Uhh. It's longer than the other two chapter's. It was about three pages on Microsoft Word.
I swear once you see names being introduced, then you know the action has started. And if by this point chapters still aren't long enough you can pull me up about it K? (:
Oh. I finally have seven reviews rolls eyes. Not that I'm not grateful. Just...lt's had 103 hits.
Chapter 1: 4 reviews. 87 hits.
Chapter 2: 3 reviews. 16 hits. Okay. 16 hits I admit is pretty pathetic, but still.
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She moaned and rolled over.
Her face was instantly smothered with a damp, mouldy smelling material. She yelped and sat up.
'Ew ew ew! Gah! What the f-' her complaining ceased as she took in her surroundings uneasily.
There was one solitary naked light bulb, hanging from what appeared to be like the thinnest wire in the world, just above her head, and that barely gave off any light, meaning the edges of the room were dark and shadowed, and nothing could be distinguished from them..
'Oh…dear' she sighed.
She got up off the apparently mouldy mattress she had been laying on, and straightened her self up while shivering slightly.
Her shorts and knee high socks were hardly doing much to keep out the cold, and the same could be said for her shirt and tank top.
She took her hair out of the messy pony tail, and combed her fingers through her hair.
Her fingers came in contact with something warm and wet, which appeared to be causing that area of her hair to clump together.
She shuddered, not wanting to know what the hell it was, and wiped it on her shorts while nervously looking towards what seemed like a door. As she stood up and began to walk towards it, an amused snort was heard from a dark corner.
She yelped and backpedalled, only to fall backwards onto the repulsive mattress.
The amused snort became full blown laughter, and a tall figure emerged from the darkness.
'Do you honestly that that door would be left open?' the person said patronizingly.
It was the guy from the classroom. The one that murdered her teacher without showing any remorse for the deed. The one that appeared to be…a vampire. If such thing existed of course.
'I…I…who are you? And why the hell have you brought me here?' she said trying to maintain the bravado she had shown previously if the – well, assumed 'safety' of her school, while secretly petrified within.
'I my dear, and forgive me for sounding so dreadfully cliché, am quite possibly your worst nightmare' he said while smirking annoyingly.
She couldn't help it. She snorted daintily, and then bit her lip. Her chest heaved for a few seconds but it was too much. She began to laugh so deeply, tears began to escape from the corners of her eyes.
He hissed and disappeared.
She stopped laughing and blinked in disbelief.
'What the?' she said slowly.
'Boo.' He said simply from behind her.
She screamed and pushed him, hard. Astonishingly, he didn't move an inch. He didn't stumble.
'I would really think twice about touching me again' he said in what appeared to be a bored tone, before backhanding her across the face.
She flew across the room, hitting a wall and crashing her head hard on a mirror. It cracked and fell as she slid down the wall.
He sauntered over to her whilst tutting.
'Ahh. Seven years bad luck for breaking that mirror slut. Well. If you should live for that long' he said amusedly.
He kicked her in the ribs.
'Get up'
He walked over to the door and a key being turned was heard. He opened the door, and the dim light outside showed stairs leading up.
'Slut. Are you deaf? Get the fuck up. NOW'
All traces of amusement were gone from his voice and his voice had hardened considerably.
She whimpered. Her head pounded, and as she sat up her vision blurred slightly. Her cheek had been sliced open from part of the mirror and was dripping blood. She ignored it, and braced her self on the wall as she attempted to stand up. She managed to stay upright and she took a step forward, stumbling whilst doing so.
'Hurry up' he said irritably.
She tried to hasten her small steps, limping slightly. As she reached him she looked up at him, and his eyes were blood red again. He lifted his hand up, and extended one long white finger and brushed her cut cheek. He stared at his finger broodingly, before licking it.
She flinched in disgust.
'Mouth-watering. Come on' he said, and disappeared.
Her mouth opened in surprise. How did he do that?
'Hurry up' he said impatiently, calling from the top of the stairs.
She blinked, then shook her head in incredulity before wincing as the movement caused her head to pound painfully, and the cut on her cheek to sting as the air hit the gash. She breathed in, hissing slightly, and began to slowly make her way up the stairs.
As she reached the top, he was standing leaning against a wall with his arms folded. He tapped his wrist, grinning.
'Took your time'
She glared at him, not saying anything.
'Yeah. Best you kept that pretty little mouth of yours shut…for now. Slut' he said provocatively.
Please review if you took the time out to even read it!
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I have a title people! 'Clandestine Darkness'
Before I change it I'd love to know what you think of it or if I should change it more. Regardless, it's going to have 'Clandestine' in it. I only stuck 'Darkness' onto the end of it cause I didn't know what else to add.
My other ideas would've been:
'Clandestine Love'
'Clandestine Creatures'
'Clandestine Immortals'
Pick any of those, or tell me if you're cool with 'Clandestine Darkness'
Actually. I am liking 'Clandestine Immortals', but whatever. Tell me what you think you party people.
Oh. And I'm writing the next chapter as soon as I post this. At least five more reviews dudes. Make me happy yeah?
Sahara xo.
