since they're just like her when she was younger, a daughter of a very rich woman rich that people would kidnap for money or business matters. She know how it feels being followed everywhere by her bodyguards. And she knows very well that the twins would object if she hires bodyguards for them.
Karu and Kuro (of course he's reading a book) are eating their lunch. A boy and a girl sit in front of them.
"Konichiwa, daisuki na tomodachi!"
Said Karu cheerfully.
"Konichiwa."
Said the newcomers.
"Ne, Hiro-kun, is there any basketball practice today?"
"Aa…at 4 o'clock sharp…"
Answered Hiro.
"Karu-chan, don't you think you should act more lady like?"
Said the girl.
"Nani? …And be effeminate like Kuro? …Arigato…demo…no way Haru-chan…"
Kuro stares at Karu narrowly.
"What do you mean with 'effeminate' like me?"
Karu stick her tongue at Kuro. Kuro return it with a death glare. Chihiro and Haruko sweat drops.
"Okay then, stick being tomboyish. Just don't call your onisan by names."
Said Haruko finally. Karu smile innocently.
"My, my…the sudden protective hen…if I didn't know any better…I think you like Kuro…"
Said Karu teasingly. Kuro continue reading his book and chooses to ignore them.
"Uso! Of course I like him demo, not in that kind of way that you actually meant."
She snaps.
"Hai, hai…but you don't have to snap…you made it sounds that it's true by doing that…"
Haruko blush. She bit her lip.
"That's what you get if you ever try to challenge Karu in speech."
Said Chihiro in a-matter-of-factly tone.
"You'd be a very good debater Karu. Why didn't you join the debate club?"
Karu snort.
"I'll accept that as a compliment. Why I didn't join it? …Well I love basketball more…and by the way I have violin and harp class, and I also join the volleyball and swimming club."
She pauses.
"…Joining a debate club is so boring…because every time I get the debate topic…I have to be either be the opposition or government…and the title is always…in my opinion…unfair…because I always agree on half of each of it…and in debate you have to choose a side and I hated that. And by the way, those snobbish bitch is in that club."
Chihiro and Haruko stares at her dully.
"What? Did I say something wrong?"
"Iie, it's just that when you touch the topic where it concern the matter of Yamato Shizuka and her friends it reminds me of all the bad things she said to and did to us especially you. Never knew that they're in the debate club."
Said Haruko in a matter-of-factly tone.
"And please never forget that jerky Azusa Takeru who has been flirting with you. And because of him, Yamato hates you more than she already have."
Karu giggles.
"And for the fact that he join the basketball club because of me. He always smiles goofily at me. I'm so sick of it. Kami-sama, they sure are lunatics."
Kuro snorts.
"Doshite, Kuro-kun?"
Asked Haruko and Chihiro.
"Baka… ano bouya no baka… Why is he, in the first place chasing you, the school troublemaker and his girlfriend's archenemy? And plus you're a tomboy, you don't even act like a girl how did he even notice you?"
Kuro ends his words with a smirk.
"Oh, suddenly the mute has spoken. What is happening? Is the world turning upside down? I'll take it as a very low compliment anyone has ever given me, thank you."
Said Karu, sarcastically as she pretends to look dreadful.
"Kuro-kun that is not how a brother describe his own sister. Maybe she is a tomboy but still she's a 3.5 and 4.0 student. And she's pretty popular among guys here. She's nice, brainy and beautiful plus, she's pretty tall for a 15 year old. What more could you ask from a girl?"
Asked Haruko. Karu shakes her hand with Haruko.
"Thank you (actually I want to write down 'arigatou' but using 'thank you sounds more…what's the word…whatever…but if I use the Japanese word it sounds a bit modest and I don't want Karu to be that modest)."
Said Karu, relieve.
"Haru-chan, don't you think it's a bit too flattering?"
Asked Karu, innocently.
"Well the fact that she's not just my sister, she's my twin sister and the fact that she always catches my 'tail' and kept calling an 'effeminate' person."
Karu grin at the two words. Kuro glare at her narrowly.
"I think that is the real way how to describe my sister, thank you."
The twin shared a glare.
"Well, I guess because she's 'too' (and I stress the word 'too') popular among all the students or because she's like the school's number one candidate for 'most hard to get girl'. And I heard that Azusa actually is trying to win a bet that Yamato dared him to."
Explains Chihiro.
"A bet? Talk to me Hiro."
Said Kuro, interestedly as he puts down his book.
"Now I'm a 'prize'? What do they think I am? Who does she think she is? Making a bet like that, does she think that she owns me? Bitch!"
Whined Karu.
"Karu-chan, sit and lower your voice."
Whispered Chihiro as most of the students from the nearby tables are eyeing them suspiciously.
"Well if I'm not wrong I heard it too. But I heard it from Yamato herself."
Said Haruko. Everyone by the table turn their glance at Haruko.
"When? Where?"
"Two days ago, when I was in the toilet. I was in the cubicle and I heard her talked to her sidekick."
"Hiroki Rei and Nagasaki Amane."
Said Karu and Chihiro together.
"As I was saying, I overheard their conversation. Yamato said that she make the bet just to teach you a lesson for messing with her but never thought that Azusa would 'actually' fall for you. That is why she's gnashing her teeth because of you."
She said. Karu made a small snort.
"Well, she sure 'messed' herself up and manage to make me miserable too. Urgh! What is wrong with her? She tends to make me miserable. By calling me names and constantly teasing me nastily about me not having a father calling okasan a 'cheap woman'. I was the one whose suppose to be very angry with her."
Kuro frown.
"She said that to you? Being the opposite sex is really harder that I thought. And they are a lot meaner, they psycho people. Not like us, everything is more physically."
Claimed Kuro.
"You have no idea. It's lucky that you're not a pesky brother. If not my life would be more miserable. All the mood swings, periods, hygiene stuff and lots more."
She complains.
"Okay, okay, I get it, just stop. I can't take it. That's what my mother always said every time she returned home from work. And sometimes I hear it from Haruko."
Said Chihiro. Haruko blush.
"Look, it's Yamato Shizuka and her minions at that table."
They all turn to the direction that Karu said. A girl with shoulder length curly dyed brownish blonde (typical Japanese colour) hair. In front of her sits two girls with the same hair colour.
"So which on is Yamato Shizuka?"
Asked Kuro.
"The one with the curly hair. The straight long hair is Amane and the short curly hair is Rei."
Showed Haruko.
"Hmm, I have nicknames for them. Curly, straighty and shorty."
Said Chihiro.
"I have better nicknames for them. Bitch 1, bitch 2 and bitch 3."
Adds Karu.
"Karu-chan, onegai, stops saying that word."
The bell rings as the sign of recess is over.
"That's our bell. Let's get class."
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Izyan Syazwani Mohamad @ Izy
2nd July 2003
In this story Tomoyo is a successful fashion designer. Sonomi was married to Fujitaka 10 years before this story takes place. And Tomoyo has two kids, a twin, Hiiragizawa Hikaru and Hiiragizawa Hakuro. Yes, as you guess it, they're Eriol's. I haven't decided who'll be the lead. Tomoyo or Karu and Kuro. And of course I'll put action. The twin will be a troublemaker and I mean…a real troublemaker…*evil grin*.....
Note 1:
Never try to read this story if you haven't read Tomoyo's Secret...or you'd be no where in this story...
Note 2:
I was thinking of putting the twins name as Hikaru and Hikari...but it sounds so...usual...Karu and Kari...see what I mean?...so I put Hakuro instead...to be frank I've never heard of the word Hakuro...I kinda made that up...if there is a meaning for Hakuro please tell me....Karu and Kuro...I just couldn't resist...because my cat's name is Kuro...her full name is Furaikuroda...which means(?)...anyone who read Eriol's Niece knows what it means....I'm so in love with Furaikuroda..........
Note 3:
I'll be putting a lot of flashback in this ficcie...to freshen up your memory on Tomoyo's Secret....and to make it more dramatic........
Note 4:
Please help me with the title I'm so confuse and blank about the title...
Note 5:
Read and enjoy....and review....flames are welcome...anything that can help me improve is good...
_________________________
Yuki Shiro high,
Karu and Kuro are having their recess. Kuro has to stay very near with Karu, because she usually will have a fight with other students during recess, especially with the 'popular' girls. They always pick on Karu on for no reasons at all and they always laugh at her because she doesn't have a father. But she manage because they're likely picking the wrong person because Karu has the most sizzling and saucy language ever that can make people cried. But of course she never gets to her limit like cursing their family. Kuro in the other hand is a bookworm. He's cool and nerdy (he'll put on his glasses when he's reading and trust me…you don't want to bother him when he's reading…well, the only person who can do that is only Karu and Tomoyo). Nobody really dare pick on him because of Karu. It's not like he can't defend himself. But Karu insisted. Both of them actually know martial arts. Because when they were younger Tomoyo sent them to learn various kinds of martial arts. Since they're just like her when she was younger, a daughter of a very rich woman rich that people would kidnap for money or business matters. She know how it feels being followed everywhere by her bodyguards. And she knows very well that the twins would object if she hires bodyguards for them.
Karu and Kuro (of course he's reading a book) are eating their lunch. A boy and a girl sit in front of them.
"Konichiwa, daisuki na tomodachi!"
Said Karu cheerfully.
"Konichiwa."
Said the newcomers.
"Ne, Hiro-kun, is there any basketball practice today?"
"Aa…at 4 o'clock sharp…"
Answered Hiro.
"Karu-chan, don't you think you should act more lady like?"
Said the girl.
"Nani? …And be effeminate like Kuro? …Arigato…demo…no way Haru-chan…"
Kuro stares at Karu narrowly.
"What do you mean with 'effeminate' like me?"
Karu stick her tongue at Kuro. Kuro return it with a death glare. Chihiro and Haruko sweat drops.
"Okay then, stick being tomboyish. Just don't call your onisan by names."
Said Haruko finally. Karu smile innocently.
"My, my…the sudden protective hen…if I didn't know any better…I think you like Kuro…"
Said Karu teasingly. Kuro continue reading his book and chooses to ignore them.
"Uso! Of course I like him demo, not in that kind of way that you actually meant."
She snaps.
"Hai, hai…but you don't have to snap…you made it sounds that it's true by doing that…"
Haruko blush. She bit her lip.
"That's what you get if you ever try to challenge Karu in speech."
Said Chihiro in a-matter-of-factly tone.
"You'd be a very good debater Karu. Why didn't you join the debate club?"
Karu snort.
"I'll accept that as a compliment. Why I didn't join it? …Well I love basketball more…and by the way I have violin and harp class, and I also join the volleyball and swimming club."
She pauses.
"…Joining a debate club is so boring…because every time I get the debate topic…I have to be either be the opposition or government…and the title is always…in my opinion…unfair…because I always agree on half of each of it…and in debate you have to choose a side and I hated that. And by the way, those snobbish bitch is in that club."
Chihiro and Haruko stares at her dully.
"What? Did I say something wrong?"
"Iie, it's just that when you touch the topic where it concern the matter of Yamato Shizuka and her friends it reminds me of all the bad things she said to and did to us especially you. Never knew that they're in the debate club."
Said Haruko in a matter-of-factly tone.
"And please never forget that jerky Azusa Takeru who has been flirting with you. And because of him, Yamato hates you more than she already have."
Karu giggles.
"And for the fact that he join the basketball club because of me. He always smiles goofily at me. I'm so sick of it. Kami-sama, they sure are lunatics."
Kuro snorts.
"Doshite, Kuro-kun?"
Asked Haruko and Chihiro.
"Baka… ano bouya no baka… Why is he, in the first place chasing you, the school troublemaker and his girlfriend's archenemy? And plus you're a tomboy, you don't even act like a girl how did he even notice you?"
Kuro ends his words with a smirk.
"Oh, suddenly the mute has spoken. What is happening? Is the world turning upside down? I'll take it as a very low compliment anyone has ever given me, thank you."
Said Karu, sarcastically as she pretends to look dreadful.
"Kuro-kun that is not how a brother describe his own sister. Maybe she is a tomboy but still she's a 3.5 and 4.0 student. And she's pretty popular among guys here. She's nice, brainy and beautiful plus, she's pretty tall for a 15 year old. What more could you ask from a girl?"
Asked Haruko. Karu shakes her hand with Haruko.
"Thank you (actually I want to write down 'arigatou' but using 'thank you sounds more…what's the word…whatever…but if I use the Japanese word it sounds a bit modest and I don't want Karu to be that modest)."
Said Karu, relieve.
"Haru-chan, don't you think it's a bit too flattering?"
Asked Karu, innocently.
"Well the fact that she's not just my sister, she's my twin sister and the fact that she always catches my 'tail' and kept calling an 'effeminate' person."
Karu grin at the two words. Kuro glare at her narrowly.
"I think that is the real way how to describe my sister, thank you."
The twin shared a glare.
"Well, I guess because she's 'too' (and I stress the word 'too') popular among all the students or because she's like the school's number one candidate for 'most hard to get girl'. And I heard that Azusa actually is trying to win a bet that Yamato dared him to."
Explains Chihiro.
"A bet? Talk to me Hiro."
Said Kuro, interestedly as he puts down his book.
"Now I'm a 'prize'? What do they think I am? Who does she think she is? Making a bet like that, does she think that she owns me? Bitch!"
Whined Karu.
"Karu-chan, sit and lower your voice."
Whispered Chihiro as most of the students from the nearby tables are eyeing them suspiciously.
"Well if I'm not wrong I heard it too. But I heard it from Yamato herself."
Said Haruko. Everyone by the table turn their glance at Haruko.
"When? Where?"
"Two days ago, when I was in the toilet. I was in the cubicle and I heard her talked to her sidekick."
"Hiroki Rei and Nagasaki Amane."
Said Karu and Chihiro together.
"As I was saying, I overheard their conversation. Yamato said that she make the bet just to teach you a lesson for messing with her but never thought that Azusa would 'actually' fall for you. That is why she's gnashing her teeth because of you."
She said. Karu made a small snort.
"Well, she sure 'messed' herself up and manage to make me miserable too. Urgh! What is wrong with her? She tends to make me miserable. By calling me names and constantly teasing me nastily about me not having a father calling okasan a 'cheap woman'. I was the one whose suppose to be very angry with her."
Kuro frown.
"She said that to you? Being the opposite sex is really harder that I thought. And they are a lot meaner, they psycho people. Not like us, everything is more physically."
Claimed Kuro.
"You have no idea. It's lucky that you're not a pesky brother. If not my life would be more miserable. All the mood swings, periods, hygiene stuff and lots more."
She complains.
"Okay, okay, I get it, just stop. I can't take it. That's what my mother always said every time she returned home from work. And sometimes I hear it from Haruko."
Said Chihiro. Haruko blush.
"Look, it's Yamato Shizuka and her minions at that table."
They all turn to the direction that Karu said. A girl with shoulder length curly dyed brownish blonde (typical Japanese colour) hair. In front of her sits two girls with the same hair colour.
"So which on is Yamato Shizuka?"
Asked Kuro.
"The one with the curly hair. The straight long hair is Amane and the short curly hair is Rei."
Showed Haruko.
"Hmm, I have nicknames for them. Curly, straighty and shorty."
Said Chihiro.
"I have better nicknames for them. Bitch 1, bitch 2 and bitch 3."
Adds Karu.
"Karu-chan, onegai, stops saying that word."
The bell rings as the sign of recess is over.
"That's our bell. Let's get class."
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Review....................
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Izyan Syazwani Mohamad @ Izy
2nd July 2003
