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Maya -I look at him, and then at the door.

Doctor -go on

Maya-I step towards the door.

Max-"Wait..." I frown, pausing. "Thank you for telling her where I was." I grumble.

Doctor- Ohh you're on the planet xenon nice little planet

Maya -I smile and nod. "You're welcome." I say, and then head to the door, pushing it open and looking around.

eco319 (4/16/13 8:56:59 PM): doctor-Maya you need money hold on goes to ATM and gives her $900,000,000

Maya- I look at him and smile. "Thank you... Doctor." I hug him.

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Doctor- have a great life! -Goes back to TARDIS looks at you and stand there-

Max: I fiddle with a loose thread on the end of my jacket sleeve, avoiding your eyes.

Doctor-so umm you ok?

Max-"I'm not totally sure." I say softly.

Doctor- do you still want to come with me?

Max- "Let me think about it." I say quietly. "Do you have somewhere... that..." I take a shaky breath and sniffle. "That I can..." I choke up, tears rolling down my face.

Doctor- oh don't cry I know it was scary hugging her

Max- I hug him tightly, my tears soaking his shirt. "I was so scared!" I cry, "What if you hadn't been able to undo what they did? You would have had to leave me behind because even if you somehow got me into the TARDIS..." I gasp for air between sobs, "I would have destroyed everything. I would have killed you. It was terrifying. It's like all I could think about was me. I am superior. I am above you. You deserve nothing. Not even the air you breathe." I take another shaky breath, "That's not me. It's not me. It's not me!" I whimper.

Doctor- Ohh I am sorry I am so sorry hugging her tightly

Max- I just stand there, weeping into his chest.

Doctor- it ok u want to go home

Max-I shake my head. "Home means being alone," I sniffle, "I want to stay with you, Doctor."

Doctor-it going to be dangerous where u want to go

Max-I nod again, sniffling and wiping my eyes. "I don't..." I sniffle, "I don't want to go home, but I do want..." I sniff again, "To go back to earth for a while. With you."

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Doctor-I see ok hold on -presses button, lands -we are in Cardiff I want u to meet an old friend of mine

Max- I nod slightly. I wipe my eyes. "Is this friend of yours... human?"

Doctor –yes, well umm there a little secret

Max- I raise an eyebrow.

Doctor he well actually two secrets

Max- I wait.

Doctor he well first he's bi and well he immortal

Max-I laugh lightly. "Alright,"

-Goes to the waterfall-

Doctor- jack! It me the doctor

-Nobody notice the doctor screaming-

Max- I follow him quietly. I look around.

-Then u sees the platform go down-

Max- I look at you.

Doctor- don't worry the platform goes all the way down and u see a guy in a army's trench coat

Jack- is that u doctor?

Doctor-yep it the same old me

Max- I look over the dude silently.

Jack-Ohh I see you changed your face you regenerated

Doctor- yep

-They hug each other-

Max- "Are you two dating?" I ask out of curiosity.

Doctor- no we are friends

Max-I nod slightly.

Doctor- jack this is max, max this is jack he traveled with me before

Max- "Hello," I nod to him.

Jack- did u tell her I can't die?

Doctor- yes she just think I am crazy

Jack -hey max u think I can't die huh

Max- "After today, I'll believe anything is possible." I laugh lightly.

Jack-well I will prove it -take out a gun points at his head-

Max- "Oh, whoa, wait! Don't!"

-Balm-!

Doctor- jack tsk u always wanted people to prove it right and max don't worry he will come back in any sec

Max- I cry out, turning away as the bullet goes into his head. I start shaking again.

Jack- -then jack gasp for air- Ohh man why the heck I did that well that will Ohh jeez I am sorry I made you get scared -goes hugs her-

Max- "I didn't want... that image... in my head..." I say quietly into his shoulder. "You didn't have to prove it. I believed you."

Jack- I am sorry- still hugging her -wait got an idea u don't want to have that image right

Max- I raise an eyebrow at him

Jack-doctor can i use the Hypnos easer memory ray?

Max-"No!"

Doctor- don't worry it won't hurt

Max-"Don't mess with my head. Please." I whimper.

Doctor- Ohh ok I got a better idea -places your head to my head and give her a head bump-

Max- I look confused for a moment. "What was that?"

Doctor- well u remembers anything about what happened a few minutes ago?

Max- I shake my head. "No. Why? What happened?"

Doctor-good u don't remember better that way and you jack don't ever do that again

Jack-sorry... anyway want to take a tour max?

Max- I nod slowly, still a bit confused as to what just happened but I brush it off.