Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 She really hates it!

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Normal!

Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw Sisters: We were smarter so we got to skip Preschool!

and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos. Jazz is NOT a Warrior cat prefix

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr. It's Pm 4:00, why do you ask?

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. Nope!

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp. LEARN YOUR TWO/TO/TWOS

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 WOW!

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. OKAY

All the cats came out from there dens. Learn your their/there/they'reS!

She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. OOOF

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called For what?

, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" Sandstorm: Spottedleaf, grab the emergency daggers. Actually, just call Tigerheart and Hollytuft!

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. Sureeeee

thnkx and ples no more flams *lights a match* WHY? I WANT TO LIGHT MY CANDLES :C