Ok hey people hear is another chapter like I said, hopefully somebody will read this and review it, I was not so shore about the last chapter because there was misspellings and it was pretty short, and the reason why it was short was because I am new hear so go easy on me, ok I am trying to bring you a story, that surprisingly nobody came up with. So long story short I am new ok and I need feedback, so let's start.
Chapter 2 Holy #$%$%
It was a regular night in Vale. Unlike the last few days when a bunch of no good teenagers try to be heroes and cause nothing but trouble. But the strange thing is, it has been quiet. There were no robberies, dust was affordable again and surprisingly people started to walk the streets at night again, and the people started to come out of their doors more often. It was almost as if those dust robbers just disappeared into thin air.
Well the only new thing was, that somebody that no one saw or new about dressed in what appeared to be an old trench coat wearing the hood up, with fingerless gloves, and a sword on his back, just came strolling down the sidewalk. (A/N honestly this is a bit of a no brainer we all know who it is)
Two months of searching this may be the place. After looking across the kingdoms all he could find was empty rooms and dusty hallways, but no this has to be it. Well hopefully, but wait the people hear, they all look….fine? No this has to be the place, this has to be. Wait one minute, ask someone, Cinder can just be hiding somewhere.
"Hello are you new here," Al calmed himself down, all he needed to do was turn around.
"Um Mister?" It was a girl probably by the age of 15 or 16 she had orange hair, and a grey and green color dress.
"Yes I am new here, I was just wondering where the nearest dust shop is"
"Oh, ok the closest shop is over there, if you have not noticed," Al looked where the girl pointed at, and saw the dust shop.
"Ok thank you, and before I go, can you tell me you name"
"Oh, it's Penny"
"Ok Penny I hope you have a nice day, or night, oh and by the way you do know the way to you home right"
"Yes I do, there is no need to worry about me"
"Alright then it has been nice knowing you," Al said putting his hand out.
"Um what am I supposed to do with it," asked the curios girl.
"You shake it, what you have never seen a handshake before," Al said with a puzzled face.
"Well yes I have err….wait a moment you did not tell me you name," Al's face turned from a puzzled face to a smile.
"Well Penny I will tell you my name is, Alphonse, Alphonse Elric the seventh, or just Al for short"
"Wait you said Alphonse, you mean you are the grate descendent of one of the two famous Elric brothers," Penny said with a twinkle in her eyes.
"Yes that is me, the one and only"
"Oh my freckling GOD, I never thought this day will happen, I am you biggest fan, I always wanted to meet you," If Al did not know that so many people where fans of him just for the things he did, he will certainly know now.
"Well it is good to know you are a fan"
"OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG, I can't believe this is happening!"
"Alright girl, easy there, don't want to wake the hole city," after what felt like an eternity Al finally managed to calm Penny down.
"Alright Penny I will make it up to you, how about something to remember me by"
"YES PLEASE YES IT CAN BE ANYTHING"
"Alright then close your eyes," after penny closed her eyes Al clapped his hands and placed his right hand on the ground, and then he lifted his hand and out came a grey rose and the detailing on it was amassing.
"Well Penny open your eyes," as penny opened her eyes she saw a rose, the material it was made from made it look odd, but it looked amassing.
"OMG! Sorry"
"Its ok, now don't you have any parents you should go to"
"Oh, that's right, well thank you again, Mr. Elric, I will make my friends will hear about you," Penny said as she skipped across the road in such a childish way.
"Kids toda-, oh that is right, oh shit that's right Cinder I need to find Cinder," then Al realized something, it was the dust shops that where being robbed, so might as well ask the dust store owners.
Hopefully that talk was worth it. After walking halfway around the street, Al saw a sign at the door.
Working hours 9:30 am to 11:30 pm
"Dammit I should have brought a watch with me, hopefully it is still nine," All Al needed to do was push the door and walk inside to see the dust that was still being sold there, what a relief they are still open, the next thing Al wanted to do was to say a quote from the good book itself, ah fuck it might as well say it.
"From the dust we came and to the dust we shall return," Al then approached the counter where the casher is.
"Hello are you here to buy something, our dust here is on sale" said the casher, he had a hat on and an apron like any casher would.
"No sorry, I am looking for the people who caused some of the dust robberies here in Vale, so if it is ok with you can you please share some information that may help me find them," Al's words had thrown the casher off a bit.
"Well ok I think I may know something, but I do not think that what I know will help at all," it did not matter to Al, as long as it is info that is reliable anything will be fine.
"Alright then go on ahead, tell me what you know"
"Well after I saw this one robbery of another dust shop, I saw the people who robed it went to an alleyway to the left side of the store, the store that was robbed is not too far from here," even though Al was happy that this guy had something to say or else this search was all for nothing, he could not help but wonder but ask a simple question.
"Why haven't you shared this information with the police?"
"There was no need, by the time the investigation started, the robberies stopped"
"Ok then thank you for the help"
After walking out of the store, Al then just kept walking down the sidewalk, and wonder what happened these few days.
"I guess I will half to wait till I get there, and might as well sing this song sense it is in my head"
Oshitete, oshiete yo
Sono shikumi wo
Boku no naka ni
Dare ka iru no
Kowareta kowareta yo
Kono sekai de kimi ga warau
Nani mo miezu ni
"I might as well stop there for now, since this should be the place," Al should be right during his little song he was able to go to an alleyway and see a garage door that actually looks as if it has not been open recently.
"Well this should be the place, since these guys has not been robbing stores for a couple days now I guess, so ether A: Cinder is still hiding her goons and her bfs at this place or B: she moved to another location, well only one why to find out"
Al then prepared himself, he cracked his nucleus, and readied his katana.
"This is it, remember alchemy is a science of deconstructing and reconstructing mater, you do not have ant limit to what you touch or change, but remember do not perform a transmutation on a human being living or dead," the alchemist calmed himself and opened the door transmutated his scythe and got in his stance, and what was there to greet him?
"Oh my god"
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