Gah! I'm so sorry for all the typos in the second chapter! I'm too lazy to fix it though innocent smile.
So anyways! I figured why not answer my reviews since i'm so bored?? That and i don't wanna writhe the 3rd chapter yet :P
So on with the answers!
To Luvtowrite:
That's it? No rants about how you lost your eyesite by reading one word of the story?? No complaints about the weird grammar? Not even a glare???? And how are you able to hear the story? I don't think fanfics have voices...or do they??
To Joyfulangel319:
How exactly did i get you hooked? I don't remember placing a hook in the story -reads story again-, yep definately no hook. And how you guys keep hearing the story, does someone read the story to you while you lay on you're beds being fed by your servants??? Or do you guys have magical computers wherein the words pop out of the monitor and sing???
By the way, does the hook hurt??
To reserved:
I'm not good at writing stories either, but here we are both doing what we both suck at.
And what poem? Where??? Was it scared of by my ugly grammar???
To Joyfulangel319(again XP ):
Ahh yes explanations. Well on that part, Neil was trying to wake up Kayla, so being the kind brother he is, he starts jumping up and down her bed to wake her up. And Kayla being the delightful sister she is, throws a pillow at him.
What wonderful siblings...
And so, Neil being the graceful person he is(woah!, that's becoming my new catchphrase!) controlled his balance so he wouldn't fall off the bad and possibly plummet to his death in the evil fuzzy (and very ugly) red carpet in the hotel they we're staying in.
So Kayla finally opens her eyes to show that she's giving in to her brothers cough gentle cough wake up call. And Neil feels satisfied and jumps off her bed.
So did you guys get it?? Do you wanna rip out your eyeballs now?? Feel free to do so but please try not to make too much of a mess.
Byebye now!
