To an awesome reviewer!

First thing, "Collaborations with and their own DCUO characters" was an error on my part. I have been meaning to make a collaboration with a friend that also has a DCUO character, but I haven't heard from her in a while and I don't know her account off hand. I will make the change once I hear from her.

I will take your suggestion to heart, anything to make reading easier for others is always wonderful advice. I just looked at the chapter and apparently the divider I put was somehow deleted when this was published. (-_-u

Since you pointed out that sentence I am a tad embarrassed. I will make an update later to try and make it less awkward later.

Expect the second chapter soon; I just want to go over it again with a fine tooth comb.

Also, the next chapter will introduce my other character. The tone of the chapter will be different from the first chapter since she is a more intense and serious sort of character. I want to try and fit individual based chapters in a certain way, so if you notice the change that is the reason.

Thanks again for the review, I hope you enjoy newer chapters to come!