Herrrrre we go…
Hello everyone and welcome back to "Authors of Sin"
Well, today is a tough one. This has to be 'one' of the most questionable authors on the archive I could find and for many reasons, too.
Without further ado, let's begin.
Authors of Sin – Agent BM
Quick rundown for the new kids, first.
Agent BM is an author that dates back to late-2012. Although some dislike him, I find it baffling that he has a STAGGERING 178 stories and still updates to this very day. That earns a 1+. Dedication to FanFiction, at least.
Looking at the content it's… Ehhh…
There are some grammar issues… a bit of them…
Grammar is an important aspect to any author. -1.
I just peeked at his profile and this bugged me.
"biggest enemies:
Jamie Skyland
FFCriticReviewer
Terrence Orson
people I hate:
Eveliozandgroup
FFCriticreviewer
Terrence Orson"
First, if someone is your enemy, that means you hate them, so shouldn't these two be just one list?
Another thing is that FFCriticReviewer and Terrence Orson are on both "Hate" and "Enemies" either a mistake or he could just REALLY hate these two.
The thing is, a list of enemy's is a yes-no thing depending on the situation.
Example, if I say my biggest enemy is something like "War" That by all means is fine. But if it's a person, I'm bound to get bashed by either their fans or one of their friends. (Of course, if I had a friend that bashed someone because they didn't like me, I'd tell them to back off of them.)
Making your enemies public isn't a good idea… -1
Let me throw this out here. You'd think he'd be more experienced. He's been around the Gumball archive since 2012. And according to a helper, that was WAYYYYYY before all this war junk started.
It's kinda weird. You'd think he would have improved before and after. Or are the critics not helping overall? They do know all about plot, grammar, do's and don'ts, so why are some writers still struggling with these problems?
Way off track there…
I think that's enough to go over for today. And when you review, Drop a line about how you feel about the author I just looked over. And keep an eye out for the next episode tomorrow. It should be interesting!
Farewell from KP, kids.
Authors on the waiting list
Lexboss - Waterfront30000 - Jamie Skyland - Terrence Orson
Final score to Agent BM - -1 - Advice: Try to improve, then improve the archive. Also don't tell us you hate someone because it all goes to crud from there.
Next time: Waterfront30000 Tomorrow and do I have something to say! After is a debate between T. O. and Lex. Who's next?
There's hardly room for seconds when the seconds melt away!
