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Chapter Two
Brownkit padded into the apprentice den and looked around. There was nobody there. Suddenly, the air was knocked out of her and she fell into the nest in front of her paws.
'Ooof!' she cried out.
A horde of chattering apprentices entered the den, not noticing the small brown kit in front of them.
'… I know, did you see that squirrel I caught? It was huge!' Brownkit heard Sharppaw boasting, even through the moss and bracken.
'Hey!' She called out, 'you knocked me over!'
Crypaw looked round and his stormy eyes softened as he saw the kit.
'What are you doing down there?' he asked, standing up.
'You pushed me over,' Brownkit huffed and puffed getting over the nest's sides.
'Oh, I'm sorry, didn't see you,' with that Crypaw turned around and animatedly started chatting to Woodpaw about fighting techniques.
Brownkit sighed, and made her way out of the den. That hadn't been very successful.
Daisy was sunning herself on the High Ledge, as well as One-ear, Graystripe and Hazeltail. Brownkit was surprised they all fitted. The elders seemed to eat loads!
Brownkit walked over to the Nursery and was pleased to see Oakkit, looking a little lost without her or Snowkit.
'Hi! Do you wanna play Oak Clan and Brown Clan?' she bounced up to him.
'Oh yes! I'm Oakstar, leader of Oak Clan!'
'And I'm Brownstar, leader of Brown Clan!'
The two small kits made up cat after cat to go into their imaginary clans. Suddenly half way through a pretend naming ritual, in which Oak 'star' was an apprentice, Brownkit suddenly stopped.
''Where did Snowkit go?' she asked carefully.
'Snowkit… hmm…' suddenly Oakkit gasped. 'She said she was going to go and look in the Jayfeather's den!'
'But she must have been in there for hours!' Brownkit exclaimed.
They both ran towards the den, crashing into Thornclaw as they went.
'Now where are you two going in such a rush?' He mewed kindly.
'Snowkit… medicine cat den…' Brownkit panted, racing on.
Finally they reached the den, leaving a baffled Thornclaw behind. Brownkit hesitantly looked in. Everthing seemed normal at first. The moss bedding was where it normally was; the pool of water at the back was clean and glistening.
Oakkit suddenly hurtled past Brownkit running to where an unmoving pile of white fur lay. Brownkit hurried to his side. Snowkit wasn't moving. Just then, Brownkit noticed a few startingly red berries roll out from underneath Snowkit. Deathberries.
Left you on a cliff hanger there didn't I! Want at least one more review before I update.
