Hey people, I just recently, meaning last night, finished my first story. I'm so proud of my self! O O
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iJealous Chapter 3
"So Sam" Carly started. "You said you would tell me on the way, so I'm waiting." "I don't want to tell you." "Sam." I looked down, Freddie still had his eyes closed but he talked anyways. "You said if I answered your question, than you would answer one of mine, and not hurt me." Dang, he was right.
"FINE! I was coming over to your house to see if you were ok, and obviously you were absolutely perfect." "Sam..." "I'm the reason your mom went in the room, to break you to up. I left the moment I walked in. Mrs. Benson was watching some parenting show. This is what was said. 'Hi Mrs. Benson.' 'Sam, didn't you just come in? Why are you leaving. I didn't hear any talking.' 'His lips were occupied' 'What do you mean?' 'Mrs. Benson, I think you should go tell Freddie that you're home.' 'Ok?'
Then I quickly put on that army uniform thing and pretended that I was there the whole time. But seriously Shay, even though I know, Freddie may not, so tell him." "Tell him what?" "That you were in the hall just know." "What?!" "Don't lie Shay, I heard you. Well your shoe." "Oh, ha, ahem, that." "Yeah that."
"Freddie." Carly said sadly. "Yeah?" His voice very worried for her. "I heard you talking to Sam. I know you don't like me. I-I- I have to tell you something Freddie." She said hanging her head. "Freddie, I don't love you like that either. I love you as a best friend. I just thought, that, well you had more love towards me than I ever imagined, so I, thought I would repay you, by loving you more than a friend." She still had her head hanging.
"Carly?" "Yes Freddie?" "I forgive you, don't be upset. It's alright. We can go back to being best friends like we used to be." "Ok." She said smiling.
"But Freddie? Who is it that you do like?"
I knew this would never happen, but a girl can dream.
"Sam is who I like." Carly froze. Then screamed. "YOU GAVE UP ME FOR THAT DIRT RAG PERSON! REALLY!" she said in a joking tone. We laughed at her. Then Freddie stared into my eyes, I stared into his. Then we leaned in and kissed. Then my daydream ended, from my stupidness.
I was in such shock from that sensational imaginary kiss that I dropped Freddie. Carly stared at me in anger. "SAM!" "WHAT?!" "HE LOVES YOU! HE WAS ABOUT TO KISS YOU! AND YOU DROP HIM! DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH PAIN HE IS IN!"
"Sorry. I can only be strong for so long, I guess I was so shocked that my arms fainted." "Sam! Stay here! I'm getting the nurse!" "No! Stop." "What?!" "I know how to fix him, would you please leave, get back to class." "Sam. Don't you dare kill him!" "Ok, bye Shay."
"Freddie." I said. "Freddie." "Freddie" This time I said pleading. "Freddie! Come on wake up!" I put my head on his chest. Crying, but checking his heart. It was slowing down. "FREDDIE! DON'T GO! I LOVE YOU! YOU CAN'T DIE! IF YOU DIE! I DIE! LIVE FREDDIE! LIVE!" I screamed crying.
(Freddie's POV)
"But Freddie. Who is it that you like?" I was afraid I would be killed if I told Carly who I did like, but decided it was time to tell them. Actually no, I would show them.
I started leaning towards Sam. Who was staring at me blankly. Our lips were about to touch when, she dropped me. I screamed in pain. I was starting to fade out, hearing very little. I started dreaming of my dad. I knew I was soon to be going to stay with him, for the rest of eternity.
"Freddie." He said. "DAD!" I said starting to tear up. "Son, dyou can't come to me." "But why?" "She needs you." "Who?" "Sam" "Yeah sure. She so needs me. She dropped me, leaving me to soon die, because I was about to kiss her." "She was daydreaming of kissing you." "Really?" "When have I ever lied to you. He was right. "Son, listen to her, she's crying over you." "Fine, I'll listen."
I heard her telling Carly to leave. Then I felt her kneel down besides me, saying things I would never expect her to say.
"Freddie." she said. "Freddie." "Freddie" This time she was said pleading. "Freddie! Come on wake up!" she put her head on my chest. Crying. "FREDDIE! DON'T GO! I LOVE YOU! YOU CAN'T DIE! IF YOU DIE! I DIE! LIVE FREDDIE! LIVE!" she screamed crying.
"It's true, she would die. She will die. She's already thinking of how." "Dad! I want to go back. I want to be with her." "Only one thing will bring you back." "What's that?" "Wait a few moments.
The next thing I knew she was kissing me. When she broke away, I decided I wanted to live for sure. "Sam." "FREDDIE!" I didn't have any strength to talk. I only had enough for three words. I could either say. I love you or Kiss me. I could say Kiss me, love. I'll go with that. "Kiissmmeeeeee, I- I- Looo" I couldn't do it, I had no strength, no breath. In seconds she was kissing me fiecerely. I knew I would make it. I started coughing. "FREDDIE! STAY WIITH ME NOW!" "I will, I'll stay with you for ever."
And Freddie did just that. They got marries, and had 2 daughters. Sam became a highly paid nurse, Freddie invented many new electronical devices, and they became the richest family in the world.
If you want me to add an epilogue about the children, then review.
