Well here's Chapter 2. Written in 3rd Person Omniscient. Dovewing's point of view First.

Enjoy!


Dovewing was dreaming.

Victory and happiness that they had defeated the Dark Forest, then the tree falling on Firestar, Sandstorm waling, everyone greiving, and then a shadow cast in front of her and a dead body clawed to death. Then she felt a claw go through her back and...

Dovewing woke up panting. It seemed so real, ugh. i hate nightmares. She walked out of the warriors den and looked for Foxleap. He was nowhere in sight. Must of gone on the Dawn Patrol, she thought. Dovewing turned around and felt a cold breeze blow on her. That's weird, it's almost Greenleaf. Well, you just got to go with it. Another breeze struck her and she started to shiver. She spun around as she heard a earsplitting scream just outside of camp.

"No, Why... Why?" She heard screams and sobs.

She raced to the scream and saw Cherryfur(who recently got her warrior name) standing over a limp body with claw marks on its back and neck gashed with a pool of blood surrounding the body. She gasped with horror. She remembered the body in her dream with terror. Who could do such as thing? It was Moleclaw(Who had just recently gotten his warrior name as well). Bramblestar was soon at the seen.

"Who-Who did this?" He asked as a look of horror spread across his face.

"We don't know." Icepelt said.

The Dawn Patrol arrived with Bumblestripe, Thornclaw, Graystripe, and Foxleap leading.

"It must of been a rouge or Shadowclan," Thornclaw growled"We should mention this at the upcoming Gathering... Or give them what they deserve."

"But there doesn't seem to be any Shadowclan or Rouge scent here" Ivypool said as she sniffed the air.

Everyone was silent as they sniffed the ground and air, they all found no Shadowclan or Rouge scent. They all knew what this meant, that one of Thunderclan had murdered Moleclaw.

"This means... that," Bramblestar struggled to say it as he couldn't believe it,"One of Thunderclan has murdered Moleclaw."

A look of fear spread on Dovewing's face, how could someone do this, Someone from Thunderclan.

"Who's not here?" Thornclaw asked.

"Only the kits and elders and queens." Foxleap said.

"That means the killer could be right here right now." Bramblestar said.

A flash of horror came on everyone's face as they looked around scared, except for one cat who looked away and no one caught it...

"I need Thornclaw, Squirrelflight, and Graystripe to carry the body to the Medicine Den to get examined." Bramblestar meowed.

"I want to help." Cherryfur said.

With some hesitation Bramblestar agreed," Usually this is only for senior warriors but since you are his sister i'll allow it."

Cherryfur turned away towards the body and grabbed it by the scruff as the other warriors assigned helped carry i by the legs and supported it.


At the Medicine Cat's Den


"Oh my goodness!" Leafpool almost fainted as she saw the bloody mess of Moleclaw's body, "What...Happened?"

"Someone in Thunderclan murdered him" Cherryfur snarled.

"I'm sorry for your loss, I Think i can help with preparing the body though, fetch me some cobwebs and leaves." Leafpool ordered.

As they left, Leafpool examined the body. She couldn't smell any other scent past the blood and couldn't find any fur. A skilled killer, she thought.

"We're back with those cobwebs and leaves." The cats that she sent said.

"Oh good, i'll just apply them to the wounds so there won't be as much blood..." Leafpool meowed.

"I'm going to go now." Thornclaw said and Graystripe followed.

Cherryfur was the only one left besides Leafpool in the Den.

Cherryfur started to fell uncomfortable.

"I'll leave too..." She said,"This doesn't feel right."

"Okay dear."


"Bye."

"Bye."

Leafpool turned the body over and started applying the cobwebs and soaking them to the wounds. She started to hum and tune. A huge gash in the body was drenching the cobwebs in blood.

"Oh my goodness." She gasped, it was huge. What could of made this gash? She noticed something in the gash, she pawed at it. Fur? She pulled it out and sure enough, a blood soaked tuft of fur. I now can figure out what horrible cat has done this, she thought. She leaned over to smell it. A familar scent came to her nose. She sprang up, Oh no, it can't be, she sniffed it again. Yes it is. She picked it up and hid it in a crevasse in the corner.

A flashback overwhelmed her, she remembered doing the same thing to Ashfur's body as she hid Hollyleaf's fur.

"Oh no." She whispered.

No one must ever know...

She ran out of the den.


The killer stood in the middle of camp.

It saw Leafpool frantically run out of her den.

She knows.

The cat didn't want to kill another cat today but it looked it was Leafpool's unlucky day. I'll have to wait until she's vulnerable in the forest.

But for now, i've had a long day, time to sleep.


So someone's a murderer. Please please please review and say which cat you think murdered Moleclaw.

I can still change the mystery cat so review or PM me if you want it to be a specific cat...

Actually, scratch that, still review who you think it is and how good|bad the story is but PM me if you want a request for who the killer is or who will be killed in upcoming chapters.

Also keep in mind that Leafpool wants to protect the killer so I'll give a hint that Leafpool knows this cat well.

Keep the reviews coming! Only one review! C'mon guys.

Chapter Three Up as soon as possible.