Please please review here is chapter 3!


Chapter 3

It had been around half an hour since the building had collapsed with Steve and Chin inside, unfortunately for them they were still trapped underneath heavy rocks and debris as firefighters had to ensure not getting themselves hurt while getting the remaining Five-0 members out of the wreck. They had to take into account stability and structure as they rescued the two men and many more innocent civilians, and that took longer then everyone expected. But now they were beginning to dig finding unconscious people everywhere they looked and unfortunately finding some individuals where help has come too late

The drilling and constant banging was the first thing Chin noticed, the second of course being the pain in the lower course of his body, he tried to move but soon realised he was trapped. He tried to move the object restricting his movement but failed.

He laid his head down on the dusty floor closed his eyes and waited, the continuous banging not helping his current headache. He opened his eyes again and was shocked by what he saw; there was Steve lying on his stomach dried blood trickling from his ear. His eyes closed and unmoving it scared Chin.

He moved his arms and nudged Steve in the shoulder, even though it was hard because a big beam was laying pinning him down on the ground. The beam rested on the back of his head and Chin was sure the blood coming out of his ear meant he had a head injury. He needed medical attention, but then again so did Chin. He couldn't breath nor could he move, he was sure he had a severe concussion and a broken pelvis, maybe a broken rib or two

"Steve?" Chin coughed at the dust surrounding him making it hard to breath, the space was small as the remaining pieces of the Five-0 headquarters surrounded them, above, over and under. They were both lucky they didn't get completely squashed by the building

Chin had his eyes closed when he heard a gurgling sound, he opened his eyes to see Steve half awake, he lay a hand on Steve's shaky shoulder

"Steve? Steve can y'hear me?" Chin coaxed and eventually Chin was rewarded by Steve fluttering his eyes open half-mast

He struggled to breath the metal beam pushing down on him crushing him, pinning him to the floor. He hardly had enough space for his stomach to rise and fall to get vital oxygen into his smoky lungs

"C...hin" Steve started to shift under the beam but Chin stopped him immediately

"Stop! Your only going to do more damage.." Chin said

Steve closed his eyes " Can't b..reath" Steve coughed, he was being crushed to death, Chin had to do something

He tried to move the beam off his waist one more time and it shifted upwards, the only problem with that is when Chin moved his beam upwards it also moved Steve's beam downwards, Steve was really struggling. His breathing turned into hyperventilation and then to wheezing, his eyes were closed, his body was pushed firmly down on the floor, bruises began to form on Steve's bare back and a deep laceration could be seen by his shoulder blade.

Eventually Chin painfully slid out from under his beam, but that is where it ended. He couldn't do anything else as he was sure the beam had crushed his pelvis, overwhelmed with pain Chin collapsed and tried to breath through the pain

"C..."Steve coughed "He-" cough cough cough "can't brea-" cough cough cough

That is when drills could be heard right above Chin's head, he looked up and a piece of the rock collapsed and he was staring into the face of a brave firefighter.

"You Okay sir?" The firefighter asked

"I...broke my hip bone but other then that I think i'm 'k" Chin said before continuing

"It's Steve you need to be helpi-" Chin said looking towards Steve

"NO NO NO NO NO!" Chin shouted as he looked at Steve and saw that the drilling had pushed yet another beam down on top of the beam squashing Steve..How were they going to get him out?! Steve was looking up at Chin his eyes, bulging out of his head, taking in a shaky breath but he couldn't exhale he was too squashed

"HELP! My friend needs help, he's dying! He is being squashed.." Chin said wincing at the pain even talking brought him

"Okay sir We'r going to send down paramedics to you okay they are going to put a strap around you and bring you up here so you can get the treatment you need, do you understand?" The firefighter asked

"W..what about Steve?" Chin asked "I'm not leaving him!" he vowed

"We will take care of your friend sir, but right now by the looks of things you need medical attention-"

"Stop wasting time and help Steve!" Chin demanded. Chin heard mumbling off Steve and moved in closer to hear what he was saying "g...g...go!" Steve said, eyes filled with pain, it looked like Steve was taking his last couple of breaths

Soon enough Chin's painful ordeal was over, he was strapped to a gurney as he looked back to his prison and saw many many firefighters and paramedics fighting to save Steve's life

Reluctantly Chin agreed to go to the hospital and was being wheeled into the ambulance when in the distance he saw one of the strong firefighters carry a limp body out of the rubble. Chin soon recognised it as Steve, his pants torn his chest and shoulders burnt and blistering, he looked terrible.

It scared him but unfortunately the paramedics slammed the door shut and Chin's ambulance raced towards the hospital, his eyes slowly drifting shut as he gave in to the pain medication.


Rachel heard straight away, she saw the black smoke rising when she was at home and realised that was very close to where Danny worked. She decided to go and investigate while Grace was still at school. She hoped in her car and drove towards the palace, as she neared the palace the road was blocked off by several HPD cruisers with their blue sirens on

"I'm sorry M'am this road is currently closed" The officer stated the obvious

"What happened?" Rachel asked but the officer did not tell, Rachel was beginning to get very worried as she rang Danny's phone and it went straight to voicemail.

She reluctantly went home and immediately turned on the news, she was shocked from what she saw and heard
"BREAKING NEWS: There has been an explosion in Iolani Palace with many people injured and many people dead. So far there has been 16 deaths with over 20 injured, my reporter Sarah Track reports"

"...I'm here with Sergeant Duke Lukela reporting to you live form Iolani Palace. Duke is there any evidence that this could be terrorist related? Duke: At this point we don't know if this is terrorist related, our main priority now is to get everybody that was inside the building out safely.." That is all Rachel needed to hear before she was in her car rushing towards the hospital fearing the worse

Rachel rushed inside the hospital in one way hoping Danny was here not still trapped inside the building suffering and in pain.
"Hello, my name is Rachel Edwards, my husband came in here after the explosion at Iolani Palace his name is Danny Williams?" Rachel said to the receptionist, tears welling up in her eyes

"Danny is currently in surgery at the moment but if you would like to take a seat the surgeon will be with you as soon as possible" The receptionist informed a very worried Rachel as she strode off to the tense waiting room

That is when they rushed Chin by, on the way to surgery.

"Chin?" Rachel said in shock

Chin was out cold and it brought tears to Rachel's eyes what if Danny was worse? All she could do is wait and hope for the best

An hour later a sophisticated looking doctor exited the floppy doors leading to the OR, he still had his scrubs on and Rachel could see a tiny bead of sweat drip down his forehead. He calmly walked over to Rachel to tell her the news about Danny. Rachel was already standing waiting, hoping and praying he wasn't delivering bad news.

"Family of Detective Danny Williams?" The doctor asked politely

"Yes that's me I'm Rachel his ex-wife...How is he?" Rachel asked as the doctor put out his hand to shake Rachel's. After a friendly greeting the doctor made Rachel sit down as he told her the news, it's bad Rachel thought

"My name is Dr. Lane I am Danny's neurosurgeon..Danny is in critical condition, on arrival Danny was unconscious on non-responsive, we rushed him straight to a CAT scan to determine if there was a serious head injury we have to contend with, the results came back and it confirmed Danny had a skull fracture. The skull is important as it protects the brain and with the skull now fractured it forms complications for the brain, it may cause the brain to swell, as a precaution we have drilled a hole in Danny's skull to leave room for the brain to swell. The brain does not swell straight away after a trauma like this, so if Danny's brain does swell it will do so in the next 2-3 days..." The doctor informed Rachel

Rachel tried to control her tears, but it was hard "He is going to be okay?" Rachel asked

"Danny is young, he is fit..he is strong they are all huge indications that Danny will fight this and he will pull through. At this point in time I simply do not know if Danny is going to pull through. It's too early to say. On top of the injuries I just mentioned Danny also has third degree burns to his left arm and shoulder, once Danny is awake we will begin a skin graft but we have him on a high dosage of antibiotics to make sure his burns don't get affected in the meantime.." Dr. Lane said

Rachel cleared her throat, this was too much to deal with. One minute she was at home doing the washing up, the next she was in the hospital waiting room wondering if Danny was going to make it through the night! What about Grace? What would she do if she didn't have a father. All these thoughts muddled up Rachel's brain but she knew she had to push them to the back and just think positive

"C..Can I see him?" Rachel asked

"Yes of course you can, I will come to get you when he is settled in in his room okay do you have any questions for me?" Dr Lane said

Rachel nodded her head negatively "No thank you doctor"

"I'm sorry I can not bring you better news but you have to think positive, that will help Danny through this tough time.." Dr Lane said seeing how upset Rachel was he lay a hand on her shoulder "It's going to be okay, I have seen many casualties like this before and they all walked out of here as good as new.."

"But there are also the non lucky people" Rachel took a deep breath "Excuse me" She said as she made her way down the corridor and into the ladies bathrooms, there she took a tissue and splashed a bit of water of her red face and puffy inflammed eyes

This is why she never wanted Danny to become a cop


I did promise ye two chapters in one day so I had to keep my promise so here ye go the next chapter is up Tank ye for reviewing!, I hope ye are enjoying! I know there wasn't any Steve hurt in this one but there will be.. . Anyway Review let me know what ye are thinking! Oh also the mystery of this Rory Chang dude will be cleared up in the next few chapters :)