I know I know just an author's note. It was brought to my attention that parts of this story were breaking the guidelines as stated by DarkSiren49. Here's the review.

Your story is in violation of the following Guideline Rules.

Entries Not Allowed #3 MST: Comments in between the flow of a copied story.
Actions Not Allowed #3 Copying from a previously published work (including
musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Your story can be reported unless it complies to the Guideline Rules. You
could ignore and leave it for the admins to deal with, but I remind you that
your account can be suspended for any rule broken.

DarkSiren49
-Critics United

I've read some of the stories like mine and how there are comments in between the dialogue so I didn't know. I also didn't know you can't copy music lyrics. If they are from a song can you copy them in another story as if the character is singing the song but disclaim that the song isn't yours? Thank you for bringing it to my attention and if there's anything else let me know!