Hello, my readers. Cats, humans, and other creatures alike, I now present you with my story, which will be not a story, yet a novel. ( It's a reaaal long idea!) And, i have my twilight stories too. So you must be patient. My life does not revolve around stories. Also, Majorly, My "N" is kinda broken. You have to push real hard, so if you get any words, that look like gibberish, imagine an . Cuz I might miss some words. :)

Previously:

"I let you win." He grumbled.

"Suuure. And hedgehogs fly?" I flicked his nose and headed towards, my new home, the fighters den. Falling asleep slowly, as wolf lay beside me, as our breath evened out.


I twisted my body around, staring into a white she-cats eyes. She smelled of the clans. Her eyes burned with hatred. Somehow that hurt my feelings. I growled. She swiped an extended paw at me. I attacked her. My teeth were at her neck in an instant.

"It's your choice,sister." The she-cat whispered And then…

I woke up.

"Great Skies, Cinder! You look as if you saw a ghost." Wolf looked at me. " Did you have one of those hedgehog nightmares again?" I growled and swipped at his nose, claws sheathed. He dodge my attack. " But seriously, girl. Whats up?"

"I had a dream that I was about to kill my…sister." I spat the name with disgust.

"Sister??" Wolf asked, shocked. " I didn't know you had-"

"Neither did I." I growled.

"So what are you going to do?"

"It's just a dream,Wolf." I sighed. " Ignore it I guess."

"Good choice." He said, Twining his tail with mine. "Now, lets hunt."

"Always so eager to eat." I sighed, and rolled my eyes.

"More today though, I mean, it's our first raid!" He said excitedly.

"I know," I said. " But I am not related to pigs like you." I sighed.

"Hello, pigs are fat, and can't fight." He sighed. " That's why I am called-"

"Wolf." I answered bored, as if it was a question I answer everyday.

"You got that right!" He smiled, and winked at me before running out of the entrance. At that moment, I swear my heart stopped.

"You coming?" Wolfs voice pulled my thoughts away.

"Yeah."I said, ad followed him through the gorse.

I came through the tunnel, with my mouth full of fresh kill, wolf at my flank. We walked into the clearing.

"Ah, there you two are! Your on the raid, get ready." Blood said, and before I knew it, I was stumbling towards the group. Blood walked I front of the group. " I decided we need prisoners." He growled. " Hawk, mountain, Thorn, and Fang. You four and I will capture prisoners. The rest of you, gather 3 kits. River, Cinder and Leaf, capture the kits, the rest ,guard. " I heard moo snort in jealousy as I stole her spot. But, we all just bowed. " Very good, Assembly. Now get ready," We all crouched, " Good Job," He mused, yet, all of us knew what happens when you get on blood's bad side. "Ready?" He growled. " My eyes locked on the entrance. "Stop at the creek, move." He said, as I darted forward, my chests heaved as I ran as fast as I could.

"It's not a race cinder," Thorn said beside me.

"I know," I said, as I slowed, Thorn slowed too. " I just want to make a good impression with Blood."

"You won't if you're as tired as a kit who just chased a rabbit."

"Your right." I sighed. " I will make a good impression by getting a great kit."

"Here's a hint: Get a kit, that's like yourself, like it is your mirror." I nodded.

"So, was I the perfect kit?"

"In a way…" He laughed. " You were excellent," He licked the fur between my ears, and the, he sped up to the stream. I slowed to wolf's pace.

"Your fast." He said, His water blue eyes caught me off guard. They were as deep as the lake. I forced myself to look away.

"Thanks." I murmured.

"I mean," he started, " Your like a rabbit." He sighed then, changed the subject; " I will guard you with my life." He said. I looked up at him. " I promise."

"That would mean a lot to me," I said. Suddenly, my foot hit empty air, I slid down the hill, but teeth grabbed my scruff before I hit the cold water.

"Whoa.shit." The cat that was holding my scruff said.

"What?" I dropped to the ground.

"Watch it." Wolf said. I sighed ad flicked his nose with my tail.

"Thank you." I whispered, and then we jumped over the creek.

We ran to the ravine, all was quiet as twilight was amount us.

"Ready?" Wolf whispered.

"I hope." I whispered back as my muscles tensed.

"Attack!!" Blood yowled and I dove over the edge, dodging cats, as I ran to the nursery, the she-cats were ready. It was 3 to 3. That is when, I saw the perfect kit. It was a kit with grey fur had piercing blue eyes just like mine.

"We need Kits." I growled. At this time, I wish I knew how to seduce them, like thunder. So far, every she-cat has given him a kit I think it's because he is so big, and yet, his eyes, just pull you in.

"Why do you think, we would give you our kits?" A orange one spat.

"Easy way or hard way, it's your choice." Leaf said.

"Hard," They growled. " You will never get our kits." And, the, I leaped at the torteshiell. Ripping through her pelt as I grabbed the silver one in my jaws.

The torteishell's eyes widened in fear, I swipped my paw, across her eye, the, her nose, then neck. Enough blood to make them stop fighting you. I remembered Thorns words, I set the kit down, and slammed my paw on her head. I had my paw on her limp body, but I could feel her bleeding.

"What's her name?" I growled.

"Cinderkit." The mother choked out. My eyes widened but, I grabbed the kit and ran out, getting to camp quickly. I set the kit down, to catch my breath. Few cats were in the clearing from the raid. I walked to the nursery.

"Aw!" Flower mewed ad went to take her, but I shook my head, I set her down.

"I found the perfect kit, she absolutely mirrors me. I am not letting her go that early." I sighed.

"What's her name?" Flower asked.

"Her mother named her cinderkit." I sighed.

"She looks just liked you did when you were a kit."

"I want to train her." I said.

"You will,dear. I have never seen someone so commited." Flower wadered off to get herbs. "Eat these, it will help you sleep." I slowly ate the herbs, curled around the kit, and fell asleep.


I know, i am totally butchering the story Erin hunter came up with, but thats why it's called FANFICTION. Anywho, yes, Cinder will raised Cinderkit, no, cinderkit, will not be Cinder as a learning. ( I smell a contest coming up!)

OKay, I hope, I taught you guys, why they give up there kits, it's all or one. All of them die or they give up one. I hope this isn't confuseling!

Cinderheart