Hi, this is so fun! I never actually thought someone would read my stories, so this is really cool. Once again please tell me if something is wrong, in the details or and spelling/grammar mistakes. Don't be shy. Anyway thank you for reading and enjoy (this is in Bill's POV if you can't tell)
DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything not before, not now and not later. Too bad though the characters are all so cool.
Bill was patrolling the train with the perfects. it was quiet and not much was happening, so he was starting to walk back to his friends cabin. Suddenly he saw a purple mist fly by him. He walked down the way it came to try to find the twins. As Head Boy It was part of his job to keep trouble makers like them from doing TOO much harm, but he was hoping he wouldn't have to do anything about the twins till they at least got to Hogwarts. When he finally found them he was about to start asking them what they did when he heard something from farther away but still very loud. "HELLO WE'RE THE WEASLEY TWINS. WE'RE THE BEST PRANKSTERS YOU WILL EVER HEAR OF. AND FOR THE RECORD WE ARE NOTHING LIKE PERCY, THE BIGGEST PRAT, GIT AND KNOW IT ALL IN THE SCHOOL. WHOSE ONLY FRIENDS ARE (NOW AND WILL ALWAYS BE), BOOKS. ADIÓS" "What did you do?" Bill demanded. But before the twins could answer Bill heard a loud noises from the opposite side of the train. He then ran off again to see what had happened, but not before saying to the twins "This talk is NOT over. I will find out the rest of this conversation." After walking for a few minutes he saw Oliver sitting in he, Kayla and Percy's usual compartment and Kayla was running to him looking very worried. But Percy wasn't there. "Where's Percy?" Bill asked with worry in his voice. Percy, Kayla and Oliver were best friends and if Oliver and Kayla were alone where in merlin's beard could Percy be? Before he could think to much more on the subject, Kayla started. "Where are those twins? They deserve to see what they did to Percy. After that, that ..thing shouted those nasty things about Percy, he teared up and ran down the hall. He was crying, CRYING that is what that did to him." She finished shouting. "Well, I'll keep looking for him but, the twins teasing him doesn't seem like something that would trigger that type of reaction. I mean if he had strut over to the twins compartment and lectured them about safety and rules and policies, that would seem normal for him. But this?" Bill told Kayla and Oliver and hoping for the twins safety that they never came into contact with Kayla. Kayla was fuming and had a look about her that made Bill really hope the twins didn'twhen meet her untill she calmed down even a little. They were both torn from their thoughts when they heard, laughing and loud bangs, so Bill walked toward the noise with Kayla following and then they saw.
Sorry, (not sorry) for the cliff hanger but I was wondering, what do you put in front of the text when someone is thinking? Thanks
