This is ch two for my story captured and changed, I will probably slow down on updating as my ideas get less frequent and as I get more into classes for college, so sorry if you really like it.

If someone wants to take my idea and run with it go ahead, but be sure to make sure you give credit to the original author, that said, I would like to give credit to the author who helped me get this idea started, Deranged Lunatics, for giving me the idea that Oracion Seis was around during Lucy's childhood.

I would also like to thank the only person who reviewed, TeenTitanzzLuva, for her review

now ch. 2

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Stardust looked around her at all the people bustling around the port town of Hargeon. She wondered if she should reveal the collar around her neck in this crowded place, maybe the people could save her from this life. She looked over at the boy beside her, and immediately thought it was a bad idea, as he was much stronger than her, and she did not know if she could escape even if the entire town rose up and attacked the boy. She did not know where to begin to look for the woman she and Midnight had been sent to look for. While thinking this she looked over at Midnight. The fifteen year old gazed stoically ahead, but made sure she was beside him at all times so she could not escape. She thought back to how his father, the man whom she despised for taking her away from her family, had ordered him to watch her and for her to obey him at all times.

"Where do we look for miss Karen first?" she questioned Midnight

Midnight ignored her question and continued to walk. As they walked, Stardust looked at all the buildings around her, seeing tall houses of brick, stone, and wood with tall chimneys and colorful roofs. She saw a sign that said "Magic Shop for all kinds of mages, we have keys to the celestial gates, half off." She immediately pointed this out to Midnight, saying "She might be in there." and pointing at the sign. He looked at her and nodded, and started to walk towards the shop.

As they entered they saw a young woman with green hair and a red jacket with pale pink fur trim. "That's her" Stardust said "see her Blue Pegasus mark on her hat."

"Then get her to follow you somewhere deserted" Midnight whispered

Stardust walked up to Karen and asked in an awed voice "Are you Karen Lilica?"

The woman looked over at the girl, in shorts and a high collared shirt, and said "Yes, I am, and who are you little girl?"

Stardust put on an excited face(not a problem sense she was truly excited to see a famous mage) and said "My name is Stardust and I am a Celestial mage too, see" and she held up her 33 keys.

Karen just stared in amazement, thinking 'how did she get 8 golden keys of the zodiac, as well as 25 silver keys, if I could defeat this kid, make her disappear, well then I would have 10 golden keys'

While Karen was thinking, Stardust asked "Can you show me your keys?"

Karen smiled and said "Sure, just follow me" to stardust thinking 'I will lead her into a dark alley and defeat her, it has to be near the the edge of town so I can get rid of her body' "lets go over to the eastern harbor, there are no people there unless a warehouse is being added to or having stuff removed from it, so we will have privacy"

"OK" said Stardust and walked out of the shop with Karen. Karen never noticed that Midnight followed them from the rooftops.

When they got to the warehouse area, Karen and Stardust stopped and Karen immediately summoned a spirit "Gate of the lion I open thee, Leo"

Stardust stared in awe at the spirit, and before either Karen or Stardust could speak he said "Ah! I finally get to meet the one that all the spirits have been talking about, the kindhearted girl 'Stardust', who is actually Lucy Heartfilia, kidnapped and forced to become a member of Oracion Seis, whose collar can only be destroyed by Dragon Slayer magic."

"What!" yelled both Stardust and Karen

Karen glared at Stardust and said "Kill that dark guild member then Leo. I will get a large reward for taking one of them down, as well as all her keys." before Leo could do anything though Karen fell to the ground with a knife in her back. Stardust backed away with tears falling down her face.

"You never said you were going to kill her, just defeat her!" she accused Midnight "I thought we couldn't let her get killed!" and she ran as fast as she could to the street full of people and hid

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A couple hours later she was wandering the streets thinking how glad she was that Midnight didn't say she had to stay near him, or she would have been in a lot of trouble. As she wandered she wasn't looking where she was going and bumped into a young boy with pink hair and a white scarf that looked like it was made of scales. She immediately said "Sorry!" and looked fearful, cringing back away from him, but he just smiled and said "it was my fault so I am the one who should be sorry, what's wrong?" he asked, seeing her cringe away "I don't bite, so don't worry"

She was about to say something in return when a cold voice said "So there you are, Stardust" she turned in fear to see Midnight looking angry at her "Come" he said "it is time to go back home"

She nodded meekly and left with him, giving the boy she had met one last glance.

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Natsu stared at the girl as she left, wondering who she was, not knowing she would eventually change his life

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Finally, the end of ch. 2, I worked hard to put more detail in the story this time, so PLEASE review and tell me what you think