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The red hair on it's own urged Rhea to follow, and she didn't have to go far for her to completely regret her decision. Cold metal made it's way across her skin and positioned itself at her neck.
"Don't move human," a voice commanded.
Terrified, she accidentally screamed and jerked away from the strange man, and was instantly pulled back by his strong arms.
"I told you not to move; I don't want to accidentally kill my leverage now do I?"
"No, no you don't. How about this, I'll follow you and not struggle so that you won't have to worry about killing me with your shiny sword thing." She flashed a cheesy grin hopefully persuading him to listen.
He ignored her and pulled her back towards him. Desperate for escape, Rhea kicked at the man's groin, and jabbed her bony elbow into his stomach. She missed completely, and she felt as if her elbow hit solid concrete and she winced in pain.
Out of nowhere, she lost feeling in her feet. No, that wasn't it. She was being raised off the ground and into the air!
Oh shit he flies! Lucky butthead!
"Rhea!" cried a voice from below.
Opening her eyes, Rhea saw Suiichi and a short, dark-haired guy standing on a roof looking up at her.
"Let her go Takami! Your quarrel is with us! She has nothing to do with this!" Suiichi shouted at the man carrying you.
"She has everything to do with us Kurama. You fool, she's just what I need to get the key from you."
"A demon like you can't use the key, besides, do you even know where the box is?" the short, black-haired guy said calmly.
"Demon?! What key?! Who's Kurama?!" Rhea screamed as she struggled against the flying demon.
"If you don't give the key to me, this human girl will die. I've seen the way you spend time with her Kurama. She's important to you," the demon Takami threatened.
The demon called Suiichi Kurama. I wonder what's going on here.
"Rhea stop struggling or you'll fall!" Suiichi/Kurama yelled to you, and turning to the short guy he said, "Hiei, if she falls, catch her please."
"Hn," was the reply. Rhea felt that there was minute care in his voice.
"FALL?! You better not let me go you flying monkey!" Rhea yelled agitatedly towards her capture.
The demon pulled Rhea's hair back, causing her to yelp, and told her to shut up. Suiichi's eyes fired and shot daggered looks at Takami, making the demon more wary of what the red head might do. Seeing Suiichi's concern for her, Rhea felt relieved that he didn't bear a grudge from earlier that day.
Kurama's hand went to his head, or more specifically, his hair. Takami, seeing this, flew away from him a few more feet, as if anticipating an attack.
What's he so afraid of? It looks like Suiichi's just going to flip his hair or something. Wimp.
Before Rhea could count the fingers on her hand, something hit Takami on the side, and he was heading straight into the street below. He hadn't let go of her, but it wouldn't have matter, considering she couldn't fly.
"Aaah!!" Rhea screamed as the concrete was coming closer and closer. They would surely hit the ground and become a pile of mush resembling messily done pancakes.
During the panic, Rhea failed to notice that Takami had let go of her, trying to save himself. Something was coming at her, small and black; it caught her with so much force that it knocked the wind out of her. Dizzy, she was set down on the roof of another building, only 2 stories high.
Oi…. I'm getting a bruise there…. At least I'm still alive.
Someone was standing in front of her as she rolled onto her back and put her hand on her side. Rhea could hear grunts and yells near her, and looking up, she saw Suiichi fighting Takami with a whip of sorts. It was long and green, with thorns covering it.
It was over for Takami. Rhea wasn't much of a fighter, but she knew a dead man when she saw one. He tried to fly away but the rope caught his wing and pulled him down, ripping it clean off. Yelping in pain, Takami was caught again by Suiichi's thorn covered whip, and this time it cut through his neck and he was gone from the living world.
