Kibou no Tenshi Hi everybody! I know my fic is like, messy, but I don't know how to explain it to all of you. Just continue reading and if you think I need to improve on some aspects, please review and tell me. I will try to improve by your suggestions.
Daisuke MMPH!!! * Tries to get the gag off but to no avail *
Iori Kibou no Tenshi does not own Digimon and never will. And somebody get me prune juice! I'm alright now and it's time to celebrate!
Kibou no Tenshi And I will replace the squiggle format with a dash for thoughts from now on. Author's notes are in brackets. Prune juice all around!
Paris, France(This takes place in Paris.)
He squirmed in his seat. 5 minutes passed. 10 minutes passed. And she still wasn't here. He and the 8-year-old him were complete opposites now. The tall, handsome blonde had many fangirls, mostly in Japan. His babyish face turned into a mature, serious face, one that you could tell that he was a happy-go-lucky guy. His height stretched out to 1.79m, because of all the basketball practices. His eyes were coloured with turquoise blue, deep with emotion and feelings. Any one could just get lost in his eyes. He had a muscular chest, but not like those chests those weight lifters had. [You know what I'm trying to hit at?] Wherever he went, everyone would point at him and whisper while rabid fangirls would just try to glomp him. Takaishi Takeru, the basketball champ, Takaishi Takeru, the cute blonde, Takaishi Takeru, the one who always scored 'A's in everything, he was Takeru. That name just sent people full of praises, fangirls full of energy to catch him, teachers full of good comments. He was the new Takeru. [No, he's not a clone.]
-Good thing no one here recognizes me. By this time, if I were in Japan, I would be running away from those fangirls. She's so late…wonder if anything happened to her.
" Hey, that cool guy there looks like Takaishi Takeru!" the whiny, excited sound of a fangirl's voice pierced his thoughts.
-Oops. Spoke too soon.
"AAH! It IS! "And off he went, with a crowd of fangirls trailing him, following his every move.
-Damn. They're fast. Next time I'll master Shinmeryuu before going anywhere. [Shinmeryuu is the set of sword moves Motoko from Love Hina uses. It's pretty powerful, and very useful. ]
Panting, Takeru ran to the nearest crowd he could find, where he could hide himself. He squeezed in, trying to fake himself so that the fangirls would mistake him for someone else. But no matter where he went, there was still a glimpse of them.
-Sometimes I wonder whether Athletics is the most popular sport in all schools. Can someone come out and turn me into someone else?
"Calling all women! Undergarments selling at 1 franc each! Come and get it!" Takeru froze. He had been in a crowd of people who were buying bra and panties and so on. [Franc is the currency in France, I think.]
-Weird, lots of men are crowding the store too. Do they need panties or bra? I don't want to be mistaken as a pervert. I'd better get out of here.
Crawling out quietly, Takeru crept away stealthily, hoping that the fangirls would not notice him. He stared in the front, not knowing where to go. Behind him was the undergarment shop. In front were the streets of Paris. To his left, the mall. To his right, a bus station. He looked behind him just in case they found out, but to his surprise they were buying everything they could find in the store. -…Should I say I'm surprised or freaked out? " Takeru-kun! At last I found you!" A voice nearby rang out. He turned around, half-expecting that it was Her, half-expecting that it was just an annoying fangirl. There she was, standing straight and looking pissed, was Catherine. [Catherine is that pretty girl with Floramon. You know, that blonde? ] " Oh Takeru-kun, where have you been?" -Damn her to come so late and ask me where I had been. She's late. In no time, the duo were sitting in a café, placing their orders on what to eat. -I really wonder sometimes, am I too commercialized? I didn't know that my popularity stretched all the way to France. How many fangirls of me are there in this world? " Takeru-kun? What would you like?"- Just this time to break my thoughts. " I have no preference. Order whatever to like, then." When this sentence was finished, the corners of Catherine's mouth turned up, forming a cheeky grin. "If you say so," her long fingers stretched to the menu and pointed to a few dishes. -Wonder what's her problem at times. She's always kidding around with me. Slouching in the comfortable seat, Takeru looked at the scenery outside. People of different shapes and sizes, walked past. Children begging their parents to buy them candy or toys. To his surprise, he saw a Japanese manga shop across the road. [Manga is a comic drawn by mostly Japanese artists. CLAMP, which is made up of 4 girls, (Igarashi Satsuki, Ohkawa Nanase, Nekoi Mick & Apapa Mokona) has beautiful art and a good plotline. I LOVE THEM!!!] -Hmm… you wouldn't expect a manga store to be here. I'll pop in and see whether they have any good stuff. Suddenly, he saw the fangirls carrying lots of underwear going past the window. He felt a sense of fright and ducked under the table. -Argh, why must they pass here of all places? I never can never seem to escape. "Takeru-kun? What are you doing?" He turned up to see a kind face directly above him, staring straight into his eyes. - Pure blue eyes. Blue as the ocean. Blue as Taichi's shirt when he was 11. Taichi…Hikari… What the!? What am I thinking? She'll never like me…for what I did…going to France and leaving her, alone. Throwing her into the big world alone. And I told Daisuke all that to make him give up on Hikari. Was it in a moment of haste that I did that? Or was I being greedy, just wanting Hikari for myself… He raised his head from under the table and bolted up, feeling embarrassed. -Hikari, if I had a chance, I would say this… I love you. " Votre ordre est ici!" the sharp voice with a heavy French accent of the plump waitress rang out. Slowly, the dishes were served and the waitress smiled, showing all her front teeth. Catherine smiled back and paid her. Takeru looked at the dishes and froze. "What the…ESCARGOT?!!!"Kibou no Tenshi Cool, I'm finally done.
Daisuke * Finally finds a scissors and cuts the gag off * WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING?!!! HOW COULD YOU PUT MY HIKARI WITH TAKERU?!!!!
Kibou no Tenshi Lalala…what are you saying…lalala…HEY! I thought you gave Hikari up?
Daisuke That was only in the story, I'm not giving up on Hikari-chan! * Starts drooling *
Kibou no Tenshi Oi, watch it! You're drooling all over the new carpet! That's it! Daisuke est laid!!!
Daisuke Huh? What does that mean?
Kibou no Tenshi * Pays no attention to him * Anyway…the French phrase in this chapter meant: Your order is here! And please review! Thanks to all those who reviewed! Bye!
Daisuke What did that mean?
Kibou no Tenshi Just SHUT UP and come here!!!
