Hello! I'm really sorry updates are slow, but with school and everything, writing has been really slow. I also apologize for how short this chapter is.
I also just realized a problem with one of the names. I realized that 'Rainflower' was a cat in the actual series, but please just ignore it. Replace it with your own name if you want, just don't give me crap about it now that I have actually addressed it. I'll probably edit it when I'm done, and when I do I'll make sure to fix that. If you want to suggest names, go right ahead. I haven't got a clue what to call her.
Answers to reviews:
Iceberry2666- Well that was random but thanks for the good review!
Chapter Two
Stormkit had to jog as she tried to keep up with the much bigger apprentice. She was not looking forward to getting back to camp. Rainfeather would be furious if she found out Stormkit had been outside the camp.
Stormkit couldn't help feeling shy around the older cat, which made the short trip back into camp awkward. He clearly was anxious to get back to the camp. She took a last look outside the camp before entering the camp.
The camp had become an uproar in the short time she had been gone. Cats were scattered about the camp calling for her and looking all over the camp. All of it was blocked from view as a familiar black pelt appeared in front of her.
"WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!?"
It was Rainflower.
"I've been worried sick! We looked everywhere for you! Why weren't you in the camp? Why didn't you tell anyone where you were going?" Rainflower rambled on for several more minutes before finally stopping gulping air because she had barely breathed during her rant.
Stormkit ducked her head in shame as Rainflower picked her by her scruff (rather roughly) and carried her to the nursery where Bluekit was waiting anxiously.
"You know, I can't believe you! You were outside the camp on you first day out of the nursery! Lucky Tallpaw found you before something or someone else did! I shudder to think what could have happened…." she left off, clearly imagining horrible things.
"I just heard something weird, mom! That's all!" Stormkit whined.
"What did you hear?" Rainflower snapped, suddenly looking alert.
"There was a funny smell, it was all musty and yucky, and then I heard cats whispering. I think they were looking for something," Stormkit explained.
Rainflower looked horror-struck.
"If you ever hear anything like it ever again, do NOT follow it! Report it straight away! And promise me that you won't do anything like this ever again!" Rainflower demanded. Stormkit nodded her head, signaling that she understood.
Rainflower nodded, now smiling, as though she were satisfied with her daughter's response.
"Well, now that that's taken care of, I need to give you a bath. Your fur is filthy!"
I hope you don't mind to much that that was a really short chapter. I'll make the next one longer and update sooner. Hope you enjoyed!
P.S. Reviewers- What do you think of Rainflower? (Stormkit's mother)
-Jay
