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"Uhhh... huh? What was that?" I exclaimed hearing all these fighting noises coming from outside of my chamber. 'Could it be? Someone is possibly here to save me!'
You wanted more than anything to get up from your bounds and run to the door to see who or what your savior was. Then thoughts started racing through your head 'What if they just want to use me for slave purposes like master?' You began to grow scared holding what little of your torn kimono that you had against your pale thin body.
BOOM. The room to your door busted open, and then by what you saw you knew that you would be safe. The first was a tall young man with black slicked hair and huge brown eyes, your brother you would know him anywhere, you smiled for the first time in three years there he was to save you. The second was a man who made your head hurt to look at (don't get me wrong I think Kuwabara is a lovable character but his face is not pretty) him he was much taller than Yusuke and had a crazy orange hair do and little slits for eyes. The third an incredibly attractive man with flaming red hair and gorgeous green eyes. And last you saw a short handsome young man with black hair and a white starburst in it, and then you saw his blood red eyes. You stared for a moment only to be taken back into the world when someone was working with your chains.
It was the red head. "Don't worry I'm going to help get you out." He whispered in a soothing tone.
"Thank you." You squeaked. Even though you knew they were safe you were still scared. Scared of what would happen if they lost, scarred of what would happen once your master won, and scared of being sent through torment once again.
The chains fell off with a clunk as they hit the cold floor.
Kurama's POV
As the chains fell I stood up and offered her a hand up she grabbed my hand and tried to pull herself up but she was obviously too weak. She tried again before I could get a chance to help her. This time she was able to pull herself up but then collapsed on my chest as a limp rag doll.
I picked her limp body up and held it close me trying to get some of my body heat onto her, she was so cold, so beaten and bruised. I looked at her face her soft eyes closed with dark circles under her eyes, thin lips, and scratches over her face. She was very beautiful but there was no time to think about that.
I looked up to see how the battle was going, only to my surprise it was over. The man had vanished after being beaten badly.
3rd POV
"Damn! That bastard got away!" Yusuke screamed as he kicked the wall. Then he looked over to where Kurama and his sister were. He immediately saw his sister's battered form and wanted to beat the guy right back up again. There were scratches and bruises all over her body.
"You never did tell us her name Yusuke." Kurama noted still gazing down at the sleeping girl.
"Her name is Lily." Yusuke said sadly still looking at his sisters limp body. "Kurama let me take her." Yusuke said while walking over and taking Lily's body out of his hands. He held her close in a tight embrace afraid she would disappear if he ever let her go again.
Yusuke POV
'I just want to rip his fucking head off! And it pisses me off even more we weren't able to kill the asshole!' I thought to myself while we were waiting for a portal back to the spirit world.
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