The Rant You Are About To Receive (please skip this if you're going to take it seriously):

Okay guys and girlies, I seemed to be getting a great amount of reviews on how confusing the first/third person is to you all. This is due to the upload thing I swear! Y'know the asterisks that you can use to separate things, or make words appear as actions? Well I've been using them and fanfic doesn't seem to like that. So just for everyone's benefit – YES the first paragraph is supposed to be from our demi-saiyan's POV (that's 'point of view' kiddies) and then the rest of the story, is in fact, in the third person stereotypical storytelling format. So now I've gotten that off of my flat chest, I want you all to stop worrying about it, and enjoy the unveiling of the next chapter! - Orries A Writer. (P.S. I'm happy about the size of my chest... It's not that flat) (P.P.S. Also, I know there are typo's. I know there is a thing at the top of chapter two that states "chapter 2" When I remember how, i'm taking it down and changing it. That includes the separating problem we've all come to love)