I NEED FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want to continue this story but to do that i need your opinions, under 50 percent of the people that read the first chapter have continued on to the second one. again I WANT TO MAKE THIS STORY THE BEST IT CAN BE. but, i cant do that without YOUR advice. you have the power to take this story someplace, if it isn't good enough and you think i should end it i will, but, you have to tell me