Hey guys! You're here! Great. Let's get this started, shall we? As always, please read my fanfic, SPHR first. This fanfic here is a commentary and dumps for the said fanfic.
Now, Chapter 3 start!
The story begins with Robbie and Ruby making their way to Weiss penthouse. I said penthouse, but it's actually more like a mansion on top of a tall building. Why? Why not?
They both are then greeted by a minor OC named Penelope. In case you guys are wondering, no she is not Penny. She is however based off of her and she's also what you think she is.
Next we're introduced to my depiction of Weiss. As hinted in Chapter 2, she is paraplegic. And instead of a wheelchair, she's sitting on a floating chair which I aptly called floatchair. The floatchair is based on Professor X's floating chair from X-Men: Days of Future's Past movie. Her personality is not based of a specific character like how I've depicted Jaune and Ruby. Her personality is actually based off the typical kind and caring type of Ojou-sama type of female characters that you'd most likely to see in some (if not most) anime. If I were to pick 1 character for comparison, it would be Miyuki Takara from Lucky Star, though that seems kinda a bit farfetched now, no?
After that, the ArKos. We've covered Jaune so let's skip to Pyrrha. I didn't change Pyrrha's personality much since I find it much easier to work with. Plus I find it somewhat plausible that Pyrrha doesn't have a personality shifts after 10 years. For me at least. This chapter also hinted Ren and Nora's relationship.
Now, for my 2nd major OC. Shirayuki Kai's appearance here which will be retconned in Chapter 7 is based of Miyuki Shiba from Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei (The Irregular at Magic High School). When I first created her, I have no idea of how I want her to look like, so I ended up using Miyuki as a base. Her namesake Kai is from Kaihime (Lady Kai), a woman warrior from Japan History of the Sengoku period, while the name Shirayuki (Japanese for White Snow) is a secret which I will share in another time.
The moment between Robbie and Weiss is my way of telling a backstory of have Weiss been up to after Beacon. Not exactly special, but I wanted it to be something that the fans of WhiteRose could appreciate.
Chapter 3's OTR is based off an acceptance letter that you'll get when you registered to , a.k.a a fake Hogwarts' Acceptance Letter.
That's it for Chapter 3's commentary. No deleted scenes or parts. Sorry. See you guys in Chapter 4's commentary.
