I decided to change the storyline a bit :). Anyways heres chapter 3. Enjoy.
Chapter 3
"What are you doing here?" Brittany asked. Although she had never actually met Charlene she had been told many stories about the pretty chipette who had once been Alvin's girlfriend much to the jealousy of Brittany.
"I'm going on holiday with my girls." She replied. She was wearing a low cut white top with denim shorts and a pretty scarf round her neck.
"Your girls?" Alvin asked.
"Yes, meet my sisters Rose and Patricia" Charlene said as two chipmunk girls came walking up to them. One of the girls was wearing a short white dress and matching shoes with a rose in her honey coloured hair. The other was wearing a plain blue top and white shorts with trainers on her feet and a blue headband pushing back her almost white hair back.
"Wow." Alvin said staring at them.
Brittany glared at Alvin and elbowed him.
"Where are you going on holiday to?" asked Eleanor.
"A camp." Charlene pulled a face "It was my dad's idea."
"What camp?" Brittany asked praying that it weren't the same one they were going to.
"So Alvie, How have you been lately?" Charlene asked totally ignoring Brittany's question "And what are you doing with these....Girls?"
"Us girls are the Chipettes the best girl chipmunk singers in the world." said Brittany.
"Oh really?" said Charlene "Because we happen to be the best girl chipmunk singers in the universe. I bet we can out sing you easily!"
"What!" Brittany cried "As if! I bet we could beat you any day!"
"Brittany! Calm down." Eleanor said trying to pull her back.
"Name the time and place." said Charlene.
"Charlene." said the girl in blue behind her in a warning tone.
"Friday night." Brittany declared.
"But Brittany we're going to the camp tonight how are we going to sing against them?" Jeanette asked.
"We're going to Evergreen Lake camp." said Charlene running her fingers through her long hair.
"So are we." Brittany said "And if we win you have to cut your hair short, give us fifty dollars and admit we're the best girl chipmunk singers!"
"And if we win you have to cut all your hair off, give us seventy-five dollars and say we're the best girl chipmunk singers." Charlene said.
"Hey, how comes we get worse concequences?" Brittany asked.
"Because you look worse."
Everyone edged away from Brittany. Even Charlene took a few steps back when she saw the angry chipette's look and the fire in her eyes.
"Brittany calm down. She was only saying that." said Alvin.
"I know she was only saying that because I happen to be the prettiest girl in town." said Brittany "If we win you have to cut all your hair off."
"You can't keep adding stuff." said Charlene.
"Why are you chicken?" Brittany smirked.
"Fine. Deal." She said holding out her hand.
"Deal." said Brittany shaking her hand.
The other two Chipettes and Charlene's sisters looked at each other with worried looks.
By this time Miss Miller and Dave had come out to see where the chipmunks and chipettes had got to.
"Come on guys I thought you'd be hungry." Dave said then he spotted Charlene with Rose and Patricia. "Charlene? Why, I haven't seen you in a long time."
"Hey Dave." Charlene said sweetly.
"What are you doing here and who are these girls?" He asked.
"We stopped off on our way to EverGreen Lake Camp." said the girl in the white dress "I'm Charlene's sister, Rose."
"And I'm Patricia." said the girl in blue.
"Well what a coincidence we're going to EverGreen too." said Dave.
"Charlene!" cried a voice from behind.
A chipmunk in jeans and a dazzling white shirt called from where he was standing in the cafe.
"Oh, yes dad?" said Charlene
"Come sit down and order something to eat. It's a long way to camp and you'll be complaining you're hungry if you don't have any lunch now."
"Well I'll see you later." said Charlene walking away who was followed by Rose and Patricia.
"What a nice girl she is." said Dave.
"Nice!" Brittany cried marching into the cafe.
"What's up with Brittany?" Dave asked.
"Long story." Alvin said as they quickly followed Brittany to their table.
They all sat down and ordered their lunches. Once they were done they all went to the bathroom and then set off for camp again. No one talked much on the way to camp. Eleanor and Jeanette were very worried. They didn't want to be bald and they didn't have seventy-five dollars to pay if they lost.
Brittany was lost in thought thinking about what she should wear to the sing off.
And the chipmunks were worried for their friends.
When they eventually got to the camp the sky was dark and all of them were very tired.
After they had parked the car and walked into the entrance, A woman appeared. She was fat with crooked teeth and a nose like a birds beak. Some of her hair was in a messy bun on her head and the rest of it had come loose from the bun and decided it would fall into the womans eyes so she had to keep brushing it to the side with her hand.
"Ah hello I'm David Seville and this is Mis Miller. We came with our kids. Are our names on the list?"
"You're late!" The woman bellowed looking down a check list and ticking several names off the list.
"Yes I know we got stuck in traffic." said Dave "May we be shown to our rooms? We're very tired."
"I'm very tired myself." said the woman "Mary!"
A timid woman came out from behind the reception office.
"Yes ma'am?" she asked almost in a whisper.
"Show the late comers to their rooms."
"What are the room numbers?" Mary asked quietly.
"Do I have to do everything? Look on the list." Said the woman shoving her check list into Marys pale hands.
"Yes Miss Myers." Mary said she looked at Dave and gestured at him to follow her.
They set off down many corridors and up several staircases.
"Room H10." said Mary stopping to open the woodendoor to reveal a room with three beds and some simple wooden furniture.
"Ah, this will do for us." said Brittany taking the key from Marys hand. "Come on girls lets go to bed."
The Chipettes dragged their luggage into the room and with that she shut the door on Miss Miller, Dave and the boys.
Mary continued to walk a little further down and stopped by another door with H18 on it. She opened it and it looked identical to the chipettes room.
"This will be our room." said Alvin grabbing the key and running into the room with his brothers following with their suitcases.
Mary continued to show where Dave and Miss Millers seperate rooms were.
"Brittany do you really think it was a good idea to make that deal with Charlene?" Eleanor asked pulling her pyjama top over her head. "What if we lose?"
"Oh Ellie! Of course we'll win we're fabulous and imagine how funny those girls will look with no hair." Brittany said laughing at the thought.
"But, but Brittany what if we do lose?" Jeanette asked pulling the covers over her.
"We won't! Now shut up about it and lets go to sleep." Brittany said as she turned out the lights.
But of course Eleanor and Jeanette were still very worried but fell asleep quickly.
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