"Janice, my love were are you going so early in the morning," asked Peter. "Oh I just decided to go for a ride before everyone else woke up,"she replied. No need for Peter to know what I'm up to. He'd stop me for sure. She looked at him for a few moments before leaving.
She urged her unicorn Crystal to go faster. As she approached Noelle's castle, Janice began to feel her conscience speak to her. You're going to regret this one day Janice. You shouldn't be jealous of Melanie and Peter. He loves you. He says it everyday. Janice stopped Crystal and stared at the Witch's castle. She suddenly felt like she was doing the right thing by going to see the Witch. Peter will thank me one day for saving our relationship. She slid off of Crystal and slowly started walking to the castle.
Suddenly, a large gray wolf jumped at her almost knocking her down to the ground. Janice screamed out in fear and shock and started running towards the huge metal doors before being block ed by the same wolf.
"Why do you come to the Witch's property," he snarled. "I just wanted to see if the Witch would help me with a problem I have," Janice replied. "Well then follow me." Janice was trembling from fright about meeting the Noelle for the first time. When Janice looked up she saw a woman no taller than 5 feet in a long dress made of satin. She looked deathly pale and had long brownish colored hair.
"Why do you enter my presence Janice, future Queen of Narnia," the Witch said with a voice as cold as the look in her eyes.
"I came because I needed you to take care of someone for me," replied Janice, surprised at how confident she sounded. Noelle said,"And who is this "someone".
"A servant girl named Melanie who has fallen in love with the High King Peter. I'm afraid that Peter has fallen in love with her and that her will leave me and get married to her instead,"Janice said.
Noelle sat at her throne in thought for a moment before looking at Janice straight in the eye. Just looking her in the eye made Janice shiver. "I will do you this favor Janice" she said,"if you promise me one thing." "Yes whatever you want," Janice answered becoming quite hopeful. The evil witch had a very clever smile on her face now. "When your first child is born and is 1 week old, you must give him or her to me," said Noelle.
Janice opened her mouth to reply but thought for a moment. "What if Peter doesn't marry me after Melanie dissapears," The witch replied,"Oh he will darling just leave that to me,"she said. By now Noelle had almost burst into laughter. Unfortunately Janice paid no attention to this which she may regret later. "So do we have ourselves a deal," the witch said as she stuck out her hand. Janice put her hand out and shook Noelle's hand.
"It's a deal."
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