Ok please feel free to throw very sharp and heavy farm objects at my head. This chapter SUCKED! I didnt check my grammer, or spelling, and I did it in all of about 5 minutes. There is a reason for this, I am reposting this story, and I wanted to tell you guys (if anyone is still reading this!) and your not aloud to only have author posts so I had to do this sucky chappie. Probably a new title, and Im going to redo the few chapters i have, and have the other chapters already ready. So this will be MOST LIKELY the last post, unless by some miracle I can make it work, but im really not happy with it. Im going to start over and do it right, and I will probably do this with all my fics. For more info on when the story will be back check out my profile which i update regularly. It wont be out to soon, because Im starting my freshman year of highschool, wont that be fun. So I have to focus mostly on that. Im really sorry.

Your horrible author

Steph


"Who am I? Soon all will be clear," A voice boomed from the shadows, behind a building. All the men turned and looked in alarm.

"Follow him!" Weasley yelled pulling out his wand. But a strong wind suddenly blew and all was quiet. Ron carefully made his way to the building, but came out with nothing.

"He must have apparated! Get the Apparation List out Smith!" Ron barked at Smith, who waved his wand, a list appearing in his hand.

"Nothing Sir," He said shaking his head.

"Shit!"

The walls were of crumbling brick, and no color seemed to grace them. It smelled of despair and the loss of hope. It was an ally way with very little space to maneuver in, barely big enough for a grown man to walkthrough.

But one such grown man was walking through the. He was dressed in all black, and had an imposing stature as he made his way passageway. He stopped suddenly in front of a stretch of wall, and pulled out his wand, a magnificent wand at that. Intricate designs were etched into the dark wood, and words in indecipherable languages. He tapped the bricks in an elaborate pattern, and it opened, suddenly, into a dark void. As he made his way inside the walls shut as suddenly as it had opened.

"How dare you!" A voice said from the darkness.

"I had to go," The man said simply.

"You disobeyed me young one, you are not ready."
"But I am ready!" The man, whose voice was usually as imposing as his stature, wavered slightly.

"Your voice tells me otherwise. Your training is almost complete, but you are not ready to face your destiny.

"No! I am ready!"

"What you did today showed that you are not ready. Discipline, as you know is an important role in your training. You killed men today, you disappoint me."

The man had no reply to this, and the voice was no more. He made his way back to the outside, to the hopeless place that was the world.

"I want all records of who was out today!" Ron yelled out to the men, he then dissapereated Neville at his side. As soon as he got back into the Main War Room, he called Hermione once more.

"Hermione, have you found anything out yet?" Ron asked, with that Neville left the room, taking a copy of the main map with him.

"Sir, everything is going wrong! This isn't supposed to happen, these maps are sacred, no one can tamper with them without the authority, Sir I'm completely out of ideas," Hermione said her voice etched with despair. Hermione Granger was one of the smartest witches to ever set foot on the earth, she had graduated Hogwarts with 15 N.E.W.T's, and was one of the best Head girls Hogwarts had ever seen, and she was a muggleborn. If she had no idea what to do…

"Hermione, are you sure there's no one that can help us?"

"I-I think one person might be able to help." She said, looking straight at Ron, brown eyes chrasing with brown.

"You don't mean…"

"Yes I do."


I am scum I am horrible. Feel free to behead me. The new version will be out in the future, but Im working on a HUGE Marauder era fic right now, all seven years, all the romance, all the Voldylicious goodness, and all the madness that comes with writing it. But I promise to eventually have a new Return Of A Savior, way better than before, and maybe with a better title!