(AN: Okay guys, thanks for reviewing! a lot for me! I am going to name my "Four character" After how many reviews I got. Five. :D I appreciate it! It's awesome to hear that people actually like this even though its only a few people so keep it up! Thanks! Oh and I don't own Divergent so.. :))
The audience was in shock. It was extremely odd for an Abnegation born to transfer to Dauntless. Especially three in one day. The families of the transfers would most likely hate their children forever. This was a life changing decision, especially for two Divergent girls. With a new leader in Dauntless, hunting the Divergent, the girls would surely get caught. With simulations to come, if the right person's not administering them, they will get turned in surely. They aren't safe. They might not ever be safe.
After Abigail and Gabrielle climbed the stairs with their new faction, they heard the train whistle. They knew what they had to do. Jump on the train. While it was moving.
"Oh my gosh Abigail, how are we gonna do this! What if we don't jump in time, and we miss the train an-" "Just relax!" Abigail said.
"How can I relax when I MIGHT DIE!" Gabrielle practically screamed.
"You really need to stop worrying so much, or the Dauntless aren't going to like it."
Gabrielle knew she was right. But she couldn't help it. She always worried. She tried not to, she really did, but she couldn't help it, but she knew that would have to change. So she jumped. She jumped on the train without looking back, and was soon followed by Abigail and Elisha. Soon after a boy jumped in wearing Erudite clothes.
"Hi. My name's Jackson, but you can just call me Jack."
"H-h-hi Jack" Elisha stuttered out. And after a while of nervous chitchat, we saw the Dauntless born jumping off the train. They knew they had to too. Gabrielle and Abigail jumped shortly after Elisha and Jack. Gabrielle landed with a thud and went rolling, and out of the corner of her eye, saw Abigail Elisha and Jack doing the same. They had landed on the top of a building, and had been directed to jump off. Gabrielle started pacing, but the jerk named Connor mistook it for her walking up to jump.
"Wow, the stiff thinks she can jump!" Connor said.
"I'm not a "stiff" anymore, I'm a Dauntless, and for your information, I don't think I can jump I know I can jump. Gabrielle said.
"And I'm jumping with her" Abigail said from behind Gabrielle.
Abigail walked up to Gabrielle, then they both nervously walked to the edge of the building.
"On three, one two THREE!"
And they jumped. Eventually they fell onto a net with lots of hands outstretched to help them up. Gabrielle grabbed a hand that looked familiar, and when it pulled her up, she realized who it was. The hot guy she saw at the choosing ceremony!
"Wow. Two stiffs were the first jumpers!" Someone muttered from the audience. "Well theres a reason they left." Said the hot guy
"Whats your name?" The hot guy asked.
"Gabr-" She didn't know why she hesitated but Gabrielle didn't sound right anymore. And as if sensing what she was thinking the hot guy said.
"Think carefully, you don't get to pick again.
"Gabby" she said. And she liked it. Part of her name from back home, but with a Dauntless edge.
"Make the announcement Five"
"First Jumper. S. First jumpers. Gabby and-whats your name?"
"Its Abbey."She said. With an 'e'."
"First jumpers! Gabby and Abbey with an 'e'!"
(AN: So did you like it? Tell me in the reviews but be nice! And for those wondering, my friend is doing better,but we couldn't write together today so I did this on my own!)
