I'M ALIVE. sorry its been so long since I've up dated, its been like two years or something. I have just ever not had the time or I've had writers block. Anywho, I'm going to try to get back on track with my stores and add more chapters but first I'll be going over some of my old stuff to see if I can improve some spelling errors or add a bit more to the writing to make them more detailed. Since its been a while since I've uploaded I would like to see if there are any beta readers that might help me as my spelling is just terrible, but I'm having trouble finding out how to contact any. ( Not that I knew how to the last time I was writing any thing).
Let me know how I'm doing and if theres anything else I can improve.
stepping into the dark room, Sora in his paranoia tries to stay in the light coming in from the hallway as he makes his way deeper into Denzels darkened bed room. Step by step he draws ever closer to his little brothers bed, up on he see's some thing that lays just under the covers. At about 4 steps away, what ever is hiding under the sheets of the bed starts to squirm slightly for a moment and lets out a sort of snorting leather similar to that he herd out side in the hall, it stops as suddenly as it started but was still enough to make him jump and stop in place until all was quirt once again. After his heart had returned to a slightly lower and even pace, Sora nervously finished the last 3 steps to the bed. Looking dawn at the moving lump, Sora nervously reach's down and grasp's the blanket, pulling it away quickly to find...nothing, apart from a few creases in the bed spread, the mattress held not but a single white pillow. Sora turns to look else where in the room for his little brother Denzel, only to come face to face with a fair skinned, silver haired man, who seemed to be only slightly older then him self.
Gasping he stumbles back almost tripping over the edge of the bed, his back crashing with a thump against a wall, jostling some toys on the shelves above the palms of his hands flat against the wall to steady him self, Sora takes a better look at the silver stranger that has invaded his familys home. From the light seeping in from the window, he could make out that the other was at lest a head taller then him, even if he had still been on his feet, Sora would have to look up to keep eye contact with him. As he was so very fair, his hair and skin seemed to glow with the very essence of the moons pale blue light. The clothing he was adorned with was like some thing out side of reality, he sported a black cloak with a high folded collar that had holes of multiple sizes in the cloth, he even had a second cloak underneath of a shimmering blue material, and under all that Sora could see he had dark pants, black ridding boots and a black leather like armor with a very ornate designs on the chest, with black gloves to match. But what really struck Sora, was his heavily black lined bedroom eyes, that looked as if they were a pair of living aquamarine crystals. A thought struck Sora, that if those iris's were liquid, he could very wall drowned in them.
"It was not my intention for the young one to witness the existence of my subjects. It saddens me to say that it is now necessary to remove him from your world." As the oddly dressed man speaks, Sora gets to his feet all the while taking in all that he is saying. " What do you mean remove him? who are you? where did you take Denzel? And why, what for"?
"For the protection of my people, for you see if some one of an older age was to cache a glimpse of the goblins that dwell in my vast city who was say, visiting your world for a day of mischief, they would usually think it nothing more then a trick of the mind. How ever, if some one as young as your younger brother who has not yet learned to not fear that which go's bump in the night, were to admit that they had seen such a thing, others may also think twice before dismissing them from there minds". Sora ever more confused at the mention of mythical creatures and worried at his missing brother, starts to panic and clings to any way or reason he could come up with to keep his brother from being taken away, he grips his head in his hands as his eyes run with tears, looking around the bed room desperate for an answer. "bu-but you..he.. you can't, he's so young an-and I've seen you and I'm still here, and he won't tell any body any way, so please, please let him go"! Unbeknownst to Sora, his grief and fright unsettled the silver haired man, but he hid his true feelings well and held firm to his carefully planed scheme.
" While it is true that you have in fact seen me in full vue of this room, it still stands that you have not yet seen any sight of my subjects, you may or may not have hard there voices, you may have even felt there presence here in your house, but it is known with out a dout that you have yet to cache sight of a single one of there kind. My title is Riku the sovereign Goblin King, and I have it with in my authority to protect my kingdom and all who dwell with in it walls. I have seen and heard first hand, him revealing to you of what he has seen, and I can not allow him to spread the world to others". Listening to all of this, Sora at first felt a heavy pain deep in his belly from the stress and misery of loosing a loved one, it was so horrid that he was finding it hard to stay standing even with the support of the wall behind him, but as the words continue, the pain is little by little taken over by a simmering rage that grows ever stronger. By the end of this sordid speech it has turned in to a hot boil, and much like a tea kettle full of steam he simply can not hold it in.
" who the hell do you think you are, JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE. TAKING SOME ONE ESLES FAMILY AWAY FROM THEM, LIKE IT'S AN OKAY THING TO DO, I HAVE HALF A MIND TO MARCH MY SELF STRIATE IN TO YOUR STINKING KINGDOM TO TAKE MY BROTHER BAKE"! His rant over, Sora is left gasping for breath and shaking still full of anger at his home being violated in this way. angry that he let him self feel so powerless when his brother needs him now more then he ever has before. The King on the other hand, could not hope for a better opportunity. "Oh you truly feel that strongly for your sibling"? Let it be said, that King Riku had a true talent when it came to acting. Sora on the other hand could do nothing to hide the look of determination on his face as he continued to scowl at him. " Hmm your strong emotional bond with your brother has peeked my curiosity, and like my subjects I am a little fond to a little fun every now and then, so I'll make you a wager".
Sora court of guard by this now has a look of uncertainty. "What do you mean wager"? With a smile Riku steps past Sora forcing him to turn to keep his eyes on him, only to loose his breath when instead of the other side of Denzels room, he finds what looks to be an impossibly huge maze with a castle toped with large pointed spears in the Centre. While he is taking this all in Riku the King of Goblins starts to speak. " All you see before you is my domain. Your younger brother is being kept in my castle at the Centre of my goblin citadel. The challenge I present to you is, that you'll have 12 hours with in which to make it to the Centre and in to the castle and find your brother, if you make it you may return to your home together with him, if not he stays with me. What will your choice be"?
all the while Sora has been looking up on the crazy Goliath of a labyrinth he do's not hesitate in the slightest. " There really is't a choice to make is there, I'm going home with Denzel or I'm not going home at all. So to respond to your question, it's on Ri-" Turning again to face King Riku as he had wondered behind him as he spoke, Sora faces him only to find him gone all together. Nothing but desert and some dried up and long dead weeds where he was once standing.
Wanted to get this out for Christmas, hope you all have a merry ( unless you don't celebrate it in your religion) and a happy new year to. ( pulls party popper)
