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ThorBringstheThunder-Nice one! I am completely unsurprised at B going home. Now, I assume there will be some sort of team switch to mirror canon... maybe Lightning will switch off Team Lightning? That would be funny and totally something Chris would do.
As for the OCs, I like Georgia but I'm not a fan of Charles. I sincerely hope that he goes early, but if you're mirroring canon once again they're probably merge-bound at the very least.
Poor Rodney being put on a team with Anne Maria, Ella, Jasmine, and Zoey. He might have a mental breakdown lol.
I think since Sugar's been the main villain and Max's been a main villain alongside Scarlett, Dave, Anne Maria, or Jo has the potential to fill that role. Most likely Jo, the most competent of the three, but I could see a teamup between her and Dave in the works.
Let's see where the season takes us!
Me- Thanks!, Yeh B going home just made sense.
Hmm... team swap may or may not happen. But if it does end up happening it'll be later on.
Oof well see...
I never really thought of Anne Maria or Dave being the main villain. Dave isn't necessarily evil he's just kind of a jerk and Anne Maria doesn't really have the smarts or willpower to strategize like Scarlett and Sugar did. But Jo is definitely an option.
Nicky Haugh- Nice one mate!
Me- Thanks!
N8han11- So B and Max are gone? Can't say I'm surprised at those results. B wasn't going to compromise his character for money and Max stood no chance without Scarlett practically helping him with everything, plus I'm pretty sure no one in the cast really liked that annoying weirdo anyway.
I'm also really happy that no one's going to go through the feral Zeke plotline, given how said plotline was one of the most reviled things in the series even by those who liked the season, plus it was a completely unnecessary derailment that only served to mess up one of the more potentially interesting characters in the series.
I also like how there's an honest-to-god effort to actually give each character development here and there. Leonard's already way more tolerable than his canon self, though I still can't see him lasting too long given his character.
As for the Mal thing, I believe it should be done in this season, since we've already got that storyline in the canon AS and it would be an interesting change for it to happen here instead, as it would allow for this series' AS to differentiate itself from canon even more.
Me- Yep.
Yeah I mean they didn't really have to make Ezekiel go far in World Tour, but just to make him get voted off first again and then turn feral just felt like sloppy writing. Like they now they have an excuse to why they can't include Ezekiel in anything. Darn shame.
Those are some good points.
xtremexavier15- Good chapter, and I'm the first to review. So Georgia's the villain here? Gonna get fascinating.
Me- Thanks!
For now... :).
cecebeec- Wahoo! Another new season and my favorite to boot! I've read your previous stories and never got the chance to review, but I love what you are doing with each character. I'm not one for predictions, but I hope my girl Zoey goes far along with Mike. Georgia seems like a sexier version of Alejandro, with even more evil! Continue on the awesome writing!
Me- Yep! It's cool, thanks for the compliments!
Oof I'm glad your enjoying Georgia!
ThorBringstheThunder- Personally, I'd prefer Mal over no Mal, but that's just me. If you put Mal in now and bring Mike into All Stars, then I think you'd have an easy early boot on the villains' team (or the token nice character that Gwen played).
I figured Max would go early, so I'm not surprised. Look like Sugar's up to her old antics, and dragging Leonard with her to boot. Maybe Leonard will betray her later in the game? We'll see...
Me- True...
xtremexavier15- Man, I hope Max doesn't turn feral like Ezekiel.
Me- He won't
AnonBrowser- Quite a start! No surprise that I was right in guessing B was the first eliminated for refusing to sing. Too bad he had to get disqualified so early, but he obviously had no hope of lasting long in the competition when he doesn't like to be vocal and singing was a requirement. It sucks that Max got booted next as he and his antics amuse me. Your first fic made me appreciate that wannabe villain even more than I already did and I was really proud of him for getting 4th place out of 27. I'll miss him, though at least he wasn't the first one out this season. My preference would've been Leonard getting voted off for being delusional and useless. The pseudo-wizard couldn't ever realistically reach the merge. At least you aren't taking the feral Ezekiel route with anybody. Zeke was already the worst character of the original 22 before TDWT started up for being sexist as well as quite obnoxious, and that season made him even worse with his feral deterioration. What really shocks me is that Sugar didn't target Dawn at first chance given her hatred for the aura-whisperer. I feel really bad for Charles for having to put up with all of this on Team Magical, and Topher better not let his ego get in the way (though I have a feeling it'll go out of line).
Over on Team Amazon, I can't tell if being on a team of mainly females is more heaven for Rodney or hell. It could be nice for him when he's known to easily fall in love with girls just from simple interactions and thus feel bliss around them, but at the same time conflicting if he becomes attracted to multiple at once. Dave might have to help him out as the team's only other male. Jasmine either way seems to have established herself as their leader in a sense. Good for her. Zoey and Anne Maria on the same team again probably won't go well even if Vito (who the teenage Snooki really wanted) can't be accessed. I also feel bad for how the pigtailed girl was placed on separate teams from Mike. Ella doesn't seem to fond of the germaphobe trying to make amends with Sky given the whole blowing nose thing, though. Our Snow White lookalike evidently still digs him and is trying (without much success) to hide her sadness.
Dave, I know you mean well and are trying to make things right with the gymnast after you both went out of line last season, but you should give more space before trying to do anything with her. Jo was also too harsh towards you and shouldn't have hit you with that sign even if she doesn't want you doing more bad things. Hard to say whether you still have some lingering feelings for Sky, but if things with her don't work out, then you could perhaps give Ella a chance as she's wanted you since the first season. You'd be better off with someone like her than the gymnast either way as our Snow White lookalike would treat you better without leading you on or giving false hope. She either way seems like a teammate that you can count on for being a friend and someone to vote with you.
As for Team Lightning, I laughed out loud when Chris accepted that as a name. Their narcissistic namesake is basically asking to be axed once they lose an elimination challenge. I would like to see Mike's "Mal" persona show up as that demon on tour would be a very intriguing read. Mr. Multiple personalities either way has my sympathy with being placed on a different team than his girlfriend, plus Georgia is an evil bitch and I can see her or Jo as this fic's antagonist if Mal doesn't show up. Regardless, Sky's comments on "jerkwads" is very hypocritical given how mean she got last season, and who could Beardo align with? Only future chapters will tell.
Me- B didn't stand a chance this season.
It'll be explained in this chapter but basically Sugar wanted to get rid of the guy who even brought up Leonard's name as a vote. But if it wasn't for that she totally would've tried to get out Dawn.
More likely hell, Rip Rodney.
Fun fact; I got the whole "Team Lightning" idea when I rewatched season 4 and when Chris put together the teams he said "Lightning Squad!" or something like that and I decided to put that idea here.
True when watching Pahkitew Island, I was always thought Sky was kinda hypocritical in a way so I guess it just translated into here.
Noahop- Yeah, I probably should have figured out that B was going to go home considering that he doesn't talk. Lol. I am SHOCKED that Leonard wasn't eliminated first off. Poor Max, he went from the final four, to the first being voted off. I always found him funny and liked his brief partnership with Charles. Still, I bet he's going to cause some mischief, which will be exciting. Georgina looks like an interesting villain so far, so excited to see what she'll do. Leonard's arc should prove interesting. Jo's blocking Dave from apologizing to Sky, so I think she'll eventually become a secondary villain here. And now, favorite quote
Favorite Quote: "He's proving to be a very valuable ass to me and our team" LOL. Even when you were the villain Sugar, you never cease to make me laugh. Still, I don't think she's making it all that far this season.
Me- It's cool, I'm not that good at guessing either.
Yeah I misspelled "asset" then just thought of turning it into a joke.
Amazing Brayden- As expected B got out although I thought his elimination would be at the end as for predictions Well Mike and Zoey are probably going to the merge Mike more than Zoey and Georgia and Charles are getting far because Georgia is the villain and both newbies will have to make it far well my review is over. Well Max is out I was gonna predict him in my last review but after he made that sorta alliance w with Charles I thought he'd be safe I'm liking this so far can't wait for the rest of this story
Me- Well they still had to sing in the plane, so it'd be impossible for B to not sing, compete in the challenge and then get disqualified.
We'll see...
Crow38- I have a weird feeling Dave will do very well this season. Although I could be wrong. So Max is going to be the Ezekiel of this season huh? Interesting!
Me- We'll see...
Not really he has different goals then Ezekiel, the only thing is they're both hiding in the plane.
TheNoobyBoy- NO! DO NOT DO THE DUMB FERAL THING WITH MAX PLEASE!
Oh wait- not Ezekiel.
Me-...I'm not.
ShadowJCreed- I luckily found this since I was not notified by the app. Both chapters were enjoyable and I liked all the dialogue and how the contestants are even the newbies. Oh and I saw one error that for some reason stuck in my head in the first chapter when people were coming off the bus you had Chris introduced Ella twice. The first song of course was good What If? spin on Come Fly With Us. Max's song of course was crap though it was most likely intentionally written to be that was since it's about Max boasting about how evil he is. I definitely won't miss Max and maybe you'll give Leonard some character development that others just haven't chosen to do for him. It may sound a little unfair, but I would've kept B out this season. Eva, Katie, and Sadie in the cannon were only in the first season and B doesn't really deserve that, but that's just really how I feel what should've been done. I'm actually enjoying Jo's friendship with Sky as well.
Me- Thanks!
Oof, I'll go and fix that.
Yeah it was intentional, when it comes to a song that Max is singing I knew it couldn't be good.
Yeh, that's just the main thing. I could've had Leonard go home first again and written him off as purely a gag character... but I didn't want to do that to him.
I get what your saying about B, it's just I couldn't think of any other people who wouldn't want to sing besides Jo and I wasn't gonna have her disqualified so B seemed like a good option since he doesn't talk.
Thanks!, I figured the two athletic girls would get along nicely.
ChocoMarshmallow- Love the story! I think it's fine with just Georgia, though.
Me- Thanks!
Jss2141- I have binge read your fanfics for the last few days and I love them. I can't wait to see the next episode/chapter.
Me- Thanks!, Glad your enjoying them
" Last time on TOTAL DRAMA WORLD TOUR! Egypt the land of pyramids, land of hot, land of sweaty!" Chris said
Shows clip of the contestants running through the desert.
" Our contestants ran under the sun for fun and they still managed to find time to get doused with camel poo and make annoying sound effects." Chris said
"Showing style on the Nile, Team Lightning pulled out a win. And the self proclaimed "villain" of this season was forced to make an early exit." Chris said
Shows clip of Max being kicked out of the plane.
"We also found out what happens when you don't sing." Chris said
Shows clip of Chris shoving B off of the plane.
" But hey it's a new week, new chances to screw up or possibly win it for your team. Or even sell out your friends for a MILLION DOLLARS! Well any of this stuff actually happen stick around to find out on TOTAL DRAMA WORLD TOUR!" Chris said
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Economy Class~
Most of Team Amazon and Team Magical sat awkwardly across from each other.
" What happened to Pasty and Whiny?" Anne Maria asked
"You mean Dave and Zoey?" Jasmine replied
"That's what I said." Anne Maria said
" No you said "Pasty and Whiny" Jasmine said
" Potato, Tomato." Anne Maria said
Jasmine rolled her eyes at this statement.
"Well I think the lot of them are trying to sneak into first class." Jasmine said
" Makes sense, anything beats sleeping in this dumpster." Anne Maria said
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Cargo Hold~
Zoey and Dave walk through the cargo hold.
" Your sure there's a way to sneak into first class?" Dave asked
" If I didn't know I wouldn't be doing this. And if your gonna be complaining the whole time, I'd rather you not be here. "Zoey said
" Okay... sorry for existing." Dave said sarcastically
Zoey then saw a stack of boxes and climbed on top of them, she opened a vent and crawled inside.
Dave attempted to do the same but slipped and fell on the ground.
" On second thought, could you send Sky a message for me?" Dave asked
He then noticed Zoey was already gone.
"Crap..." Dave muttered
Dave walked back into economy class as the camera shifted focus to someone sleeping in the cargo hold.
Max was sleeping on a pile of dirty newspapers, he yawned loudly as he woke up.
" Ugh my back.. would it kill this cargo hold to have some pillows?!" Max said angrily
Max then punched a box nearby, the box collapsed and in it was a bunch of pillows.
"...…. Well that was evilly ironic." Max said
" No matter IT"S TIME TO EVIL!" Max said
Max then noticed his stomach was rumbling.
"But I should probably get some food first." Max said
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Chris' Quarters~
Max quietly sneaked into Chris' room, he noticed he wasn't there and decided to snoop around.
He immediately ran to the mini fridge Chris had and gorged himself on the many snacks and soda drinks.
" Oh... it's so good!" Max said as he stuffed his face
After Max finished raiding the mini fridge, he decided to look around for the bathroom.
" Huh seems like the only bathroom on this wretched plane is the confessional. And I'll be caught if I go in there!" Max said
Max turns to his right and notices Mclean's hot tub.
" I don't know if that counts as an EVIL deed." Max said
Max then began to tuck in his legs, indicating he really had to go.
" Oh what the heck." Max said as he ran towards the hot tub.
After Max made a "deposit" he began to run around the room, continually messing with Chris' things.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: First Class~
Team Lightning are enjoying the perks of first class.
Lightning and Beardo belched as they sipped on protein shakes brought to them by a stewardess.
"Ya know, these aren't half bad." Beardo said
" Half-bad? Brother these are sha-mazing!" Lightning said
The camera turns to Sky, Jo, Mike and Georgia who were playing cards.
" Jo would you happen t have any sixes?" Georgia asked
"Damn!, How are you so good at this?!" Jo asked
"Practice makes perfect." Georgia said
CONFESSIONAL: GEORGIA
" No it doesn't. I bought the card pack and they're all sixes."
" But with that little brain teaser, it's now clear to me that my teammates aren't nearly as clever as I am."
" It may sound arrogant, but if you have the necessary skills to back your words up. I'd like to call it pride."
END CONFESSIONAL
As they continued to play cards, Zoey fell from the vents and landed on the table.
….
"Zoey?!" Mike said
" Uhh…. that hurt more than I thought it would." Zoey said with a groan
Mike helps Zoey up from the table.
" Are you okay?" Mike asked
" I'm fine, I just wanted to spend some time with you..." Zoey said with a blush
" That can be arranged." Mike said
Chris walked into first class, clearly more irritated than usual.
" No that will NOT be arranged, first class is for WINNERS only and last time I checked. Team Amazon are LOSERS, so Zoey your going back to economy class!" Chris said
Chef picked up Zoey and threw her back into economy class.
" So wait people from other teams aren't allowed to be here?" Mike asked
" If you want to bring someone from another team to first class, you have to ask me right after the challenge is over so we can account for food servings. And since you didn't your pig-tailed girlfriend stays in economy class." Chris said
"Aw man..." Mike said
" Plus it's challenge time anyways, meet me at the dining area for today's challenge!" Chris said
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Dining Area~
Everyone gathers in the dining area as Chris stands in front of them.
" Before we start may I ask whether this is going to be a reward or an elimination challenge?" Georgia asked
"Well seeing as how two of you got kicked off last episode, I WAS gonna make this a reward challenge..." Chris said
" Until one of you little brats went into my room and trashed all my stuff! So expect a lot of elimination challenges coming your way!" Chris said angrily
The contestants gasped, Jo stood up to this accusation.
" Do you have actual proof that one of us trashed your room?!" Jo asked
" Not exactly but who else could it be Chef?!" Chris asked
" Hey man don't look at me, I was just cooking like I always do." Chef said
"That's right so it was obviously one of you!" Chris said
…...
" I do not mean to point fingers but Zoey came into first class using the vents, so it wouldn't be far-fetched if she used them to sneak into your room." Georgia said
All eyes suddenly turned to Zoey.
" I was in the vents because I wanted to talk to Mike, what reason would I have for smashing Chris' stuff?!" Zoey asked
" I mean you have been pretty grumpy since you and Mike were put on different teams.." Dave said quietly
Zoey quickly turned around and glared at Dave.
"Just saying.." Dave said with a shrug
" Hmm interesting. Well you can all thank Zoey for hurdling you a few thousand feet towards Japan." Chris said
" Did he say hurdling a few thousand feet?!" Dave said worriedly
"Did he say Japan?!" Charles said excitedly
"Chef, commence operation: slice and dice." Chris said
Chef takes out an authentic samurai sword from Japan and slices one of the exit doors open. All of the contestants fly through the door screaming as Chef and Chris hold onto the sliding door.
" Nice job dude." Chris said
" Thanks, but while were in a life and death situation. I should probably tell you I took some money from the budget to buy this sword." Chef said
" It's cool I take money from the budget all the time, not like anything's gonna actually happen." Chris said nonchalantly
~ The Sky~
The contestants scream as they continue to come closer to the ground as the musical bell rings.
" Were about to die and you want us to sing?!" Dave asked
" Consider it payback for peeing in my hot tub!, Now sing and I might save your sorry butts." Chris said
Slightly upbeat music began to play.
" Were singing as were falling!" Sky sang
" Well some are cannonballing." Georgia sang
A shot of Lightning diving through in a ball position appeared.
"Are lives begin to flash before our eyes!" Jasmine sang
"We might just go kabloeey!" Charles/ Leonard sang
" Get smushed and become chewy!" Lightning/ Mike sang
"Except there's tons we wanna do before we die!" Everyone sang
The upbeat music began to become faster as close up shots of the contestants falling through the air appeared.
" Millionaires!" Anne Maria sang
" Paegant Queen!" Sugar sang
"Make it to the Super Bowl!" Lightning sang
" Professional MMA Fighter!" Jo sang
" Fall in love!" Rodney sang
"Spit some bars!" Beardo sang
" Fight an alien demon in mars!" Leonard sang
" Become one with Mother Nature.." Dawn sang
"Replace Chris as the host of this show!" Topher sang
….
"But first we must cease dropping our goal here would be stopping." Dave sang
"Before we smash into the ground from the sky!" Jasmine sang
" Our bodies get all messed up and I'll have to kiss my dreams goodbye!" Lightning sang
"We'd like to keep on living!" Sky sang
"So Chris were hope your giving..." Charles sang
"The rights to the show!" Topher sang
" A bubble bath!" Georgia sang
"A jetpack!" Mike sang
" A rift in time!" Zoey sang
" A PARACHUTE!" Dave sang
" Waterbed.." Beardo sang
"Flying squirrel!" Sugar sang
" A trampoline!" Ella sang
" A flying dragon!" Leonard sang
" Honestly a hot girlfriend will dooooo!" Rodney sang
"Because there's still so much to do before we die, yeah we said it, there's still so much to do, there's still so much to do, there's still so much to do before we die! YEAH!" Everyone sang
After the song concluded everyone screamed to their presumable deaths... that is until they landed into a giant rice bowl.
~ Japanese Game Show: Rice Bowl~
" Nice going Pasty, you almost got us killed!" Anne Maria said
" For the last time, I didn't touch Chris' stuff!" Zoey said
"So what your calling Georgia a liar?!" Anne Maria asked
"If the shoe fits!" Zoey said as she got up in Anne Maria's face
The two growled as Jasmine quickly separated them.
"Enough! Were not accusing anyone without solid evidence, got it?!" Jasmine said sternly
Zoey and Anne Maria nodded.
CONFESSIONAL: ANNE MARIA
"It's obvious miss goody goody is acting bad for attention."
" I mean who could blame her? With me around Zoey's lucky she has that Mike character wrapped around her finger!"
" Doesn't mean she should be doing it though.."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Japanese Game Show: Pin Ball Challenge~
"This challenge takes place inside a Japanese game show studio. Bow down before Super Human Mega Pinball Smash!" Chris said
Charles and Mike smile and high five.
CONFESSIONAL: CHARLES
" Watching foreign tv shows in another language is soo cool!"
" I mean you hear English all the time, but hearing how somebody talks half way around the world is interesting to say the least!"
END CONFESSIONAL
"GASP" " I love Japanese game shows!" Mike said excitedly
" My favorite is Itchy Itchy My Car No No." Charles said
"Where you have to throw a pineapple using a-" Charles said before interrupted
"Giant shrimp fork!, Awesome!" Mike said
The two stopped as a loud noise interrupted, the camera turned to Chris who had just rang a gong.
" Looks like I have my own personal geek gong, anyway one member of each team must fit into these life size pinballs. Then your teammates are gonna beat you around the game board, scoring points until somebody with the most points win!" Chris said
"And I have a "special" surprise for each of you to share your pinballs with. So to start us off, Team Lightning who are you choosing?" Chris said
" C'mon you have to let me do this!" Mike said
" I don't have to do anything Multiple Mike, I say who goes." Jo said
"Now who wants to go?.." Jo asked
Georgia, Sky, Lightning, and Beardo awkwardly whistled.
" Fine you can do it, pencil neck." Jo said
"Yes!" Mike said excitedly
"Good here's your pinball buddy!" Chris said as brought out a panda
He threw the panda towards Mike, who tried catching it but ended up getting mauled by it.
"Mike!" Zoey said in concern
"Aw sooo cute. Team Amazon whose getting the panda treatment?" Chris asked
"Zoey's face could use some remodeling." Anne Maria said with a smirk
" Were on the same team!" Zoey said angrily
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
"All this bickering is giving me a massive headache."
"If I can't get them to get along, might as well split them apart."
END CONFESSIONAL
Jasmine pushed Anne Maria forward.
"Hey what's with all the pushing!" Anne Maria said
" You need to prove your in it to win it or you'll just get voted off early again like last time!" Jasmine said
"So two choices, you win the challenge for us or.. you sit around and do nothing and then get shoved out of a plane." Jasmine said
"Your choice..." Jasmine said sternly
" Fine I'll do the stinking challenge!" Anne Maria said
"Catch!" Chris said as he threw the panda
Anne Maria took out her hairspray and sprayed the panda before it could attack.
"Yeesh.. And whose going for Team Magical?" Chris asked
" I would like to-" Dawn said before interrupted
" Nuh-uh! No way am I trusting a hippie with Po from Kung Fu Panda!" Sugar said
"Sugar we already used that joke way back in season two." Chris said
" Oh shoot your right but my point still stands!" Sugar said
"If you would attempt to be reasonable-" Dawn said before interrupted
"I am being that big word you just said, you tree hugger!" Sugar said
"SILENCE! I will do the challenge." Leonard said
" Well Leonard you might wanna pack your potions because the beast your sharing a pinball with... is Sugar." Chris said with a smile
Leonard visibly shivers as Sugar pulls him into a bear hug.
" Bout time me and the wizard team up!" Sugar said
"And we might get to kiss a little while were in that thing.." Sugar seductively whispered in Leonard's ear
CONFESSIONAL: LEONARD
"NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Leonard and Sugar were shoved into a neon blue pinball, Anne Maria was shoved into a neon pink pinball and Mike was shoved into a neon yellow pinball.
" Chef?" Chris said
Chef shoved the pinballs into the arena.
~ Japanese Game Show: Pin Ball Arena~
Mike's pinball went back and forth between two bumpers. This resulted in Team Lightning earning a lot of points.
"Keep going Mike!" Sky said
The camera turned to Mike who was rolling around in his pinball with the panda on top of his head, hitting him.
"T-This wasn't intentional!" Mike said
The camera turned to Sugar and Leonard who seemed to be focusing on other things...
"Let me out! For the love of Gandalf let me out!" Leonard screamed from the pinball
"Shhh wizard they might hear us..." Sugar whispered from the pinball
The camera turned to Anne Maria who was running despite wearing heels.
" Your doing great, Anne Maria!" Jasmine said
" Great?! My feet are killing me, I was NOT meant to run in these heels." Anne Maria said
" Well actually I think you might wanna stop Mike before he wins.." Dave said
Anne Maria looked over at Mike who continually bounced between the two bumpers.
"I'm on it.." Anne Maria said
Anne Maria ran over and bumped into Mike who slid across the arena.
"Hey this is pinball not bumper cars!" Mike said
" Same thing, Not Vito!" Anne Maria said
"Not Vito? What-" Mike said before interrupted
Anne Maria leaned forward this time while she ran and bumped as hard as she could into Mike's pinball, The pinball flew across the arena and crashed into a wall.
"O-O-Ow..." Mike muttered
" Well with Mike out of commission and Team Magical doing some "magic" of their own. Team Amazon wins!" Chris said
Team Amazon cheered except for Zoey who ran over to check up on Mike.
"Good job! I didn't know you had in it ya." Jasmine said
" Thanks... I guess." Anne Maria said with a shrug
The camera turned to Team Magical's pinball as reluctant Leonard with multiple lipstick stains smudged on his face, fell out.
"Where's a force field spell when you need one?" Leonard asked
" Man that was good, would've been better if you'd stopped struggling. But I get it kissing a beautiful queen such as myself may be hard to do." Sugar said
CONFESSIONAL: SUGAR
" With Scarlett out of the way last season, Sugar got to take spotlight."
" But after three seasons of this crud, I want a showmance I can fall back on in case I don't win!"
" Plus isn't the wizard just the dreamiest?"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: LEONARD
" Woobly Woo Wobbly Weef! Must get this smell out and brush my teeth!"
Leonard took out a toothbrush and began to brush his teeth intensely.
" I wouldn't wish what I just experienced on my mortal enemy.."
END CONFESSIONAL
" Will Mike make a full recovery from the pinball? How much more sugar can Leonard take? and what will Team Amazon's reward be? Find out after the break." Chris said
commercial break
~ Total Drama Action Trailer~
Japanese symbols appear on the screen right next to the trailer.
"Welcome to TOTAL DRAMA ACTION!" Chris said
"Where there will be kooky filming and somber eating.." Chris said
Shows clip of Sugar in the confessional.
"That was some very nice food, I liked it." Sugar said in a dubbed voice
Shows clip of Shawn in the confessional.
" Do not take any of the conspiracies I say seriously." Shawn said in a dubbed voice
" Total Drama Action, pears and apples of fun." Chris said
~ End Trailer~
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: First Class~
The cast just finished watching a commercial for Total Drama Action.
"... It was interesting to say the least." Georgia said
" That piece of cinematic gold was the Japanese promo. Total Drama is HUGE here!" Chris said
" Okay but last time I checked we speak English, so why did they dub Sugar and Shawn's voices?" Dave asked
" The locals just don't like the sounds of ya'll." Chris said
"But my voice is beautiful as a mule!" Sugar said
" Sure.. Well I hoped you payed attention because you'll be writing, producing and filming your own Japanese commercial! There's a brand new candy hitting the Japanese market!" Chris said
"Total Drama Yum Yum Go Time Candy Fish Tails. I call this the Total Drama Yum Yum Go Time Candy Fish Tails Challenge." Chris said
" You'll be allowed to use anything you can find in the cargo hold. Since Team Amazon won, they get first dibs." Chris said
" Team Magical goes second and Team Lightning gets the scraps." Chris said
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Cargo Hold~
Team Amazon searches for things they could use in the commercial.
Zoey discovers a box of Halloween costumes.
" Ooh we could do a Japanese monster movie!" Zoey said excitedly
"Alright but well need someone big to play the monster." Jasmine said
Zoey, Dave, Ella, and Anne Maria looked at Jasmine.
"Why me?" Jasmine asked
" The only other big person here is Rodney and I don't think he can act." Dave said
" Monsters.. and dolphins swimming together.. Planes!" Rodney mumbled
CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY
" I can't take it anymore! Being on a team with all of these girls is seriously stressing me out."
" I gotta find some way to ignore them!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Rodney picks up a blindfold from the floor and puts it over his eyes.
"There!, Much better.." Rodney said
"Okay so I'll be the monster. Zoey you can be the director. Dave, Ella, Anne Maria you'll be the soldiers attacking me and Rodney.." Jasmine said
The camera turns to Rodney walking around with a blindfold on.
" Will do that I guess. Any objections?" Jasmine asked
" Oh I got some objections! Why do I have to wear this stupid soldier hat, it clashes with my outfit." Anne Maria said
….
"Good let's do this!" Jasmine said
Team Amazon walked off with the supplies they collected.
" No good lousy Jasmine making me wear a hat." Anne Maria said as she walked away
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Cargo Hold~
Team Magical enters the cargo hold.
" Do they have wizards in Japan?" Leonard asked
" No but they have fantasy elements in anime if that counts for anything." Charles said
"Hmm excellent work young paladin. I am thinking of a fantasy anime where the wizard gets his power from eating candy fish tails." Leonard said
" Ooh the wizard's gonna need a love interest!" Sugar said
" Uh..." Leonard said
CONFESSIONAL: LEONARD
" Drat, I can't be the wizard if Sugar's gonna be in the commercial."
" Well director wizard is nice as well but I will need someone to replace me."
END CONFESSIONAL
" It's time for the paladin to become the master, Charles you shall be the wizard!" Leonard said
" Okay." Charles said casually
" What?! Well I don't wanna be the love interest no more.." Sugar said
" Well the wizard needs a love interest, every type of shounen anime has one." Charles said
Charles, Leonard, and Sugar turned towards Dawn.
" I can tell by your auras that this won't end well for me." Dawn said
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Cargo Hold~
Team Lightning entered the cargo hold.
Lightning picks up a basketball.
" Alright I say we have those candy fish tails play basketball!" Lightning said
" Hey jockstrap your not the leader of this team, Now I say we have spinning masks-" Jo said before interrupted
"Sha-hold up if I'm not the leader then why are we called "Team Lightning"?" Lightning asked with a smug grin
" Because you yelled it out, Now I think we should dazzle the judges with some fireworks!" Sky said
"Fireworks?, Girl it ain't the Fourth of July and were not American." Lightning said
"We don't have to be American to celebrate things with fireworks." Sky said
"That's ridiculous! What are you gonna say we don't need syrup to eat pancakes!" Lightning said
As Lightning, Jo, and Sky continued to argue. The camera turned to Beardo, Mike, and Georgia.
" Well with those three... having a disagreement. I guess we will have to take charge." Georgia said
" With experience in the acting field, me and Mike will obviously be the performers. Beardo could you be our cameraman?" Georgia asked
" For sure." Beardo said with a nod
" Good now let's make the most of our time." Georgia said
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Cargo Hold~
Team Amazon worked on their commercial.
"Man this costume is a real pain in the neck." Jasmine said
" Oh I'm so sorry for your pain Jasmine.." Ella said
" It's not painful, it's just really itchy in here." Jasmine said
"Well were almost done with the sets, so please don't trip over them." Dave said
" I may be in a costume but that doesn't make me a total klutz." Jasmine said
Rodney came by with his blindfold on and walked over the set Dave and Ella built.
" Oh no, Mini Tokyo!" Ella said
"Crap now we gotta start over. Can someone watch over Rodney?" Dave asked
"I'll do it." Anne Maria said
CONFESSIONAL: ANNE MARIA
" I may not like the big doofus, but it gets me out of helping with the stupid film so it's a win-lose type of thing."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Cargo Hold~
Team Magical worked on their anime fantasy commercial.
Charles was dressed up as a wizard, Dawn was dressed up as a fairy.
"MARVELOUS! Now after you two defeat the Dark Lord with the power of candy fish tails you ride off into the sunset on your steed." Leonard said
Sugar and Topher walked onto the set, Topher's skin was bleached and his hair was dyed black, his outfit became much more gothic and he carried a wizard staff.
Sugar walked in on all fours as she was wearing a donkey costume.
" This hair dye isn't permanent right?" Topher asked
" I don't know, I forgot to read the label." Leonard said
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" Everyone's gotta take one for the team to ensure safety."
"But ughh… I hate dressing like a goth for some stupid commercial."
" Hopefully Chris doesn't think any less of me for this."
END CONFESSIONAL
~Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Cargo Hold~
Georgia was wearing a traditional Japanese kimono while Mike was wearing a karate gi.
"So what exactly is the genre were going for here?" Mike asked
" It's a dramatic tale about a brother and sister who were separated at birth to only find each other thanks to these candy fish tails." Georgia said
"Sounds cool, so all we have to do now is film it?" Mike asked
"Exactly, Beardo is the camera ready?" Georgia asked
Camera turned to Beardo who had just ate a candy fish tail.
"Did you just eat our prop?" A slightly irritated Georgia asked
"Maybe, depends whether your mad or not.." Beardo admitted shyly
Beardo's face then turned a light green as he headed for the bathroom.
" … I need some air." Georgia said
"Wait we haven't-" Mike said before interrupted
" I NEED some air.." Georgia said sternly
Mike backed off as Georgia left the cargo hold.
CONFESSIONAL: BEARDO
"Yo that fish was nasty, It was like eating sardines covered in oil mixed with dirty gym clothes."
"Blegh….."
Beardo then made a game over noise as he threw up again.
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: First Class~
The contestants gathered in first class.
"Oh Jasmine you don't have to wear that suit anymore, we already finished filming." Ella said
" I know, the stupid thing won't come off and it's giving me a nasty itch." Jasmine said
Chris enters into the room.
"Alright now that your done filming it's time to see if your hard work has paid off, Chef?" Chris said
"Stupid low budget nonsense.." Chef muttered as he turned on the tv
"First up is Team Amazon with "Monster Rampage. Followed by Team Magical's " A Wizard's Tale" then we finish it off with Team Lightning's " Candy Fish Tail Reunion" Chris said
~ Commercial: Monster Rampage~
Jasmine was in her monster costume smashing the cardboard city.
Ella, Dave and Anne Maria arrived wearing the soldiers hats.
" Ugh I look like a loser." Anne Maria said
" Stick to the script." Dave whispered
" Yeah the giant monster is going to kill us. Oh no." Anne Maria said sarcastically
" Not with the power of the Total Drama Yum Yum Go Time Candy Fish Tails!" Ella said
Ella threw a candy fish tail at Jasmine and she exploded.
"There once was a monster who painted the town red, but thanks to candy fish tails that monster is dead!" Ella sang
Ella then began to tear up.
"Those song lyrics were so violent..." Ella said
"See this I why I should've sang." Anne Maria declared
" Yeah but then we would lose." Dave said
" I'm getting real tired of you, whiny!" Anne Maria said angrily
" Cut!" Zoey said as she stopped filming
~ End Commercial~
~ Commercial: A Wizard's Tale~
Dawn and Charles were fighting the Dark Lord.
" Hahaha! You shall never beat me!" Topher said
"He is right Wizard, we are out of plot armor and stamina.." Dawn said
" Fear not young maiden for I have a trick up my sleeve." Charles said
"What is it?" Dawn asked
"Total Drama Yum Yum Happy Go Time Candy Fish Tails!" Charles said
Charles ate one of the candy fish and suddenly became more powerful as his hair became pink.
"It's time to finish this." Charles said
"KAME-HAME-HAAAAAAAAAA!" Charles said as he blasted a huge ball of energy
As he was immersed with pink energy the Dark Lord disintegrated.
"You are so wise and so powerful young wizard. Let us ride off into the sunset." Dawn said
Sugar arrives in her donkey costume, Charles and Dawn hop on her back.
"Yeehaw!" Charles said
Charles and Dawn ride off into the sunset.
~ End Commercial~
~ Commercial: Candy Fish Tail Reunion~
Mike sat down in his karate gi and spoke to a candy fish tail dubbed by Beardo.
"What is it father?" Mike asked
" There is something I want to show you son "cough" before I pass.." The candy fish tail said
Mike saw an envelope on the ground, picked it up and opened it. He saw a picture of Georgia
"Who is this?" Mike asked
"It is your sister who I gave up for adoption years ago, Please see her before I die.. Which is right now." The candy fish tail said
Mike pretended the candy fish tail was dead.
"Father?!" Mike said
Mike then ate the candy fish tail.
" Good work son, I am a part of you now and I can show you da wae.." The candy fish tail said
Mike ran across the cargo hold with a bag of candy fish tails in his hand.
He soon met a woman wearing a kimono dress.
" Hello there, do I know you?" Georgia asked
" You don't but we know each other spiritually." Mike said
Georgia and Mike hugged, and as the film finished they took a bow.
" Da wae…" The candy fish tail said
~ End Commercial~
"Alright some films were interesting some were downright weird. But the decisions not up to me, what are your thoughts Chef?" Chris asked
" Hmm... I'm torn between that emotional heartbreaking story Team Lightning made and The monster movie Team Amazon made." Chef said
"But..." Chef said
Both Team Amazon and Team Lightning waited in anticipation.
" I'll go with Team Lightning, I just love talking candy." Chef said
" So if I'm getting this correctly, Team Lightning wins, Team Amazon gets second and Team Magical loses?" Chris asked
"Yep that anime nonsense was garbage plus I didn't understand half of the references they made!" Chef said
" It was a Dbz reference, It was Dbz!" Charles said as he fell to the ground
"Suck it up newbie, because one of you is getting kicked off." Chef said
Team Magical gulped as they looked at one another.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Editing Room~
Georgia walked into the editing room and met with editors.
"Whoa it's Georgia..." The male intern said with a blush
" Greetings, have you done what I asked?" Georgia asked
" Yep I've erased the footage of you having that conversation with Chef earlier, it won't even make into the final take of the episode." The male intern said
"Excellent now I'm going to go talk to Chef again and reassure some things. Can I trust you'll erase footage of that conversation as well?" Georgia asked
"You got it!, So when are you gonna read my script for my show I REALLY want it produced." The male intern said
"Very soon." Georgia said as she walked away
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Pilot's Room~
Georgia sat in the pilot's room next to Chef.
" I'd like to thank you for keeping your part of the deal, Chef, And here I thought you were going to chicken out." Georgia said
" Why would I be afraid of giving you guys win for that challenge?, I still would've gave you the win regardless. But this was just a one time thing I already tried the alliance thing-" Chef said before interrupted
" Yes spare me the details. I've seen the show before.. I just act like I haven't." Georgia said
"So are you gonna use your connections with Hollywood to get me a REAL ad firm to produce my commercial." Chef said
" As soon as the game is over Chef, you will have your commercial." Georgia said
"Good.." Chef said with a smirk
Chef and Georgia shook hands.
CONFESSIONAL: GEORGIA
" While yes convincing Chef to give us the win for the challenge WAS quite deceitful."
" But our commercial was a trainwreck, Beardo wouldn't stop putting "Ugandan Knuckles" jokes into the script and Mike kept on messing up his lines."
"So I did what had to be done and on the bright side Chef will have a proper commercial to trick people into buying his repulsive candy."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Economy Class~'
Topher, Sugar, Leonard and Charles sat in economy class.
" Okay wizard it's time for to get rid of the hippie.." Sugar said
" Hold that thought, Sugar before we enact on this "plan". I need you to do an urgent quest for me." Leonard said
"Urgent!?" Sugar said
" Yes I need the mucus of a byzantian worm of my powers will slowly fade away. Here's a list of things I need." Leonard said as he handed Sugar a list
"You can count on me wizard!" Sugar said as she walked away
As soon as Sugar was out of sight, Leonard let out a sigh of relief.
"Charles you have to help me vanquish a beast!" Leonard said
"And by that you mean?" Charles asked
" I need your help to vote off Sugar." Leonard said
"Whoa.. I thought Sugar was your girlfriend or something." Charles said
"What gave you that crazy idea?!" Leonard asked
"You two did makeout in the pinball earlier.." Charles said
"It was forced Charles, forced I say!" Leonard said
" Alright, but two votes doesn't sound like enough to get rid of her." Charles said
"Leave that to me.." Leonard said
CONFESSIONAL: CHARLES
" I'm still kind of confused on why Leonard wants to vote off Sugar.."
" But it's not me so I won't question it."
END CONFESSIONAL
Leonard sits down next to Dawn who was meditating.
" Hello-" Leonard said before interrupted
" I already know what you want Leonard." Dawn said
" Oh.. well are you in?" Leonard asked
"Voting off Sugar does sound like a delightful idea but I want one thing in return if I were to vote for her." Dawn said
"And what would that be?" Leonard asked
" I want you to come meditate with me during the mornings. I'd like to examine your aura closer without Sugar around to blockade it." Dawn said
" All I have to do is meditate?, Pfft I levitate for fun that's a piece of cake!" Leonard said
"Good well then I'll see you at the elimination ceremony." Dawn said
CONFESSIONAL: LEONARD
"With Charles and Dawn's votes, The banishment spell is complete!"
"And soon the wizard shall be free of the annoyance known as Sugar!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SUGAR
"Crud I was so busy looking for that byzantian worm I forgot to convince everyone to vote off Dawn!"
"Well there's always next time.."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Exit Room~
Sugar, Topher, Charles, Leonard, and Dawn stood by the exit room as Chris and Chef stood by the door.
"Those staying in the game will receive in flight snacks and if you don't get one you'll be taking the Drop of Shame." Chris said
" The following players are safe..." Chris said
"Leonard!"
"Topher!"
"and... Charles!"
Chef threw bags of peanuts at the three boys.
"And the final bag goes to..." Chris said
Dawn clapped her hands together and prayed as Sugar began to file her nails.
"...….."
"...…."
"...…"
"...….."
"...…."
"...…."
"...….."
"...…."
"...…."
"...…. Dawn!"
Chef threw a peanut bag at Dawn.
" Say what now?!" Sugar said
" I said YOU are going home Sugar." Chris said
"That can't be! I was the star of the show, there ain't no Total Drama without Sugar!" Sugar said
" Chef let's get her out of here before we get a repeat of what happened during season two." Chris whispered to Chef
Chef nodded as he pushed an angrily confused Sugar out of the plane, he then threw her a parachute as she fell.
" Hmm looks like she's saying something.. Nah she's just screaming "Wizard" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: LEONARD
"I didn't think it was a good idea to tell Sugar about the blindside before she left.."
"I saw season two and I don't wanna leave this show in a bodybag!"
" Note to self I should probably cast a restraining order spell when I get home."
END CONFESSIONAL
"Sayonara from Japan, where will our travels take us next? Will Anne Maria actually participate and will Rodney learn how to interact with girls? And what kind of crazy product Chef try to sell? Find out all of this and more on TOTAL DRAMA WORLD TOUR!" Chris said
~ Bonus Clip: Sugar~
Sugar screamed as she fell down, she saw the parachute Chef threw and quickly caught it.
" I'm no dummy, if everything went according to plan it should be Dawn falling right now." Sugar said
"Probably means the wizard betrayed me, but how could I stay mad at my little sugar bunny?" Sugar asked
" All in all not my best season, but Sugar got herself a man! So in the end I technically got something." Sugar said
Sugar fell down into a sumo wrestling arena, two sumo wrestlers were having a fight until Sugar landed and knocked both of them out of the ring.
A crowd of Japanese people cheered as one of them handed Sugar a sash.
" GASP" " A Japanese beauty pageant?! Thank you I'm so proud to receive this award!" Sugar said as she took a bow
That was Chapter Three of Total Drama What If? World Tour if you enjoyed it then drop some reviews and slap some favorites on here.
Spoilers Below
Reason for Elimination; Sugar: Sugar was kind of an obvious boot this season seeing her two good performances from earlier seasons. I didn't really have a huge goal for Sugar, it was pretty much just to help Leonard not be the first one eliminated. And she succeeded in that so I really don't need her for anything else.
Authors Note: This chapter took a while, oof. But overall I still enjoyed it. I checked the reviews and good majority of you guys want Mal in this season, so your wish is my command. Sorry to anyone who didn't want him but I based it entirely off of the reviews. I couldn't find anywhere to fit Mal into this chapter as I wanted to focus a little more on Team Magical. But Mal will be making his big bad debut next chapter.
Elimination Order: B-19th, Max-18th, Sugar-17th,
Votes for Sugar
Leonard- Sugar
Dawn- Sugar
Charles- Sugar
Votes for Dawn
Sugar- Dawn
Topher- Dawn
