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Ben's Note of Benliness: Ok, so maybe I decided to give this note another chance. I like keeping the comment reviews separate from my Loop Overview. It's just how I am, ya dig?
KCL: Hi! Glad you liked the three taking over the world. More installments for that are to come. Also, as for your idea with Cupid, I quite enjoy it and will definitely add it in when I have Cupid wake up. Which is sooner than you might think.
Drakonpie250: Thanks for understanding. Like I said, I do support same sex couples, so I don't dis preference. But like I said, thanks. (See the last Loop. It might not be much, but you can see that I do ship things like that, I just don't publicize it much.)
The Great Story Collector: You know the bad side about me? I hate research. You want to know the good thing about me? If I have to do research, it has to be about a story I care about. I'll consider both of those. I don't think they'll be mentioned for a few loops though, at least until I have some of the… 'plot' I have plan takes place.
Again, thanks to all of you for supporting me! The longer this gets, I'm sure the more people will like. And remember, if you have any ideas for a loop, feel free to send me suggestions!
3.1: Curse the Internet (Warning: Possible Offensive Content)
Raven blinked at her Loop memories. "What the…" she said, rechecking through them.
"Hey Raven! Looping loops!" she said. Maddie then noticed that Raven looked… very weirded out. It was quite weird for Maddie to look at, because it looked like a face she would have on her own face.
"What's up? You look like a dancing pigeon on its way to a barmistfa on a water park," Maddie said.
Raven shuddered. "This Loop… this is just too weird…" she said.
Maddie cocked her head to the side. "Seems normal to me," she said. "Which is saying something, because I don't normally see the world normally."
"Maddie… according to these memories, I'm…." Raven shuddered. "Pregnant."
Maddie's eyes went wide. "That's weird," she agreed. "Who's the father?"
Raven shuddered again. "The… Internet," she said.
3.2: Raven Hatter-Part 3 (Continuation 2.1)
"Hey Maddie?" Raven asked. The two girls were in Raven's dorm. Maddie had originally come over for a study session… only to turn it into a 'Raven, you can do all the work' session. Raven didn't mind, really. Maddie was her best friend.
"Yes Raven?" Maddie asked in her happy demeanor. Raven knew Maddie was still pretty random and happy, but she also knew Maddie embraced being evil. Raven found it hard to distinguish when Maddie was actually happy, or planning evil activities. Sometimes the two coincided.
"I was wondering what you saw in the Story Book of Legends," Raven said. "It shows you your destiny, and then the final result. I was wondering… what you saw."
Maddie was quiet for a few moments. Raven went on edge. She had personally wondered if Loops like this changed how the destiny was shown for each person. She wondered if Maddie's was better than what Raven got originally.
Until Maddie suddenly started crying.
Baseline or not, Raven had never seen Maddie cry. Maddie was always the tough one, braving through the drama that had happened around her. Maddie was Raven's support beam. Raven always relied on Maddie to help her, since Maddie never seemed to be stressed or worried about anything.
Being a Queen changed her.
"Raven… I don't want… this," she said. Raven blinked. That couldn't be right. This Maddie idolized her mom. (Raven still debated whether the Evil Queen was still her mom or Maddie's mom.) Maddie basked in evil. Evil was practically Maddie's middle name this Loop!
"What do you mean?" Raven asked calmly.
"I don't want to be evil," Maddie sobbed. "Raven, after my destinty, I'm going to be locked up for years on end. And then guess what? Guess what these people do to me?" Raven shook her head in response. "They execute me! I don't want to die Raven! You ever wonder what it's like, knowing why and how you're going to die? Well, it's terrible!"
Maddie sobbed again and fell to the floor. Raven stood up, walked over to Maddie, and embraced her. Even Raven didn't envision a future this bad. No wonder Maddie broke down…
And then Raven realized how twisted it was.
For years, Apple had always wanted Raven to embrace evil. She always wanted to be poisoned and have Raven be terrible to her. But once it's all said and done, what use is the Evil Queen? Might as well kill her before she does something out of line.
If Apple ever Awoke, Raven was going to punch Apple in the face.
3.3: Trio of Destiny-Part 2 (Drakonpie250)
All of the students had been gathered into the castleteria. Most of them were shivering in fear. They had not seen Raven, Maddie, or Cerise for over a day since they decided to take over. When they were summoned, the fear of what would happen to them was great amongst them.
Above them, a throne had been set up. Raven sat on it, her flame aura returned. She smiled evilly down at the students. Cerise and Maddie stood on either side of her throne, glaring as if begging one of them to even try to attack the new queen.
After a few more moments, Raven spoke. "As you know," she said, "I'm taking over the world. Having just power over one story isn't enough for me. I want to rule all of them! You are all weak and insignificant to this plan. If I wanted, I could turn each of you into a statue like your poor headmaster!"
A few whimpers were heard. Raven kept her composure but couldn't help but feel a little guilty. Hopefully when all her friends Awoke, she could tell this tale and have a good laugh over it.
"However," she said. "I'm not all evil. I'm willing to keep each and everyone of you alive. But, this is a war. You are either with me or not. So, who would like to help me in this war? And who would like to rot away? The choice is yours."
No one jumped up at once. Most of them figured if Raven was going to keep them all alive, it was better to rot away than to help fight for something they didn't want. However, one person volunteered.
"I'll help you," Apple White said.
Raven kept her surprise hidden. Apple? Wanted to help Raven go beyond her destiny? No. Something more was going on. Raven knew Apple enough to know that she didn't want any of what Raven was doing.
"Very well. Apple White is now joined in the cause," Raven said. "Who else would like to join the winning side?"
To no surprise at all, Kitty and Lizzie were the next two to join the cause. Maddie had figured that if one Wonderlandian was on Team Raven, then the others would likely follow. Sparrow decided to also come over, much to Raven annoyance. Dexter soon made his way over, Cupid following behind him. The surprise of the group (other than Apple) was Blondie and Daring. Raven made a mental note to check that out.
No one else seemed willing to follow Raven. At least, for the moment. Raven figured some of the Rebels from Baseline who didn't join would crack at one point or another. "I see no one else is willing to stand by me," Raven said. "Very well then. Maddie will be in charge of keeping you… alive. You may all return to your rooms. Those of you who have joined me will not be locked in, but you must remain in the castle. Understood?"
A series of nods were seen. Raven nodded and Maddie led the group back to their dorms. Once they were gone, Raven and Cerise both laughed. "I can't believe this is going so well," Raven said.
"I know. I thought it would be an absolute disaster," Cerise chuckled. "So, now that we have a few followers… how do we divide things up? You're the supreme leader and decide when and what we do, but since me and Maddie are your loyal followers, shouldn't we be in charge of something?"
Raven thought for a moment before nodding. "I agree," she said. "I think we should have Maddie in charge of handling complaints of the prisoners and 'allies'. She brings concerns to me and I can handle them as I see fit. Since we need an Army… you think you can beat these guys into shape?"
Cerise smirked. "I think I can handle it," she said.
Apple, Daring, and Blondie had all gathered in one dorm. They had sweet talked Maddie, who happily allowed it, and were now discussing what was going on. "Apple, we aren't really going with Raven, are we?" Daring asked. "I only walked over because you did."
"Same. Raven taking over just isn't right, not at all," Blondie mumbled.
Apple shook her head. "No, we aren't teaming up with Raven," she said. "We're going to stop this before it gets out of hand."
Daring raised an eyebrow. "And how are we supposed to do that?" he asked.
Apple looked at him. "Simple. I 'joined' Raven to get her to think I'm on her side. I warm up to her, she trusts me, then we find a way to lock Raven away."
Blondie and Daring both looked at each other, then at Apple. "Sounds just right," Blondie smirked. "What do you want us to do?"
3.4: Off With My Head!
Maddie giggled as she skipped up to her podium. She was glad when she was able to convince Raven to sign the book for one loop and not go crazy. She wanted to try something she learned in a fused loop.
Maddie reached the podium and smiled at her class mates. "Good evening people I know really well!" she said. "I'm Madeline Hatter, but that name is always too long, so I'm just Maddie! Anyway, I'm going to take a look at this Book and make sure it's all in order so I can sign my life away to being mad!"
A mad smile reached Maddie's lips. "But first, something that makes no sense!" And with that, Maddie grasped her head, and yanked it off.
And smiled.
"Huh. That worked," she said in glee.
Mass panic flooded the area while Lizzie looked mildly intrigued. "So that's how it feels to see someone's head come off," she said.
3.5: Why Do Bad Things Always Happen to Dex?
"Hey Raven?" Cerise huffed, catching up to her friend and local Anchor.
"Hmmm?" Raven asked, reading a spell book.
"Um… someone else is Awake…" Cerise said awkwardly.
"Oh? Who?"
"Dexter…"
Raven smiled. "Great. He can help us with technical things for more…" Raven stopped as she noticed Cerise' panicked look. "What's wrong?"
"He kind of… thinks he's a time traveler…"
Raven stared at Cerise for a moment. "Yeah, that's going to be one big mess I'm going to have to clean up," she sighed.
"I'm telling you! Raven doesn't sign her destiny and nothing bad happens!" Dexter declared. "Plus, I can vouch that, in the future, Apple is ok with choosing our own path! We don't have to go down this road at all!"
"Little bro," Daring said, grabbing his brother and pulling him aside. "Don't go spreading lies that make the Royal community look bad. This isn't making our case against the Rebels."
"I'm telling you that we don't have to be separated! I saw it! Heck, you don't even get together with Apple, you get together with…"
"No, Dexter. Whatever this is, I'm not falling for it," Daring said with a shake of his head. "I am quite charming and girl love me, but I don't need to be set up when I know that I'm going to be with Apple. Now, run along and be a good… little…"
Dexter looked confused as Daring trailed off. He looked in the direction his brother was looking and his jaw dropped. Raven was sitting on top of something with a smile.
More specifically, Foxy's animatronic suit.
"Hey Dex? Why don't we go have a chat?" Raven said. Dexter decided it was better to follow Raven than be eaten and followed after her. Raven looked back to Daring and smirked. "Tell anyone about this, and Foxy here might get hungry." Daring gulped and hurried away.
"Oh! So I'm not a time traveler, but I'm what you would call Looping?" Dexter asked in understanding. "That makes a lot of sense. Me and Humphrey actually read a bunch of theories about that in the Lab."
"Wait… you guys run the whole MirrorNet and you guys study loops of all things?" Raven asked.
"Well, just theories. Nothing solid. Although, I did come across one mention that you were pregnant because the Internet? That didn't make much sense."
Raven winced. "Loops don't make sense," Raven said. "So… now that you're a part of our Looping family… what do you want to do?"
Dexter smirked. "Actually…"
3.6: Changing the Date
Apple was absolutely excited about Legacy Day. She had been waiting for this moment her entire life. She was happily bouncing down the halls of Ever After High on her first day. "This year is going to be hexelent!" she giggled to herself.
Her MirrorPhone suddenly buzzed. Curious, Apple picked it up. She figured it was just Blondie being the obsessive girl she was about every detail. Only it wasn't Blondie. A news article was on the phone. And Apple dropped it as she screamed.
"Legacy Day… is canceled?!"
Headmaster Grimm paced his office, glaring at the student in front of him. He had never had an issue with this student before. Always good, always excellent grades. But only that one student could have had that much of an influence on the MirrorNet. Only him.
"So. Dexter," Headmaster Grimm said. "What gave you the thought of submitting an article that canceling Legacy Day was a good idea?"
Dexter just gave him his awkward grin. "I honestly have no idea what you're talking about," he said. "I just so happened to be in the room when all the computers suddenly popped up with the article. I have not a clue how it happened."
The Headmaster glared down at the nerd. "You have a motive," he grunted. "You keep pestering me about your destiny and what it could possibly be. I keep telling you to be patient and you'll see. If this is your way of finding out before, then you are sorely mistaken."
Dexter gave him a simple shrug. "Still no idea what you're talking about," he said.
Headmaster Grimm growled. "Detention for the entire year! I cannot have behavior like this in this school! And especially a year this important!" he boomed.
Dexter simply gave him a shrug. "Fine," he said. However, he smirked. "But… I am your only chance in getting the article removed from all existence. I can do it… if, of course, you don't force anyone to sign it."
"WHAT?!" the Headmaster screamed in outrage.
Dexter shrugged again. "I feel as though no one should be forced into something they don't want to do," he said. "I'll get rid of the article only if you lift my punishment and don't force anyone to sign the Book."
The Headmaster looked like his head was going to blow off. Dexter kept in mind to invite Lizzie to come watch if that ever happened. Finally, the Headmaster grunted, "Fine. I will not force any one to sign the Book. But that article must be erased from history!"
"Done deal," Dexter nodded and got up to leave. However, he stopped at the door. "These things do take time. So it might be a while before the article is removed. I advise not having Legacy Day until then," he said. He walked out of the door and chuckled when he heard Headmaster Grimm's scream of rage.
3.7: The Weapon That Beats All Else (Death Note)
Raven blinked as she Awoke. She was in her home loop… but she sensed that there was something more to it. She checked her memories. Some of the students were gone, but other than that it seemed normal. Wait… something about a notebook…
Raven was in class at the moment she Awoke. She looked at the window. Just in time to see a red notebook fall from the sky and land on the ground. Knowing that this was probably the twist in this Loop, she made a mental note to grab the notebook after class.
It felt like forever to poor Raven. Once the class was dismissed, Raven rushed out of class and ran outside. The red notebook lay on the ground, motionless. Raven took a breath, grabbed it, and turned it over to read the title. And smirked.
"Hey Apple?"
"Yeah Briar?"
"You ever notice… how odd it's been around here? I mean… all of this…"
"Briar, sh! You don't want to be next!"
"Me? What are you talking about?"
"If you talk about what's going on, you'll be struck next!"
"By what?"
"This… love madness!"
It was quite true. All around Ever After High, couples have been popping up out of nowhere. Random ones, like Darling Charming and Hopper Croackington II. Or ones that made sense, like Sparrow Hood and Duchess Swan. Still, romance had been popping up everywhere, and Apple was trying to find out what was causing it.
"I don't think it's mad. Weird, sure, but I think it's harmless," Briar shrugged. "Oh, by the way, I can't help you with research tonight."
"Why?" Apple blinked.
"I have a date with Dexter. Isn't he cute?"
SNAP.
That was the sounds of the last of Apple's sanity.
"Um… Raven?"
Raven spun around from her desk and blinked in surprise. "Cupid? What are you doing here?"
"Well, one moment, I was dreaming about Dex… the next, I'm suddenly a love goddess who's supposed to guard the notebook you're using, the Ship Note," Cupid said nervously. "I don't understand what's going on…"
Raven sighed. "It's ok Cupid. You're in what's called a Loop. They're weird, and this isn't really the best one for your first… whoa, what am I saying? This one is perfect for your first one!"
"Huh?"
"Hang on, I'll explain everything. Oh, and do you know all the rules to the Ship Note? I only know what's written down."
"Headmaster Grimm, I want to organize a team to investigate all this love nonsense," Apple said. "It's interfering with regular social reactions and our destiny! How are we supposed to live happily ever after if all the romance is screwed up?"
Headmaster Grimm looked across at Apple from inside his office before nodding. "I agree. This love is unnatural. I'll approve of you a team of four others who can investigate what's going on. Who would you like on it?"
"Blondie, since she can find dirt where no one else can," Apple said. "Sparrow, because he might find something useful from among the other students. Humphrey, to monitor the school's MirrorNet for any traces."
Headmaster Grimm nodded at her choices. "And the fourth?" he asked.
Apple sighed and said, "Raven, since I have suspicions she's the one causing this."
Headmaster Grimm raised an eyebrow. "Why not just call her out on it?" he asked.
"Without proof? No, that would just prove I'm a target. This way, no one knows who started this. You can say you did because you thought we were the perfect ones for the job. I'll spy on Raven, find proof that she's the one causing this mess, and then we can stop her."
Headmaster Grimm nodded. "Very well. It's in your hands now," he said.
"Yeesh. Apple found out that quickly?" Cupid asked.
Raven nodded with a sigh. "Apple's probably going to try and get close to me. I can't use the Ship Note myself during the time I'm with Apple. But if I use it when I'm not with Apple, she'll expect something."
"Not to mention she'll probably have Humphrey monitor you with some hidden cameras," Cupid nodded. "Ok, so you can't write names in the Ship Note. How, then, are you going to continue writing ships without Apple figuring it out?"
"Well, one, if Humphrey is going to be monitoring me, and I hope not right this moment, I have to stop talking to you," Raven said. "Sorry Cupid, but talking to myself looks weird."
"No, I understand," Cupid said. "I'd like to help and write names myself… but according to this, I legit can't. Only the owner of the Ship Note can write names in it, unless the ownership is passed on to someone else. If it is passed though, all memories fade away."
"Which leads me to something else," Raven said. "Have any friends among the Gods of Love?"
Apple's jaw dropped. She couldn't believe her own eyes. Hopper, without even a blink, dumped Darling and wondered over to Bunny Blanc and asked her out. Thing was… Raven was sitting right next to her, and she was just as shocked as Apple was.
"What the…" Raven said.
"I know! No one did anything!" Apple cried. And by no one, she meant Raven. She was so sure Raven was the culprit, and yet there it was, love at it's peek and Raven didn't seem guilty in the slightest.
While Apple was trying to fit things together, Raven was smirking. She still had herShip Note, but thanks to Cupid, someone else had a Ship Note too and their on Love God. Raven knew neither of them were Awake, which would be quite interesting to watch. But so long as whoever had the other Ship Note wrote down ships while Raven was with Apple, then she knew she was scotch free.
"Off with their heads!" Lizzie said with a gleam in her eye. Maddie looked to see She was pointing to Hunter Huntsmen and Cedar Wood. Maddie giggled, pulled out her Ship Note, and subtely wrote the names in like this: Hunter/Cedar.
"Hunter was dating Ashlynn… hey, maybe we should pair her with someone too! Rebound!" Maddie said with a gasp.
Lizzie gave Maddie a smirk. "So long as this world falls to love, let it be so! Off with all their heads!" Lizzie declared.
"We have two Shippers," Apple said to her team.
Gasps were heard from among them. Apple noted Raven was the loudest. "I know it may come to a shock… but it makes sense now. There's a difference in how the two ship. The first Shipper came up with original ships and didn't break them up. The second Shipper, the one we're dealing with, only writes ships where someone breaks up with one person and moves onto anoher."
Raven cursed silently. Whoever the other Shipper was, they made a pattern too obvious for Apple to be able to distinguish them. She had to stop Apple and fast.
"But… how? And why?" Blondie asked. Out of the five there, Apple, Blondie, Raven, and Humphrey were all safe from the shipping onslaught. Sparrow was the only one with a girlfriend, which Apple very well knew.
"Maybe they're suffering from a break-up themselves?" Raven suggested. "Considering the only major couple before the love streak is now in shambles… perhaps Ashlynn's the one doing this."
"Ashlynn?" Apple asked with a raise of her eyebrow. "Why not Hunter?"
"Hunter's the one who dumped her, yo," Sparrow said. "Why would Hunter want revenge on something he did himself?"
"Makes sense. Alright, Humphrey, set a pair of eyes on Ashlynn. Let's keep an eye on her."
"Hi Raven!"
"Oh, hey Maddie," Raven said with a smile. Due to all the drama with the Ship Note, Raven hadn't been spending as much time with Maddie. But, with the investigation off her tail for the moment, it'd be nice just to talk to her best friend for a while.
"By the way, you're best match is with Apple, but that's just what fanon dictates," Maddie giggled.
Or not.
Raven and Maddie entered a fork in the hall. Raven led Maddie to the left and hid off to the side. "Ok, no cameras are here," Raven muttered. She quickly pulled out her Ship Note and touched it to Maddie. Cupid appeared behind Raven.
"Ooo! So you're the other one with a Ship Note!" Maddie giggled.
"Yes, I am. Maddie, I have a few questions for you," Raven asked. "Who's you're Love God?"
"Someone by the name of Lizzie. She's cool!"
Raven nodded. She had expected Lizzie, since she was the only other one other than Cupid obsessed about hearts and love. "Ok. Next question. Why do you only write couples who are already paired up?"
"Because, some people like canon, others like fanon, and I like crack!" Maddie giggled.
Raven should have known that would be her answer.
"Ok. Last question. Why did you say my perfect match was Apple?" Raven asked.
"Your love god hasn't offered you the eye deal?"
Raven raised an eyebrow and looked at Cupid. "What eye deal?" Raven asked.
Cupid looked nervous and twiddled her fingers. "Um… there is this deal where in exchange for never falling in love, you can… view someone's perfect soul mate…" Cupid said awkwardly. "It's stupid though! Everyone should find love!"
Raven sighed. "It would have been nice to know…" Raven muttered. Then an idea sparked in her head. "Hang on… Maddie, I have an idea. And it might actually end this Loop."
"What's a Loop?"
"Er… I'll explain later."
Apple and Raven were alone in the Lab, watching footage. Currently, they were watching Alistair and Kitty on the screen. "Nothing so far, just friendly chatter," Apple muttered. "You sure Shipper told you they were getting together next?"
"Yes, actually," Raven said, pulling out the Ship Note, but laid it face down so Apple couldn't see the title. "Any second now." She opened the notebook, pulled out a pen, and started writing.
"I don't know. It doesn't seem like anything's happening," Apple grumbled. Suddenly, without warning, Kitty jumped onto Alistair and kissed him. Apple's eyes went wide. "Holy angels! Something just happened!" Apple said, turning to Raven.
However, instead of seeing Raven shocked, she saw that Raven was holding up the notebook open to a specified page. Apple paled when she saw what was on the page.
Kitty/Alistair 'Kittystair'- Kitty will kiss Alistair, which will spark them to start dating exactly when this sentence is finished being written.
Apple looked up at Raven. "You! I knew it! And I have proof too!" she said, smirking.
"Actually… I win," Raven said, smirking back. "Any time now Maddie."
Confused, Apple looked back at the screen. Maddie was in front of the camera, giggling. She had finished writing something down. Maddie turned the book and Apple paled.
Apple/Raven- Apple will cease all hatred toward Raven because she loves her. This will happen in a minute from which this sentence is written.
"No…" Apple said, paling.
"Yep. Of course, this means I'm actually sacrificing myself too," Raven said with a shrug. "Not that I mind, really. I'm sure we'll be a great couple."
Apple shook her head. "I can't lose…" she said.
"Sorry, you kind of did," Raven said, shrugging. "Oh, hey Cupid? Put this in your sub-space pocket, would you? I relinquish ownership of the Ship Note. Just put it where I showed you."
"What?" Apple asked weakly.
"Oh, nothing you need to worry yourself about."
Apple nodded with a sigh. She had lost. Raven had too… but this was more of a victory for her. Apple looked at the clock. Ten seconds left. She still had a little time. Maybe…
"Raven, I hate you."
"Yeah, I know."
BN: Don't kill the Ben! For realzies! Sorry to leave on a negative note… but it's Death Note with ships. How else was it supposed to end? Anyway, this set wasn't my best, but hey, I'll get there.
3.1: This is what I get for watching Markiplier in the morning. Just a gag from one of his Reading the Comments videos.
3.2: If you think about it, Apple kind of is a hypocrite. If Raven embraced her evil, Apple would have immediately hated and despised her. I find that Maddie is able to show this because, not only is this Variant Loop cruel, but Maddie is actually trying to be evil. Makes you wonder how 'good' Apple actually is to begin with.
3.3: Two sides: Queen Raven and Apple. Kind of switches the whole Royal vs. Rebel concept, don't ya think?
3.4: In case you didn't get it, Maddie got the ability to remove her body parts from the Monster High Loop when she replaced Frankie.
3.5: Basically the lame way of how Dexter Awoke. Kind of sad he doesn't get a lot of mention.
3.6: And then Dexter pulls off something cool. See? I can be a nice guy sometimes.
3.7: "When a ship is written in the Ship Note, if details of the ship are not specified, the couple will immediately get together in the next forty seconds." This loop may be over… but Cupid still has the Ship Note… and she's Awake now…
BN: What did you guys think? Personally, my favorite out of these is 3.7. I liked writing all of them, but I think I outdid myself with basically writing the plot of Death Note in one Loop, but making it kid friendly. Too be honest, the Ship Note is more dangerous than the Death Note. It really is.
I'm open for suggestion for more Loop ideas! I'm averaging out at seven loops per chapter, so if you guys have any ideas for loops or fused loops, please let me know! I'd be happy to add it and give you credit?
Like? Hate? Meh? Have an idea you want me to write? Let me know in a review!
