I know it's short but they get bigger. Maria's POV
Pain. The back of my head was throbbing almost mercilessly. Slowly, I opened my eyes, finding nothing but darkness. Where am I? What happened to me? At first, I can't remember anything that happened to me, and the insistent pounding headache isn't helping matters. It takes a minute of concentration to remember running down the alleyway, being chased by the unnamed man, punching him, then pain. As a reminder, my right hand throbs painfully, but upon further inspection I see that I am still able to move it. Where am I? My eyes seemed to have adjusted to the semi darkness because I can see that I am in what looks like the back of a large van; the moving and jarring would also prove that correct. I've been kidnapped and now I'm in the back of a van! Despite my predicament, I wasn't as frantic as most people in my situation would be. On the contrary, I felt fairly calm. That was, until I spotted the five boys tied up, seemingly unconscious, in the corner.
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