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"Hey everyone" - Characters talking to each other

*Hey Everyone* - Characters talking over radios or phones to each other

"Hey everyone" - Talking to Civilians/Non-HPD/Five-0/SEAL/Navy/NCIS/whatever members

Hey everyone - Author talking, Character's POV


Why did this have to happen? Why did I never think about dad in my hunt? I knew if they found out about him they might try to use him against me. I should have warned him. I had five years to do so. Five long years of tracking the Hesse brothers. Three without my team. Three years since my team went Reserves so they could have more civilian lives. Dani leaving for Grace and Raphael, Tony to go handle things regarding his dad and then joining law enforcement, Sam leaving for his wife and kids. God I miss them. Actually having a team I knew who could watch my six and not get in my way was a wonderful thing. I'm not saying that those from both the Navy and other military branches I get paired with can't do their jobs or have my six, my team, SEAL team 4, knew what I needed without evening needing to speak to me or each other.

Some days it's harder to handle than others. And now that we have Anton Hesse in our custody we can go stateside for a bit before we track down Victor Hesse. Go home to Hawaii, maybe track down my team and see how they are doing. See Gracie, Den, and Kam, Dani's daughter and Sam's kids. Find out if Tony has found the one person he would wanna spend his life with. The usual catching up stuff. God I hope they don't get on my ass for being out of touch for so long. I do NOT need a Dani-style rant from said female and two others.

I am a Lieutenant Commander in the Navy, I should be used to other teams, but when the higher-ups notice how well a team works together they are gonna keep said people together. My name is Lieutenant Commander Steve McGarrett. I've been in the Navy pretty much since I graduated from the Navy and Army Academy based in California.

*Pohang, South Korea, US Military Transport Convoy*

"Fire at one, this is Castle requesting an update."

"Castle, this is One. Commander McGarrett has the prisoner secure. Over"

"You know what's funny?" Anton Hesse asks "You don't look Hawaiian."

"You're gonna tell us everything." Steve says with a chuckle.

"But you were born there, weren't you?" Anton asks, pretending Steve hadn't said anything

"Every terrorist cell you and Victor helped arm, every supplier you've worked with, all your trafficking associates, everyone you've ever sold weapons to." Steve says.

"Chasing my brother and I around the world for five years like a little doggy looking for a bone. Your team leaving you at the start of the third year. That must've not felt to great, knowing your team abandoned you." Anton says with a snort "You don't think we'd do our homework on you? Everyone you've ever met, Dani Williams, her ex Raphael, her little girl Gracie. Sam Hanna and his wife Michelle, their kids Aiden and Kamran. Tony DiNozzo and his daddy issues. And you, your sister Mary, and your dear old dad John. We know everything."

Why the hell is my phone ringing and why is my dad calling now of all times?

"You might wanna get that." Anton says with that knowing, smug as all hell smirk

"Yeah dad." Steve says into the phone, paranoid beyond all belief now.

"Hey Champ." comes John McGarrett's voice over the phone.

"You alright?" Steve asks, getting pissed a bit.

"Who are these people Steve?" John asks of his son

"Now I know where you get it from. Tough old man you got here." Victor Hesse says "Now, you have something or rather someone I want, and I have someone you want."

Steve begins to write "Get Honolulu PD to my dad's house ASAP. Victor Hesse is there!"

"You're smart enough to know that's never gonna happen." Steve grits out

"Thanks for the compliment. Now are you smart enough?" Victor says

"We do not negotiate with terrorists." Steve snaps out quickly, his anger building.

"Well make an exception. Unless you want your father to die." Victor says, smirk firmly in place.

"Let me talk to him. I'll get him to help you." John says, knowing that what he was about to do could be suicidal at best. "He's my son. He'll listen to me."

Victor puts the phone near John's mouth and ear.

"Listen to me champ." John goes to say.

Steve looks relieved to hear his dad's voice "Dad, hey, we will get you out of there."

John knowing that what he was about to do was suicidal, but if it meant his son was safe then he didn't care. "I'm sorry that I lied to you."

"What? Lied to me? What are you talking about?" Steve asked, disbelief in his voice.

"I love you son. Whatever these people want Steve, don't give it to them. DON'T YOU GIVE IT TO THEM!" John shouts right before he is whipped across the face with the gun.

All of a sudden Steve could hear what sounded like a grunt of pain.

"Dad! Dad!" Steve shouts looking at his men who give a nod that they had gotten the message out.

"NO MORE GAMES! I'M TAKING MY BROTHER NOW!" Victor screams.

Steve breathes in and out, his rage hitting a whole new level, "I swear to God, I will hunt you down and I will kill you."

Anton getting Steve's attention, says, "Hey. Boom."

Why did he say that? Why can I hear a copter? OH SHIT!

"AMBUSH!" Steve screams as he slides his phone away having noticed the call got dropped.

"This is Transport! We are under attack! Taking rocket and small arms fire!"

"Everybody move it! Move!"

All Steve could do was brace as everyone begins to jump out to fire on the copter. Steve grabbing Anton to keep a hold on him.

"Sarge! Sir!"

In the rush, Steve lets go of Anton after they make it out of their transport. Anton manages to get a gun and Steve shoots him in the arm. The barbed fence behind Anton is what catches him and what causes Anton's death and as Victor calls Steve back, finds out about his brother's death. Victor kills John McGarrett in retaliation.

*Listen to the Five-0 theme song at this point*

*USAF C-17 Victory, O'ahu, Hawaii*

"Honolulu approach. Reach 717. Level at 3000."

"717 turn left zero-one-zero, maintain 3,000 until established on approach."

"How long since you've been home?"

"It's been a while." Steve responds to the pilot

"Sir, I've got a call coming in for you from the Governor of Hawaii."

*Short Time-skip later*

"Commander." Governor Jameson of Hawaii walks over.

"Governor." Was all Steve said as he shook hands with the Governor.

"Thanks for agreeing to see me. I am so sorry about your father. He was a very dear friend of mine."

"Thank you Governor. Is this about the investigation though?"

"Yes. We have alerts all across the Islands."

"You won't find Victor Hesse through roadblocks and search warrants. He's gone underground until he can find a safe way off the island. Now why am I here?"

"I'd like to help you get what you came back here for. Let's walk. Your father's death was a wake-up call for me and every last law enforcement agency in Hawaii, which is why I'm putting together a task force that I'd like you to run."

"You don't even know me."

"I know your resume. Five years Naval Intelligence, six years as a Seal at least. You and your team were one of the best if not the best of the SEALs."

"Let me just stop you right there. I have been tracking Victor Hesse for five years now." Steve says getting annoyed at this woman. "If he was bold enough to surface, I promise you he already has an exit strategy planned. And he knows I know it, which means, I can barely afford the hour it's gonna take to bury my father, let alone stand here talking to you. Excuse me."

"I can help you find that son of a bitch. With full immunity and means. Your task force will have full blanket authority to go after guys like Hesse and get them the hell off my Island. Your rules, my backing, your team, anyone you want, and no red tape. And I promise you Commander, what you see with me is what you get."

Steve getting fed up states, "Here's what I see. An election year coming up, and a politician who needs the PR, who's willing to do whatever it takes to stay in office. Thanks but no thanks. The only people I would want on my team are mainland."

"None of those make me feel less responsible. This is personal for me too."

"Pass."

"This is my private number. Please, think it over."

The Governor walks away and right after a voice from behind causes Steve to turn around.

"She's a smart lady that one. Steve McGarrett right?"

"I know you."

"You better! Chin Ho Kelly." Chin states with a grin.

"Oh! Chin Ho Kelly! Kahuku High School. You were a great quarterback." Steve grinning back with shock in his voice laughs as the two men shook hands.

"Ah. That's very kind of you, considering you are the one who went and broke all my records."

"Oh, that was a long time ago."

"Heard you became a cop."

"I worked with your father in the Seventh. He taught me everything I knew about being a cop and wearing the badge."

"It looks like you moved onto greener pastures."

"Well let's just say the HPD and I had a slight disagreement about my job description. When I got fired though your father was there for me, he understood. He stayed my friend, and I know that cost him something. I only wish there was someway I could pay him back. But now that you're here maybe you could do something."

"What do you mean?"

"I hear the Chief of Police put a haole on your father's homicide investigation. Word is, she's only been on the island for around 6 months. Just fresh off the mainland pretty much, and with how much I heard she works I doubt she's had time to learn how the island works."

*time-skip to Steve reaching the McGarrett house after the funeral and all that*

So I've looked over the whole house and checked the garage. So this is what he wanted me to find. It's a god damn toolbox. Hearing a creak, Steve turns around, and what do you know? It's a female haole with a gun.

"You! Hands up! Don't move!" The haole shouts, gun in hand.

Steve having whipped out his gun points it at the female.

"Who are you?" Steve says as the haole seems to be breathing in both relief and annoyance as if she knew him.

"Who are you?" Dani shouts back, "I am Detective Dani Williams!"

"Lieutenant Commander Steve McGarrett!"

"God damnit Steven!" Dani shouts as she goes to holster her gun. "What the fuck are you doing, you ginormous moron, breaking into a god damn crime scene! My god damn crime scene at that!"

"Well I'm sorry I didn't know it was your crime scene Daniella!" Steve snaps back, "And for that matter what the hell are you doing on Hawaii with HPD!?"

"If you would check your email or answer your kelepona pa'amau for once, you would have known Raphael and I got a divorce, he got remarried to a puttana, and they moved Grace out here and I followed so I could stay with my naua daughter!"

"I'm sorry Dani. You were a SEAL too though! You know why I couldn't really answer my phone! If I had a choice or had been able to answer I would have been on the first flight to New Jersey to go help you out! You know that!" Steve practically shouts right back.

Dani lets out a groan, "Take the damn tool-box and let's just get the hell out of here before someone calls HPD about our screaming."

Steve looks at her and blinks, "How did you know about that?"

Dani laughs slightly, "Your dad mentioned it a couple of times when I brought Grace over to see her Kupunakane John. That is legitimately what she called him. I have videos and it's adorable."

"Share!" Steve says as he grabs the tool-box.

Dani and Steve proceed to head outside, Dani giving him her new address, before she heads back to the police precinct, and he takes his truck to her place. Dani had told Steve she would bring dinner back with her, but she needed to grab a few things from the precinct before she could fully take off for the night. That and she had to grab Grace from school first, as she had her that weekend. Steve just nods as he takes off in his Silverado, Dani jumping into her Camaro and heading for Grace's school. Steve manages to make it there. Sighing and rubbing at his face as he realizes he would have to wait for Dani to come back there before he could go in.


Hawaiian to English Translations:

Kupunakane - Grandfather/grandpa

kelepona pa'amau - Fucking phone/Default phone

naua - fucking


Italian to English Translations:

puttana - whore


So this was a lot different to what I wrote in my Psych class. There was a lot more swearing and dialogue from Steve in it, but I think I like this better. Anyway hope y'all enjoy. Writing this in a notebook in Psych was fun. I'm gonna have a lot of fun with this. See y'all in Part 3 of the Pilot. That is gonna be a dual character chapter likely between Chin Ho and my girl, Kono! I also found out that the Army/Navy Academy that is in California is boys only apparently but for the purpose of this story, I'm gonna say that they had it open to girls for about 5-10 years before Dani started there. This is 500 more words than the prologue and the first chapter combined. Geez, Steve was a busy boy during the pilot.

Bye guys!

~OtakuAnimeLover21

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